Night of Pain Chapter 11, a naruto fanfic

Disclaimer: Blah Blah you know the drill…I own neither Kakashi or Hiei (though I wish I did) and none of the others except for my characters...Kuso...

Title: Night of Pain

Chapter 11

Ok I left you off with an unnatural sugar high wrestle match lol…and here it starts with your wake up call.

"WAKE UP! WAKE UP! WAKE UP!" Mya calls in front of the door impatiently.

"I'm up, I'm up, damn why must I get up now? Why?" you mumble while trying to get out of Kakashi death grip and put Sasuke comfortably down without waking either of them. But you unsuccessfully awaken Kakashi with your movement.

"What time is it?" Kakashi asks while rubbing his uncovered eyes.

"Don't know but the human alarm clock just went off…" you sigh as you start to cough a lot while holding your throat in pain.

"Oh god damnitt my throat…" you say in a raspy throaty voice.

"Are you alright Kizu?" Kakashi asks while you continue to cough and wake up Sasuke in your coughing fit. He feels your head and says "You seem to be very warm…hmm…" he thinks as you say to Sasuke in a raspy voice. "It's alright honey go back to sleep…" while rubbing his head.

Suddenly Kakashi picks you up and carries you to your room to lay you down while your coughing fit goes on.

"Now stay there and I'll ask around for some soup ok?" he says laying you down and wrapping you in your blanket.

Somehow he finds some soup and takes it to you.

"Hey Kizu eat this." Kakashi says then looks down to your now sleeping form He's happy to not see you racked with coughs anymore but alas he must awaken you from your slumber.

"Kizu…Kizu…wake up…you need to eat this come on…up now…" he says while lightly shaking you only to see you being slowly awakened from your dream-like state.

"What is it? Can't I get some sleep around here?" you rasp out and start coughing as Kakashi hands you a bowl of ramen. (Where he found ramen in demon world I wouldn't know but he found it non-the-less.)

"Come on stay up and eat this then I'll leave you alone to sleep…" Kakashi says in a soothing tone of voice.

"Ok but who said I wanted you to leave?"

"Ok so I stay if you eat this…Deal?"

"Deal…" you, say as you look to the food sickened by its very existence for your stomach isn't doing to well either.

(A couple minutes later)

"Ok I'm done…" you say pushing the bowl aside as you look up at Kakashi.

"Alright then." He says taking the bowl from you and settling down more into his chair.

After a couple of seconds in silence you start getting up out of your bed and heading for your closet.

"What are you doing? You should rest…" Kakashi says concern etched onto his face.

"Yeah I know…but I'm bored so screw resting Ima get up and do stuff…"

"What sort of stuff?"

"Umm I haven't thought of it just yet but something will come to me…"

"…"

You grab some clothes out of your closet and head for the washroom. Then you turn and say. "I'll be out in a minute…"

"Alright"

You close the door and start to pull off your Pj's and pull on the clothes you have chosen. They turn out to be a mesh top (like Itachi's in the anime) that's dark blue and a black corset top over top of that. You also have fishnet dark blue tights and a pair of baggy black and blue pants riddled with holes.

Then you pull out your brush and start brushing your ebony hair, which cascades down your lower back. And you decide to leave it down today and leave the washroom once you have accomplish all your daily morning tasks.

"Alright I'm done…" you smile and say in the direction Kakashi is in when you noticed he wasn't there.

All of a sudden you feel arms loop around your lower waist and look up into Kakashi's eyes.

"Ma don't you look good my fine lady." (Ma means well) Kakashi states with his I curving up into a smile.

"Hmm and what do you say to some light exercises huh Kaka-kun?" you ask hopefully thinking about getting out of this damned castle today 'Please let him say yes. Please!'

"I think it would be all right if you're feeling up to it…" He says nodding once.

"Hai it would be great to get some exercise into my body right now and same for you lazy." You answer him grinning up at him.

"Alright then shall we?" he says offering his arm out to you.

"We shall." You say hooking your arm into his. (AN: I'm sorry Anna but I just had to add this lol)

Ok you and Kakashi now entered a large clearing basically used for training.

"Ok I want you to show me what you got." Kakashi said.

"Ok then I won't hold back," you say powering up. While you power up a dark blood like red seems to engulf you (it's your chakra) and you switch on your Sharingan (copy wheel eye) and watch Kakashi intently as he lifts his hitai-ate (fore head protector) from over his eye and reveals his own three comma Sharingan while yours were both three as well. (AN: I shall tell you about what the comma's mean at the end of the chapter if you don't already know that is.)

"Ah so I see you've trained while I was away Kizu-chan."

"Hai, hai I have."

"Well good work I see you've developed the ever so famous Mangekyou Sharingan (Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eyes)…"

"Yes I have but I shall not use such a deadly move today…" you say thinking of who you'll be using it on first.

"Woo I'm glad about that cause that move ain't no joy ride I can tell you that…" Kakashi says letting out a breath of air he didn't notice he was holding. You look at him questioningly as he says this. (You don't know that Itachi has used it on Kakashi before.)

"Never mind lets just get this fight started…" he says while you pull your CD player from behind your back (it's a small boom box) pull out an unlabeled CD place it inside and start playing it.

It turns out its "Dead Bodies Everywhere" by Korn playing one of your favorite bands. (AN: This is currently on my xanga site) And the fight has begun with you charging towards Kakashi with your fist reeled back ready to strike.

"Come on, step inside, and you will realize.
Tell me what you need, tell me what to be." It starts off.

Kakashi blocks and twists your arm behind your back.

"What's your vision?
You'll see, what do you expect of me?
I cant live that lie."

