RedneckJessi-Thanx for your review.
Papillon-No i mean season 4 lol.The Uk don't get it for ages after the Americans do.You got it earlier because you live closer than i do lucky you.I've seen pictures of them and all i could say for a week after was Oh my God! lol.Keep reviewing!
BlackBloodyTears-(smiles)Thanx 4 telling me how you feel.
StarryTian-Thanx!I thought that the idea had been used lots of times before and i was worried in case it wasn't original.
Xerxes93-It might not be true to you but i think it makes sense don't you think?After all it is a crime to those who worked really hard to write the story and not have anyone say how they felt about it!
CuTtEr.WiTh.A.cAuSe-It's gonna be RobStar for a few chapters but it will certainly change.I can't not change that.RobStar is just too much!Opposites may attract but they obviously haven't met this pairing lol!
a friend-Thanx and i'll try too.
Thanx 4 reviewing.
I have thought about doing a sequel for The Beauty Within and i don't think i will but i am however gonna do another Raven makeover fanfic.If you would like me to do one plz state in your review!
OH AND DON'T WASTE MY TIME OR YOUR'S WITH FLAMING THE PAIRINGS!I AM KEEPING THE PAIRINGS AS THEY ARE.RAVEN WILL BE WITH ROBIN OR AQUALAD YOU VOTE AND JINX WILL BE WITH BB!I DON'T CARE IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE PAIRINGS.IF YOU DON'T LIKE THEM THEN DON'T READ THE FUCKIN' STORY!
SO THERE'S TWO THINGS FOR YOU TOO VOTE ON...WHO RAVEN GETS,ROBIN OR AQUALAD AND IF I SHOULD DO ANOTHER MAKEOVER STORY ON RAVEN.
I'm gonna do Bring It On after i've finished this story but i haven't got a clue how to make the pairings work...if you have any suggestions either email me or state in your review.
Plus i know that this sounds more 21st Century instead of 18th Century and i'll try to work on that lol.
Here's the story...
Bored of the two's none stop flirting she soon packed everything into the chest of drawers next to her bunk bed and went outside to take a stroll...
She gracefully wandered to the deck and was captivated by the view of the ocean.
The sunlight streamed over the crystal blue waters.She glanced down and witnessed the breathe-taking sight of silvery grey bottle-nosed dolphins leaping up out of the waters almost inviting her to play with them.She inwardly laughed at the feeling of pure joy rushing through her veins.Her hair was gently relieved of the velvet ribbon holding it in place letting it be blown away from her striking face in the purest of winds.She heard a similar voice as she turned to find Richard and Kory sharing a passionate kiss.
She gazed slightly in amusement as Kory tried to reach up towards Richard's ponytail only to have her hands brought roughly down to her sides.She heard him say to her something about his hair being tied back as a tribute to his real parents having been adopted by Bruce Wayne when he was very young due to his parents tragic deaths.
Kory just gave him a glare saying how they were to be married in a few month so he should be willing to give her everything including the right to free his hair from that ridiculous ponytail.After a few angry words from the pair of them she stormed of in a huff.
He turned to meet her gentle gaze and returned the questioning look she gave him.She gave a slight smile and turned to leave.She barely got a few metres before she felt someone pulling at her slender wrist.She spun around to come face to face with Richard...still on the balcony and Garth holding her wrist with a gentle smile on his face.
"Forgive me my lady but i noticed you were leaving the deck and i had to introduce myself incase i didn't see you again."his voice hypnotised her causing her to lightlyblush at the effect he was having on her.
"May i ask your name?"he questioned gazing in awe at her raw beauty.
"Raven,Raven Roth"a soft voice whispered coming from the girl's rosey lips.
"It's a pleasure to meet you Raven.My name is Garth just Garth and i noticed that you have to be one of the most beautiful girls on the ship.I was hoping you would join me for dinner later on?"he asked staring intensly at her causing her to blush slightly.He inwardlysmirked at the effect he was having on the angelic beauty.
"Alright"she spoke barely above a whisper giving him a sweet smile making his heart flutter.
"Good.Then i'll meet you at the foot of the stairs then?"he asked.
"Sure"she smiled again.
Meanwhile Richard had a full view of the conversation on the deck and was inwardly fuming at the thought of histarget being invited to eat by another man.
He was planning his revenge unaware of a certain girl gazing at him with sad eyes...
Thanx again to those who have reviewed and remember:-It's a Fanfiction Crime to Read and not Review.
The sooner you review the faster i'll update.
Sorry this is short but i have to watch my new Love Hina DVD and it's already 11pm so...
Cya Bubi
Phoenix