I've decided to make the beginning and end notes BOLD instead of my normal italics. Probably easier to read. Anyway, this is another short chapter. Many of my chapters are short. But my next fanfiction I'm making them LONG.
Chapter 16: Winds and Whirlpools
Kyoumi tried to swim to the surface, but couldn't make it. She looked around to try and see if she was close to the surface, but it was so dark in the lake that you couldn't tell.
But then Kyoumi transformed again. Her hair and tail became as blue as the water, as did her eyes and kimono. She realized that she could now breathe under the water as well and could control it.
I can control air AND water? I never realized I was so powerful! thought Kyoumi as she made herself shoot through the water.
The surface of the water shook and it shot up, carrying Kyoumi on top of it. She smirked and rose up on a platform of water and threw some water at Sesshoumaru, using it to try and drown and stop him. Once Sesshoumaru was soaked he glared at Kyoumi and ran off, calling Rin to come with him on the two-headed dragon thing.
Kyoumi relaxed and the water she stood on slowly went back into the lake. She sighed and landed in the water and looked at everyone staring at her.
"I didn't know about this until now," Kyoumi said as she started to swim back to the shore.
Oh my God... That chapter is SOOO short. I have to put another chapter up after this one, right away. Oo; Sorry it's so tiny. In related news, I finished writing another fanfic where the chapters are much longer, but it has less chapters. It has my friend and I in it, so it's really funny. I'm working on the sequel right now, and that's why I didn't update lately. The sequel is a bit more serious and mature than the first one.