Too late, my love for those that don't do French. Correct me if the grammar is wrong!

Basically Téa declaring her undying love for Yami, or me declaring my undying love for any one of the imaginary characters I have become infatuated with.


C'est trop tard, mon amour

Can't you see that my heart is breaking?
Eternally locked, my body is shaking
I yearn for your kiss, for your love, for your bite,
For us to be together as the Shadows of the Night
I would walk to the end of the world for you
Dive to the bottom of the pits of Hell for you,
I follow in your steps, shimmer in your dreams
Holler in your thoughts, though I am not what I seem.
Just an innocent once with no concepts in my mind
Until I saw you, I realized how I'd been blind.
Too late now, you have me caught in your spell,
Like a butterfly in a web, my soul is yours to sell
All I want is one lock of your hair,
One hint of your scent, I can track you to your lair.
Too late now, for you to have realized
Too late now, for you have me hypnotised.


Yay or nay? Did it convey the point across? I thought I'd do something more relaxing after the Jekyll/Hyde-Hikari/Yami poem!