Flaming- "uh…"

Kai- "What's wrong with you?"

Flaming- "No one reviewed…."

Kai- "Well, you just have to give it awhile…."

Flaming- "Why?"

Kai- "You just need to wait for your reputation to build up."

Flaming- "But I've seen other stories that have 3 chapters and they have like 15 to 38 reviews."

Kai- "Well, that's probably not their first story, and I bet they've been doing this for a while."

Flaming- "I hope so…."

Kai- "Ok, you guys, here is another one of Flaming's chapters. So review, or she might not keep this up, it kind of breaks her spirit you could say. In other words lose her dream… watch it go down the drain, and all she can do is watch."

Flaming (sarcastically)- "Thanks Kai."

Kai- "Whatever, you'll thanks me later… so please review!"

The Enemy

Never ending pools of aqua stared up at the rocky ceiling come why can't the sun rise… I'm so sick of this; I can never get a good night sleep. I'm always thinking when I try to go to sleep I keep thinking which makes it harder. And now that we are stuck on the island, we'll I guess there is a lot flowing through my mind. Uh, I hate it, why can't everyone wake up… I hate being alone, and I am alone. I'm always alone, I have no friends, no likes me, I stand out, people don't like me because I am different. But is different a good thing. I hope so, cause I am.

This is impossible, how am I supposed to sleep? How can they sleep? Uh that's it I'm going out for a walk I can take it. Kai stood up and started to head to the exit of the cavern. He was just about there when a quiet voice asked, "Kai… where are you going?"

It was Carrie, how could she be awake. "Out, why are you up?" Kai asked concerned.

"Couldn't sleep," she replied silently.

"Whatever," he remarked as he headed out.

"Wait," Kai paused and turned around, "Can I come too?"

He thought for a moment before he answered, "Sure."

Carrie followed him out the door, to the beach. As they walked along the sandy shore, Carrie suddenly spoke up, "Hey Kai," he turned to look at her, "Thanks." And with that the two strolled in complete silence along the coast.

A little later that morning-

"Pass the mustard… ok who took the butter… and the ketchup… do you have the maple syrup… these pancakes are going to be…great," Tyson mumbled in his sleep as he licked his lips.

Everyone looked at him who a disgusted face and they all thought who put mustard and ketchup on pancakes. But no one said a word. When breakfast was ready Tyson woke up and everyone began to eat.

Soon after breakfast everyone was walking around in the forest looking for so way out of the nightmare. Suddenly out of nowhere a screen showed up.

"Hello children," the dark voice welcomed, "Welcome to my island, I hope you are enjoying your stay."

"Enjoy our stay? How do we get off the rock," Tyson shouted enraged, to think, someone thinks that they are having fun.

The figure on the screen laughed, "Why that is quite easy, hand over your bitbeasts and everything will turn back to normal."

"Give up our bitbeasts? What makes you think we are going to do that?" Maria barked at the newly found rival.

"Why dear child it's that, or this, and there will be more to come, so what's your decision?" the evil man countered as he twisted their minds till it was something far beyond confusion.

"Not in you're dreams," Amy yelled.

"As you wish," with a snap of his fingers the screen disappeared and a swirling vortex left in its place. The twister sucked them and they were suddenly transported to a new land….

Flaming- "I'm sorry it's short, but hey I'm updating a lot. I hope everyone will start reviewing a lot. And to those who do… I just wanted to say thank you so much it means a lot to me."

Kai- "Please review!"