Hello, my fans! (And flame-reviewers),
Good old Aries is back after a good while. Hope you missed me. Look, I know I've preached this over and over now, but "The Truth About Kira and Lacus" will be coming back. I promised everyone to have a Chapter 5, featuring an Athrun/Cagalli lemon written by a friend of mine, also a member of and not by myself; just for good measure.
Here's my new idea. I am going to completely rewrite and recreate "The Truth". I know that in Japan the sequel Gundam SEED Destiny is on its last episode left and therefore coming to a close. With all of that happening, understanding my story may be difficult, but once again: it's just a "what-if" story that takes place after SEED. However, I believe my story should be rewritten for a few main reasons…
1.) Lacus and Kira's relationship is way too sexual. I can admit that this is very wrong. I screwed up. I know that basically my entire story is just one chapter having two 16-year-old Protagonists admitting their love for each other after a war, but then making love constantly for three more chapters; and that's my story. Typical bad writing. Kira and Lacus are not like that. I've had many complaints about this. I'm more mature now (turned 17 years old five days ago, as a matter of fact) and trust me: when I rewrite this there WILL be lemons; but not all the time. Maybe near the end or something.
2.) Flay's role in the story:I originally wanted Flay to come back as her spirit in order to "get in the way" of the developing Kira/Lacus relationship, but it all ended up with Kira getting rid of her and saying no in just one chapter. WRONG! I want Flay to be a pest in that way, not just gone in one chapter. Don't worry, however, Kira and Lacus will end up together, and Kira will finally bid farewell to Flay. FOR GOOD.
NOT ENOUGH UPDATING:Alright, this is very bad. I can also admit that I did not have the time to update my story as much as I wanted. Very sorry for that, and I mean it. If I rewrite this story, the chapters will be much longer and there will be a better plotline. I'll have plenty in one chapter that will last for updating time at a later date. Thanks.
Anyone can plainly see that "The Truth" was a mediocre story. I'm the author! I admit it! What I'm going to do is rewrite it because I can really see its potential.
Be looking for Chapter 1 soon! Thank you, my fans!
-KiraAries