You break free and knee him in the stomach and stand there to let him catch his breath and retaliate himself.

"Hey!
I've sick mom,
With a fucked dad.
Dealing with your life.
Dead bodies everywhere.
You!
Really want me to be a good son. Why?
You make me feel like no one." The chorus screams and you listen.

He surprisingly takes less time to retaliate and strikes you with a kick to the back of your knees making them fall out from under you.

"Let me strip the plain, let me not give in.
Free me of your life, inside my heart dies.
Your dreams never achieved, don't lay that shit on me.
Let me live my... life."

You quickly regain your balance and circle your leg around and kick his legs out from underneath him.

"Hey!
I've sick mom,
With a fucked dad.
Dealing with your life.
Dead bodies everywhere.
You!
Really want me to be a good son. Why?
You make me feel like no one."

Then you jump atop him and hold his arms down straddling him so you have access to him fully then you nip at his ear somewhat shocking him and yourself.

"You want me to be, something I can never ever be!

You want me to be, something I can never ever be!"

He reaches up and nips at your lower lip to say 'I'm good with this!' in his own way.

"Hey!
I've sick mom,
With a fucked dad.
Dealing with your life.
Dead bodies everywhere.
You!
Really want me to be a good son. Why?
You make me feel like no one."

And you lower your head to let your lips be enthralled by the ever so enticing Kakashi's experienced lips.

"Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!
Dead bodies everywhere!" the song ends and moves onto the next track of the nameless CD.

You pull back from the kiss for air and pull his mask (which covers his lower face) down so you can have access to his neck and trail light kisses down to his lower neck while he enjoys the special treatment.

"Something takes a part of me.
Something lost and never seen.
Every time I start to believe,
Something's raped and taken from me... from me."

You trail your way back up and start to lick his lips and ask for entrance that he gladly allows and lets you delve inside wrestling for dominance.

"Life's got to always be messing with me. (you wanna see the light)
Can't they chill and let me be free? (so do I)
Can't I take away all this pain. (you wanna see the light)
I try to every night, all in vain... in vain."

And eventually you win for you are more stubborn then you put yourself up to be.

"Sometimes I cannot take this place.
Sometimes it's my life I can't taste.
Sometimes I cannot feel my face.
You'll never see me fall from grace
Something takes a part of me.
You and I were meant to be."

You then move your hands to his which are currently massaging your hips and pulling you closer.

"A cheap fuck for me to lay (AN: Anna's line w00t!)

Something takes a part of me.
Feeling like a freak on a leash. (you wanna see the light)
Feeling like I have no release. (so do I)
How many times have I felt diseased? (you wanna see the light)
Nothing in my life is free... is free"

Then you trail your hands down to his back and start your massaging all while keeping lip contact.

Then you start to trail back down to the side of his neck and suck at his "spot" which causes a moan from him.

"Boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema"

You leave a light bruise at that spot and start back up his neck again while he picks you up and pushes you against a random tree in the vicinity.

"Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Da boom na da mmm dum na ema
Go!"

Once you make it back up to his mouth he takes charge and starts to dominate over you and wins the little wrestle match between yours and his tongues. And then he pushes you harder up against the tree and starts trailing his way down your neck till he finds your "spot" located where your neck meets your shoulder.

"So...fight! something on the...
Fight...some things they fight
So...something on the...
Fight...some things they fight
Fight...something of the
No...some things they fight"

And he starts his sucking and caressing there as you did to him before causing you to moan.

"Fight...something of the...
Fight...some things they fight"

He as well leaves a mark in your "spot" as a little present for you to bitch about later. (AN: LOL) and trails his way back up to your mouth and gains entrance and this continues for a couple of minutes before you both have to stop and take a breather from all the things done in the past few minutes.

"Something takes a part of me.
You and I were meant to be.
A cheap fuck for me to lay
Something takes a part of me.
Part of me...
Part of me...
Part of me...
Oh..." the song ends as you and Kakashi lay there breathing deeply.

(After a minute or so)

"Ha well that was interesting…" you say with a grin on your face as you stand up.

"Yeah I'll say…" Kakashi answers, shaking his head to get most of the bad thoughts out.

"Well I guess we should be heading back before anyone notices us missing and searches for us…" you suggest starting to walk in the direction of the castle.

"Yeah…" Kakashi sighs looping an arm around your waist as he walks beside you.

Fin.

AN: ok that's it for this chapter sorry I haven't updated in awhile I've had school to deal with (glares in the general direction of where that so called hell is located) and yeh...thanks for the reviews by the way and i'd love to have more from you all if it's another good long ass chapter you'd like…ok the explanation of the Sharingan comes next. Sharingan means the copy wheel eye. It has three "levels" one of which they have two 'commas' or comma shaped black dots around the black pupil, which rotate when it is used to see through a basic genjutsu. The second level is generally two commas in both Sharingan eyes allowing the user to see and or follow any move in taijutsu (the use of hand to hand combat in battle), genjutsu (the use of illusions in battle) and or ninjutsu (the use of ninja techniques in battle). The third level is when there are three black commas around the pupil and allows you to use a move called Mangekyou Sharingan (Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eyes) which allows you to put your opponent into your own custom made world and tourcher your opponent for up to 72 hours in this world while really its only 2 or 3 seconds in the real world which usually results in your opponents untimely death. Itachi has used this technique before on Kakashi and lucky he survived. Everyone else besides Sasuke has died other wise to the technique for it lets you experience any type of pain mentally so that it feels as if its happening though in reality it is only a very, very high level genjutsu. And that's the info I shall provide for the Sharingan this time I hope it helps in future chapters. NINJA OUT!