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Seriously, people XD;. I suck at updating. So much, in fact, that I have eight stories to write. In a week. And I have limited time on the computer. Add 'chatting to friends' and the thing we call 'Real life', and my life is going to be hectic XD;;. I need love!. Or not. ANYWAY!!!
DISCLAIMER: None of the characters in this story are mine. They all belong to the maker of Naruto, Masashi Kishimoto.
WARNING: This contains shounen-ai/yaoi. Meaning that it's boyXboy love and sex. The good stuff XD.
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: ): Glad you think the story is interesting, albeit confusing! And I will, eventually XP. And Hinata IS the best! Thanks for the comment!
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Yuen-chan: Damn ;;. Well, you caught up, hey? And, yes, It's HINATA!! -dun dun dun-. Sorry XD;. Here's the explanation for Hinata!
Me: Cliffie's suck, but I couldn't resist XP. And it isn't going to tie up, QUITE yet XD. YAY! -takes and stores- XP. I'm outta the writer's block!
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Ok People! I'm sorry to say, this is the last chapter for review remarks! It will progress the story faster! I will just say thank you to all the people who reviewed!
And, if any of you noticed (Which I'm sure you didn't) I revised the first five chapters!
Put me Out, Chapter 6
Friendships last when each friend thinks he has a slight superiority over the other.
- Honore Debalazac
God, no, he wasn't awake.
Awake was when you were alive and avoiding the demons that lived in your dreams and nightmares. Awake was when you fought in battles against another ninja, both of you bleeding and sweating and wishing the other was dead. Awake was when you were completely informed of the surrounding area, knowing who was around you, as well as where you were. Awake was when the only thing you were aware of was one person's voice, aware of the arms around you, holding you in a protective gesture over something that wasn't even that person's.
No, he wasn't awake. He was dreaming, with this demon simply invading his mind and confusing his thoughts, disorienting him and making him scream.
"Naruto?" The voice resounded in the air, ripping apart his insides when he heard his name being spoken so softly, so roughly, tearing him into little pieces with the simple thing that this person had uttered.
God, if he was awake, then why could he feel everything - all the fear and confusion and utter uselessness - raging in his heart?
"Yeah, Sasuke?"
God, he shouldn't have said this person's name. That made it real, made him know, forced him to know that this was really happening. Happening too fast for him to understand, because he could only know that this was real, not understand it, and, fuck, couldn't he understand it instead?!
A yawn halted his thoughts, drifted over his ear and over his cheek to land on his mouth, an indirect kiss that made him scrunch up his face to avoid repeating the action the other boy had first made. And that made it even more real, because you only repeated things like yawns and kisses and screams in real life, right?
"Are you sore, Naruto?"
He kept on saying his name, and it made him shiver, and the arms around him tightened more to help him warm up, even though he wasn't cold, even though this place was hotter then the sun, which seemed to be seven miles out of the window in this ghost of a room. It was only then he realized, noticed fully, that throbs of pain were dancing up and down his lower back, marching dutifully in a line that disappeared by the time it reached the middle of his back and reappeared at his lower back, right where his tailbone was. It kept on repeating and repeating and it made him dizzy, because it reminded him of the duplicate lines of cold, cold eyes that followed him up and down the market, up and down the academy halls, up and down everywhere. And it hurt so very, very much, because he was used to those kinds of eyes, but what about the kind that looked like they cared?
".No."
He had to lie, scrape some dignity together, because he needed to look tougher, have a bit of a brave face as the other left him, laughing. Because that was what Sasuke would do, right? Leave him alone? Like everyone else would, or he'd leave them alone, because he would die or get fed up with everything, even though he never would. But, wouldn't Sasuke leave him? After he did that? Yes, he would leave with mocking red eyes, he was sure of it.
"Liar. I'm going to get us something to eat, OK? You're hungry, right?"
The voice was so honestly questioning, honestly caring, that he actually believed, for a second, that the raven-haired boy wouldn't leave him, and he had had sex with Sasuke on purpose, and that he was smiling right now. But when he noticed that he wasn't smiling, that his face muscles were slack and straight, he knew that he hadn't had sex with Sasuke on purpose, and Sasuke didn't care that much about him and that this boy would leave him.
