Thanks to:
CherryBlossom0101: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing. And I'm sorry, but with the majority on the vote, I guess I have to make this an AU, but if you want, I'll make this story (revised, edited, the works) into a magic ficcy either during or at the end
Soleil666: well...thanks for the long reviews....
Okay...your first point...uh you know like a warden type person? A person
like in jails that basically watches all over everyone...like that. I
may have used the word wrong in my sentence, but Word only does so
much... shakes head
Second point: The little "accident" thingy happened when Sakura was
about 15...that's where I think I'm going to put it. Her dad did not
become a professor instead he is just a digger dude...er...yeah...so he just
pops around when he is needed...er yeah...Touya is out of college...that
explains that...uh...You know how Tomoyo's family is like dead rich? Her
family moved to America! to set up another branch of the Daidouji Toy
Company. The thing about the police...will be tied into the story...Now
the house and the vandalizers...That will also be tied into the
story...and I said that the house was far but not too far from the
neighbors...or civilization....
Er...Third point: I think...well yeah...Syaoran hasn't been to Tomoeda...I
think...well in this story he HASN'T met Sakura or anyone else besides
Eriol...cause I made them cousins. And him finding the Mental Home/
Hospital...it is a miracle.... Go Syaoran!
To your other review (the one for the author's notice): NO! You
weren't rude.... I'm actually really glad you're giving me advice.
I'm sort of a new writer so...it helps a lot! Thank you! And, not to be
mean, I had thought about some things. I.e.: the villain and the
storyline. And sticks finger in air I conclude, there is a way to
make this a magic ficcy. Hehehe I can so imagine myself doing that...
Uhhh...I don't have a beta-reader...in fact, I don't know anyone (who I
know personally) that's signed onto fanfiction.net that could be
one...bummer...hey that just makes the job open for someone else...er...yeah...
Yukimi the Ice Goddess: YEA! You like it! jumps up and down like a happy school girl Thanks for reviewing!
Hawk2k3: I guess this is an AU ficcy for now! . Thanks for the review!
Sakura: Thanks for the review. =.=
Sakura potato: Thanks for the review! .
Sakura-Star69/ Madison Kimiko Li: As I told Soleil666, that question ties into the plot. Not to be mean...many people have asked me that. Thanks for reviewing my story and I'm glad you like it!
Lady Samantha: Okie.... Thanks for reviewing!
Cherryblossom88: Thanks for reviewing!
Childofdmoon: thanks for the review!
Momocolady: Thanks for the review!
AUTHORS NOTE: Ummm...about the question, so far only 4 people wants this a magic ficcy...and for them I'll (either during or right after) I'll restart from chapter 2 and make it magic. But for now...it's AU. Tell me if you (the people who want it magic) want me to make an alternate magic ficcy. (same story just magic)
You Brought Me Back
By: Witch Hunter Sakura
Chapter 4: First Session
"Tomoyo put that down..." Eriol whispered, lightly opening the bathroom door. Sakura made no move to come out it last night, so Tomoyo, Syaoran, and he figured that she must've fallen asleep. Eriol took a baby step forward into the bathroom and checked for her.
He smiled contented when he saw Sakura's auburn head poking out of the bathtub. "She's asleep...how kawaii," Tomoyo muttered, pulling her camcorder back up to her eye. "I think I'll call it 'Sakura's first attempt of escape'...only she's failing miserably."
"Is she always like this?" Syaoran asked Eriol as he opened the door fully.
"Yeah..." Eriol laughed, walking slowly inside the bathroom. He soon hovered over Sakura's sleeping form. She had taken a shower right after her attack on Syaoran...well punch anyway...and dressed for the next day. Her head was tilted to one side, a smile adorning her face, and her hair was spread lightly in curls all around her. She looked like an angel...sleeping in a bathtub. "Well...today's her first day with Syaoran. Think we should get her up early?" Tomoyo nodded and got her camcorder ready.
Eriol poked her. She didn't move. He poked again. Still, no movement. So, he poked again. This time, she turned on her side, sighing contently. "You're not poking hard enough," Syaoran hissed in his ear."
"Then you do it!" Syaoran switched placed with him and raised his arm over the bath wall. He poked her than ducked his head behind the wall. "Coward. She didn't move. Poke her again!" Syaoran stared at him. They were acting like children! Just shake the woman or pour a large bucket of water on her!
