RedneckJessi-Thanx forr saying it's awesome.That means a lot to me!
Xerxes93-The urge is too tempting!Can't control writing!Must break Starfire's heart!lol.When i've came back down to earth i'll think about it!Ooh pretty stars...
BlackBloodyTears-Cannablistic Forks?Who has Cannablistic Forks?Is this some plot to take over the world of cutlery?If so...SPARE ME PLEASE!Like i said before i'm nuts!NO!NOT THE WHITE COATS!I WON'T LET YOU TAKE ME!I HAVE A STORY TO WRITE!THEN AGAIN...TAKE ME PLEASE I BEG YOU!Great now i've got tons of forms to fill out as well as the stories to do...GROAN!
Kikyz-Thanx for your review!
Delirium24-Please don't talk about cherries you're making me hungry.Mmmm cherries!Yum!With Sprinkles!And chocolate sauce!Yummy!
CuTtEr.WiTh.A.cAuSe-You'll find out this chaper and i like owls!I like Tigers,Dragons and Phoenix's more though.Oh and King Cobras but not Anacondas since i saw the movie.Getting eaten by a gigantic snake for a bloody flower seems pointless especially when they drop the flowers into the pool of giant anacondas in the end lol.I'll shut up now...Keep reviewing!
KhmerGurl113-Thanx for your fabulous review!(grins like a maniac whilst hiding dagger about to stab all those who don't review!)Told ya i was crazy!
xStarfirex-Of course!ATTENTION EVERYONE THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO xStarfirex COS SHE WANTED IT TO BE!Remember if you want to have a chapter dedicated to you or want me to write a story 4 you,then plz state so in your review!
ROBRAE SUCKS!ROBSTAR IS AWSOME -Don't like the pairings?TOUGH!I don't give a damn and why did you even bother reading it if you knew what the pairings were?Stupid People think they know everything!
Papillon-I LOVE you!You are my fave reviewer!You are the one who keeps inspiring me to write!Well you BBB,Tecna and StarryTian that is but mainly your long reviews which are gr8 to read!Math is probably one of my fave subjects cos it's way easy plus i spend all lesson talking to me m8s lol and i never get told off!
Monchhichi-Thanx.Describing is easy for me but coming up with a plot is hard!I STILL don't have a plot for this story lol.I just write whatever comes into my head.smiles.
Thanx to all those who reviewed!If you want a chapter dedicated to you then let me know!
Here's the story...
They got to the top of the staircase when all of a sudden he came to the foot of the stairs gazing into her eyes...
Her eyes locked into icey blue orbs.He smiled a dazzling smile at her making her blush slightly.His mouth suddenly dropped to the floor as he saw what she wore.Next to him Victor was trying hard not to babble like an idiot as he saw the peasant girl his best friend Richard was looking at earlier and couldn't believe the transformation.He quickly recomposed himself but soon his mouth was dragging along the floor as he saw Bee whom he'd worked so hard to impress.He looked at her and knew she was his angel.Garth held his arm out for Raven who immediently took it whilst Victor did the same for Bee.
Garth could sense Raven's nervousness as they neared the dining room and he gave her a reassuring smile which she timidly returned.
"What did you do to her Bee?"Victor asked in amazement.
"I helped her since she's my little sister.Well to me she is,plus she deserves some help since Richard and Garth are competing for her love."she smiled at his reaction when she mentioned the two men who were his best friends whom also hated each other.
"I just can't believe how much she looks like a lady!Before she looked like a young woman who still was trying to find her place in the world now she looks like she knows who she is!But you look even more amazing"he whispered in her ear causing her to blush.
"Well those two look like a couple of lovestruck teeneagers"Garth grinned as he spoke to Raven.
"It must be nice for Bee since she has a monster crush on him...oops"she groaned as she just revealed Bee's biggest secret.
"She does?"he exclaimed in amazement.
"Vic has been trying to impress her since we got on the ship"he laughed.
"Well at least they don't have to worry about the other not liking them."she claimed as he agreed.
The four of them made there way inside and the men led the two beauty's to one of the table's where all of there family and friend's were.Unfortunately for Raven so was Richard.
He glare at Garth turned to an amazed gaze as his eyes roamed hercurvaceous frame causing her to glare at him.Garth pulled out a seat for her before sitting next to her giving her a kind smile which she returned with a sweet smile of her own.
He introduced her to his father when he asked about her in which she gave a polite smile to.It amazed everyone when she soon was in a heated debate with Richard's father Bruce Wayne about global warming.It shaocked them even more when she won the debate after Bruce' statement.
"Why should we care about global warming?"he asked her with a grin on his face thinking he'd won.
"Why shouldn't we care?"she smirked at his expression amazed at how a meer peasant girl knew so much about politics.
"Who might i ask is your father?"he questioned her as everyone was chattering.
"Trigon"she replied simply.
"Your Trigon's daughter?"he gasped.
She nodded.
"Amazing!He's my hero after what he's done for me!"he stated.
"Trigon was the one who encouraged me to start Wayne industries!"he exclaiimed.
"Me and your father's companies are the most world renouned and here i am talking to his daughter!It's a honour Miss Roth.To make your aquaintence is an absolute honour!"he proclaimed.
She gave him a shy smile then felt someone's eyes upon her as she turned her head and her amethyst eyes locked with Richard's storm-blue eys as he gave her a seductive smirk in which she happily gave a glare to causing Bruce to lightly chuckle at the enchantress's effect that bestowed Richard who wouldn't take her eyes off her.
Richard scowled when Garth started to talk to Raven but soon turned his attention to Kory and gave her a passionate kiss.
"Excuse me for throwing up"Raven muttered undre her breath still loud enough for Bruce who was sitting2 seats fromher and Garth to laugh heartily whilst Bee and Victor struggled to keep a straight face in which Victor failed miserably.
Suddenly Raven glanced behind her feeling a familiar presence at the doorway.
"I don't believe it!"she gasped in utter shock.
"Who is it?"Bee asked worriedly who was sittting next to her.
"It's...my father"
"Trigon!"Bruce gasped in utter amazement.
Hope this was ok.
I was gonna put Trigon being at the foot of the stairs then i realised it would make a craet ending and decided to put it at the ned after adding a little in.
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The Komodo Dragon Phoenix
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Phoenix Sariano.