A faint nod to follow the depressing thoughts from him, and arms, pale and scar-free and too bare for his liking, moved out from above him and under him, and he had a whole bed to lay out on now, because the weight behind him disappeared, and Sasuke disappeared completely for a second until he reappeared, and he had to take in a complete breath, because the air swirling past his lips wasn't even really air it seemed like, just little bursts of poison that left him from the very core of his being.
He had a full view of Sasuke, all soft skin taut over tough muscles and creamy white, contrasting the dark black, all the way down to his silky hair to his big feet. In his back he could see bones, but not enough so that Sasuke would be considered ugly or skinny or anything like that. Sasuke looked almost perfect, except for him being so bare, and red took over his face and the heat that was in his stomach once, caused by the same person (he hated to admit his), returned faintly, another dull throb, but a better one. Had that… had Sasuke really… had sex with him?
This person seemed too... unreachable to do that too him.
Red-eyes were on him, an amused glance to his confused, blue stare and a chuckle, too happy and deep too be considered a raven-winged demon's laugh. Way too much emotion for Sasuke, because Sasuke was supposed to be cold and hardly filled with emotion, but it proved to be the same person, same demon laugh and same voice when it filled the room with the blood pounding in his ears and the blood on his face. "I'll be right back, Naruto. I'll get you breakfast."
That seemed too nice for Sasuke, because nice was someone who did stuff for you all the time, never complained when you asked them to do something, never called you names or tried to fight with you. And he was reminded briefly of black hair, white eyes, kind of like Sasuke with his contrasting black and white, but different, because it was a different black and white, and, God, he needed to stop thinking of contrasts, because he was Sasuke's contrast, wasn't he?
Noticed that he was alone with his thoughts now, alone with the pain marching up and down his spine and the faint heat in his stomach, curling around his seal, and he wondered if the Kyuubi had felt everything, every single rocking and moaning and screaming moment. He blushed more at that thought, because that was embarrassing, and he was an embarrassing host, so much more then before now, because wasn't a demon supposed to be the one pleasuring the other? Sasuke was a demon, in his own way, so he guessed, confusedly and with mixed logic that it was okay. Okay in the sense that it made sense, not in the sense that he liked being the one pleasured. But he didn't, right? That was the reason he was sticky, and so were the bed sheets, and so was everything, and he needed to stop thinking now, like he promised himself before, because the pain was starting to dance across his skull in thin wisps of a twisted ballet.
He curled around his stomach and seal, eyes closing and blush still on his face as a revelation was made to him, that his body was hotter then before, after Sasuke had left.
God, yes, he was awake now.
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"Hinata! I can't believe you're on our team! That's awesome!!"
It was awesome! They finally had someone else to share the work with, and he didn't have to be alone with Sasuke anymore, and Kakashi couldn't make any more perverted comments! This was great!
Sasuke finally reached the place where the three were standing, Naruto waving his hands around excitedly while Hinata blushed, and Kakashi smiling in a hidden way. Something painted over the raven-haired boy's face, an angry scowl as he looked over at the other two teens, though it went unnoticed as the blonde whirled around and practically yelled at Kakashi.
"So, Hinata is our surprise, hey? That's an awesome surprise! That means we can do everything easier too, hey? And, hey, Sasuke, you should all buy us Ramen to celebrate!!" This statement was yelled, blue eyes turning to the more stoic of the two.
"You wish, dobe." The rude answer was aimed at the blonde, and the boy's face faltered into an angry glare.
"I'm not a dobe! And why not?! You have a big house to live in, so you could probably afford it!"
"I don't want to pay for you. You'll take all my money."
"No I won't! I promise! I'll only have two bowls of Miso, I promise!"
Before the refusal and pleading could continue, the silver-haired Jounin broke into it, hands landing on both of their shoulders as they half-glared at each other. "Now boys, be quiet. I'm sure you want to know the reason why Hinata is on our team now?"
Naruto blinked while Sasuke looked up questioningly at their teacher, the thought presenting itself once it was said. "Well, yeah. Why did Hinata come on our team?"
The older man's eye curved upward into a happy expression, the hands on both of their shoulders patting them and then letting go, to walk over to Hinata and doing the same thing he had done to the boys.