"Syaoran, you took too long. She's waking up...aw..."
It was true. Sakura opened her large emerald eyes and lightly pushed herself up off the bathtub bottom. She never did notice the three pairs of eyes staring at her only centimeters from her face. She yawned, turning her head slowly. She let out a squeak, falling backwards into the bath.
- -
After everyone left, I stepped out of the bathtub. How could they scare me like that! I brushed out my hair and put it up in my usual hair do.
"Hey, Sakura. Syaoran's going to start your sessions today! Aren't you happy? Hey...nice dress." I stared at her dumbfounded. Didn't he just say that he didn't do cases like me? What's going on? "Oh yeah...you weren't there when I told Eriol. Syaoran accepted to help you, after-after..." I looked at her. After what? "Uh...nothing..." She smiled.
- -
"So, how are you?" Uhh...I can't exactly tell you, so I put on a strained smile. Anyone could tell I didn't want to be here. "Good. Now, how I work. Usually I'll just let the person pour out there problem, but I can't exactly do that. So, I'll improvise. Instead, I'll read some lines from various books. This'll help me find out where your problem in centered." Hmmm...problems...just the way I would put it, too, I thought sarcastically.
He pulled several thin-spine books from his book bag. "The first short story is 'Run'." He cleared his throat and opened the book to about half way. He started. "'She ran from him; his sparkling features, his quick reflexes, just plain him. He yelled for her, but she didn't stop. She couldn't for he'd catch her in an instant..." I gripped the armrest for support. Just like me... "...She kept running with him on her tail.
"'He tailed her evenly, grabbing for her shoulder, and when he did, she screamed. Then, there was no more.'" He looked up and I could tell my expression wasn't what he was expecting. Before he could say a word, I bolted from the room.
- -
"How'd it go?" I heard Tomoyo call, but I didn't look her way. I just ran into the only place with a locked door. The bathroom. But, before I was able to shut the door, Tomoyo stuck her arm between the door and the panel. "Talk to me...please?" I opened the door, heartedly then locked it after she entered. "It's Sakura's realm," she chuckled. "You always seem to go here whenever you need redemption." I smiled, but it seemed to falter as I remembered the story Syaoran read. It had so much to do with me...
FLASHBACK
I ran out the door of the mansion, leaving it open behind me as I trailed down the steps and into the street.
"GET BACK HERE!" I heard my captor scream. I had a feeling he wasn't going to give me up so easily. With that thought, I bolted into the park that lined the street. Bad idea on my part. I was wearing a very expensive dress, and I couldn't really move in it. It caught several times on the underbrush, much to my dislike. "You're near...your stupidity shows it." I could hear his footsteps near me, so instead of running and getting caught, I ducked behind a grove of trees and bushes, hoping he wouldn't find me. "Come, my little blossom, come out and save the torture of me trying to find you." Each time he took a step, twigs broke under his weight, signaling to me how close he was. I dreaded every second he inched closer. Then all went quiet.
I heard a ruffle of leaves right behind me and something grabbed my arm roughly. I whipped my head around and I found the man's piercing dark eyes staring into mine.
"Gotcha." I screamed.
"SAKURA! WAKE UP!" My eyes fluttered open wearily. I felt...extremely weak. I stared into Tomoyo's eyes. Uhhh...did I miss something? "Finally...you fainted and we couldn't revive you. We were so worried!" WE? Fainted? I really did miss something... Suddenly, the door opened to reveal Eriol with a stash of towels and Syaoran with a bowl of steaming hot water.
"You're awake! Thank goodness," Eriol said, dropping beside Tomoyo. Syaoran set the bowl down on the sink and turned slightly towards me, just enough to stare into my eyes. I stared at him for a moment, until Tomoyo asked me if I was hungry.
I shook my head "no" and smiled. "You've been asleep so long, I don't see how you can't be hungry!" Tomoyo said happily. "We'll get you some anyway! Come on Eriol!" Tomoyo skipped out of the room with a very scared Eriol attached to her hand.
