RedneckJessi-I will and thanx for your review.
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BlackBloodyTears-Thanx for your review nd i want November to hurry up and get here so i can watch it already!
CuTtEr.WiTh.A.cAuSe-Aqua/Star interesting idea i'll think about it and i'm gonna do another makeover story.
hafewolfdemon-I'm not gonna stop writing so don't worry about that.
PhantomWriter92-Thankyou and i wonder what he's gonna get into too and i'm the writer so i'd better start knowing lol.
Xerxes93-Thanx and keep reviewing.
Papillon-Garth is Aqualad,Yes you can call me Phoenix or Phoe whichever and i'm doing a new makeover story so look foward to that.Oh and i'd be honoured to write athe story for you just tell me what you want it to be about and i'll do it ASAP.
Thanx to all you who reviewed.
I'm gonna try to update as often as possible but school starts in about a week and i'm really nervous since i'm starting G.C.S.E's(i'm in year 10 or 8th grade.Depends where you're from.)
Anyway i should update about once a week minimum and i'll hopefully make my chapters longer.
Here's the story...
He was planning his revenge unaware of a certain girl gazing at him with sad eyes...
Raven jumped onto her bed with an expression of pure joy which soon turned to horror after reality sunk in.
'Oh shit i can't believe i said yes!I don't have anything to wear oh what have i gotten myself into'she groaned.
A knock on the door snapped her out of her thoughts.
She walked to it and cautiously opened it.
"Um who are you?"she asked politely.An african-american young woman stood there wearing a shimmering yellow and black dress with her dark lucious hair pulled into two buns either side on her head.
"Um hi my names Beatrice but you can call me Bee.I accidently overheard that conversation you had with Garth and that he invited you too dinner with him."
"Yeah..."
"I figured that you would need some help and stuff since you're well not exactly on the rich part of the ship and was hoping you'd let me help you get dressed and stuff if you wouldn't mind that is..."she added hurridly.
"Really?"She asked uncertainly until she recieved a nod from Bee.
"Then what are we waiting for?Let's go already!" Raven stated.
Bee led Raven to her suite.Gold velvet drapes hung over the windows and the walls were a honeycomb colour.The paintings were extremely valuable and there were lots of expensive vases,statues and other items scattered around the room.A large sofa lay in the middle of the room.Bee opened a side door and they came into a room similar style to the first one.It had a large vanity table and a tall mahogany wardrobe that was filled with many dresses shoes etc.Bee led Raven to the centre of the floor and told her to start undressing whilst she found a dress suitable for her.She quickly got undressed and Bee handed her some undergarments and started to put on her corset.She then went intothe wardrobe andcame out with a lilac dress fit for a queen.It was a simple design but was short sleeved edged with white lace.It came with matching lilac silk gloves.The dress had a lavender sash tied at the waist.
"Why are you helping me?"Raven asked Bee.
"Well i never had any sisters or anything when i was a child and my mother died when i was young and when i saw you i guess i saw you as the little sister i never had.I would have loved to have a little sister to dress up and play with and when i saw you with a lonely expression on your face from the balcony and how you had to deal with them two guys i figured you would need some help..."she trailed off.
"Thankyou.I never had any brothersor sisters either"she smiled.
"Just so you know i saw you looking at that guy with that Richard in the docks"Raven smirked changing the subject"
"I uh i..."Bee stammered.
"It's ok if you like him you know"she turned round to meet her gaze.
"It's my hormones i can't control them"Bee slightly whined setting Raven off in a fit of giggles causing Bee to soon follow her.
"Done!"Bee announced now we just have to do your hair and make-up!"
She soon got to work and curled Raven's violet hair and brought it into a bun so that strands hung over her eyes like bangs.She held the bun in place with a hair ornament that had cherry blossom on made from jewels.For her make-up she put on black mascara accentuating her amethyst eyes and violet eyeshadow.She wore light blush and a pale rose lipstick.She also wore her mother's silver necklace with an small amethyst crystal and matching ring.Altough it was old it shone in the light making it look brand new.
Bee then let her look into the mirror and her efforts were rewarded with squeal of delight form the younger girl who gave her an excited hug in return for her hard efforts.
Her amethyst eyes sparkled with intelligence and passion and her lucious lips were in a soft smile that would melt the coldest of hearts.
She helped Bee get dressed for dinner in return since they decided to go down together since Victor siad he'd wait for her with Garth.They quickly put there shoes on and calmly rushed out of the door in excitment since dinner wasnow being served.
They got to the top of the staircase when all of a sudden he came to the foot of the stairs gazing into her eyes...
Stupid i know but oh well...
I'm having slight writer's block with this but i'm starting my other makeover story now so keep an eye out for it...
Remeber:-It's a Fanfiction Crime to Read and not Review!
Cya Bubi
Phoenix xxx