"While, since Sakura left under… an unfortunate request," This was his way of saying that pink-haired girl's parents had made a bad decision. "Hinata's team captain, Yuuhi Kurenai, and I have decided that it would be best that we trade our girls, since Sakura is still wanting to become a ninja, though a medical one."
Sasuke nodded and Naruto shrugged, hands going up to hold behind his head. "Ok, I get that. Did you see Sakura-chan, too, before she went to Hinata's old team?"
The man nodded, hands shoved deep in his pockets now. "Yes, I did. And she told me to say hello to you two."
It was then that Hinata finally spoke, hands playing nervously with each other as white eyes looked between the three males shyly. "Sa-Sakura said that she would meet you guys at the Ramen shack later, if she could get away from Tsunade, her parents, and Kurenai-sensei's team. She says she misses you, too, and hopes you both are doing good."
Naruto broke into a wide grin and yelled, the sound loud and happy. "Cool! Tell her I said hi next time you see her Kakashi-sensei and Hinata, 'kay? And that's another reason Sasuke should take us all out for Ramen! And buy Hinata an extra bowl because she's our new team mate!"
"Say hi for me too, and I'm not buying you Ramen. Buy your own, dobe." The cold voice surprisingly offered, the boy responsible imitating Kakashi by shoving his hands in his pockets and ignoring the pout that Naruto sent him. He looked levelly at Hinata instead, giving her a death glare.
The white-eyed girl started to fidget even more, if possible, and looked down at the ground, a small frown on her face.
Naruto stopped pouting and snorted, completely missing the glare that Sasuke had sent his new team mate and Hinata's increase in fidgeting. A wide grin spread over his face after he realized what Sasuke had said, and he poked the onyx-eyed boy in the arm, laughing.
"You're going to kill Sakura-chan that way, Sasuke! She'll just die after Kakashi-sensei or Hinata-chan tells her that the great Sasuke said hi!" A loud laugh erupted from the blonde boy and he had grinned cheekily at the boy, fluttering his eye lashes in imitation of the girls that seemed to follow the black-haired boy everywhere. "And I'll take Hinata out for Ramen for celebration, then, if you're so mean!!"
A blush appeared on the pale girl's face, hands clasping together as she looked timidly at the loud blonde. "N-No! It's al-alright! I'm fine! I don't n-need you to buy me ramen to c-celebrate!!!"
The blue-eyed boy snorted, putting his hands behind his hair and half-heartedly glaring at the girl. "I want to. Plus, you're our new teammate. So we should celebrate!"
"Al-alright." The girl blushed even more, agreeing after a moments hesitation.
"Sweet! I guess I'll buy for Kakashi-sensei, too, because he's always spending money on perverted books!"
"Ah, Naruto! That's in-"
"Yeah, yeah! I know! But I won't buy anything for Sasuke, because he keeps on calling me names!!!"
The boy being ignored snorted, glaring at the bold teen. "Fine with me. I hate Ramen, anyway."
"How could you hate ramen?!?! It's like… the food from Heaven!"
"Shut up, Dobe!"
"What?!?!?! I will not sh-"
"I hate to break up this little quarrel, boys, but we still got a mission to do, even though I just gave you a new 'present'."
"Aw, shit!"
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Finally! Done! But I kept on doing dialogue O.o. Prolly cuz we're doing that in LA, even though that's… so... grade 5-ish.
Anyway! I don't think there's much notes, but if you guys are confused about whose saying what in the dialogue (I don't think there's a reason you should be O.o), just ask! So. Yeah. Sorry for the short chapter and long updated, but school sucks! Plus, I procrastinate XD;;.
And one more thing! HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY KYUUBI-CHAN! She had her birthday . So, happy days!!! XD! (Kyuubi-kun: it's KUN, dammit! Bah, fine… you can call me chan… I s'pose)
And I might not be able to write as much for about three months ;;. I know I'm always doing this, but it's because my cousins are coming to live with us, and they would just stare at my writing and be freaked out, so. Yeah ;. They're not very open-minded O.o. But anyway!
Ho Ho Ho! Happy HALLOWEEN! (Kyuubi-kun: Or "Happy Samhain" as is said by me - there the same thing. Oh yeah... Samhain is pronouced "sahm-men." Don't ask, I don't know why. I blame the Celts!)
XD. Please review!