Hey guys. Sorry I took so long.
First off, I wanted to thank you all for the constructive criticism you've all given me. I know some of you have read a "story" by a person, who shall remain nameless. I had reviewed one of this person's stories, very nicely and respectfully and she went and said horrible stuff about me in her profile and publicly embarrassed me, which is why she is remaining nameless, I will not embarrass her like she did me. Anyway, since she said some horrible things about so many people I wanted to make sure you all know how much I appreciate your constructive criticism. I read some of the other reviews and some of the other reviewers kind of defended me by saying that they read the other reviews and they weren't bad. So if any of those people are reading this, thank you. Thank you all so much for reading and helping me become a better author! I, unlike some people, will appreciate the criticism because you are all truly helping me! Thanks, and here's next chapter!
Dally and Callie were at the Dingo.
"May I help you?" The waitress asked.
"Yeah." Dally said. "Gimme a burger with everything on it." The waitress wrote it down.
"And you?" She asked Callie.
"Uhm…I want a Pepsi and chicken nuggets and fries." She wrote it down then looked at Dally.
"You didn't say what you wanted to drink. What do ya want?"
"Coke." She wrote it down, nodded and left.
"Hey, Winston!" Someone called, walking over.
'Who's that?' Callie thought. She didn't recognize him.
"Call, this is my friend Tim Shepard." She nodded. Of course she knew who Tim Shepard was. Who didn't? She'd just never seen him face to face. Tim sat there for a while when someone else called Dally's name. She recognized this one. It was Sodapop Curtis.
"I-I'll be right back!" She hastily said and ran to the bathroom.
Guys, I know it's sucking and short and all, but I PROMISE it will get longer and much better as soon as she gets caught which is next chapter. Please bear with me, and tell me what you think, and how I can improve.
Thanks,
Ale