- -
"Are you all right?" I looked up and noticed Syaoran looking at me. I smiled and nodded my head. The story really didn't hurt me...it was the memories that reminded me of it. "I'm sorry." Whoa. What? I looked at him disbelieving. Didn't he do this to everyone? I mean isn't this his job? "I should've stopped when you were like that...gripping the armrest I mean." I stood up from the floor and patted my bottom of the unnecessary dirt and crumbs. Syaoran...it's your job. I looked at him and smiled, signaling to him that I was fine with it.
I skipped out of the bathroom and out of my bedroom, walking straight into the hallway. Today was getting better...thank god. I turned around to see if Syaoran was following me, but I ran into something. I looked up and found Syaoran staring at me.
"You shouldn't stop in the middle of the hallway, someone will run into you like I did." I looked at him angrily, then stalked off towards the kitchens where I saw Tomoyo and Eriol sitting in the back kissing to their hearts delight. I sighed. How it must feel to be in love...
I walked over to them, breaking their small make-out session, and smiled for my rudeness.
"Sakura! We were wondering when you were coming down. And you brought Syaoran!" She pushed two plates our way and returned to smooching with Eriol. I sweat dropped and turned to Syaoran who was looking at them a little disgusted.
Then we ate...in silence. Oh, how I wanted to talk. I pained me to see people just blabbering away without a care in the world while I sit here waning behind my smile. I sighed and picked at my food.
- -
I stared at her. She was having such a hard time and it was amusing to me. I watched her eyes glisten over as she remembered her voice...her old life. It was so hard for her, but I couldn't just let up her pain. She was much too fun.
I got up from my seat and left a twenty on the table. See you around, Sakura.
- -
Sorry...sorry sorry sorry sorry! I know this was waaaaaayyyyyy to short...even for me...this chapter was just for a little session and a flashback of her past...fill ins basically.... hehehehe don't kill me... ;.;
Okie...that little kitchen they were in?...it's half a restaurant...so the man was sitting near the street while Sakura and co were sitting right inside the door of the hospital restaurant...okie...(There was something like that at the hospital I went to when I broke my leg...half of it was for the patients and the other half was for workers, residents, and guests.)
Okie...the next chapter...we...uh...review to find out....
CherryBlossom0101: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing. And I'm sorry, but with the majority on the vote, I guess I have to make this an AU, but if you want, I'll make this story (revised, edited, the works) into a magic ficcy either during or at the end
Soleil666: well...thanks for the long reviews....
Okay...your first point...uh you know like a warden type person? A person
like in jails that basically watches all over everyone...like that. I
may have used the word wrong in my sentence, but Word only does so
much... shakes head
Second point: The little "accident" thingy happened when Sakura was
about 15...that's where I think I'm going to put it. Her dad did not
become a professor instead he is just a digger dude...er...yeah...so he just
pops around when he is needed...er yeah...Touya is out of college...that
explains that...uh...You know how Tomoyo's family is like dead rich? Her
family moved to America! to set up another branch of the Daidouji Toy
Company. The thing about the police...will be tied into the story...Now
the house and the vandalizers...That will also be tied into the
story...and I said that the house was far but not too far from the
neighbors...or civilization....
Er...Third point: I think...well yeah...Syaoran hasn't been to Tomoeda...I
think...well in this story he HASN'T met Sakura or anyone else besides
Eriol...cause I made them cousins. And him finding the Mental Home/
Hospital...it is a miracle.... Go Syaoran!
To your other review (the one for the author's notice): NO! You
weren't rude.... I'm actually really glad you're giving me advice.
I'm sort of a new writer so...it helps a lot! Thank you! And, not to be
mean, I had thought about some things. I.e.: the villain and the
storyline. And sticks finger in air I conclude, there is a way to
make this a magic ficcy. Hehehe I can so imagine myself doing that...
Uhhh...I don't have a beta-reader...in fact, I don't know anyone (who I
know personally) that's signed onto fanfiction.net that could be
one...bummer...hey that just makes the job open for someone else...er...yeah...
Yukimi the Ice Goddess: YEA! You like it! jumps up and down like a happy school girl Thanks for reviewing!
Hawk2k3: I guess this is an AU ficcy for now! . Thanks for the review!
Sakura: Thanks for the review. =.=
Sakura potato: Thanks for the review! .
Sakura-Star69/ Madison Kimiko Li: As I told Soleil666, that question ties into the plot. Not to be mean...many people have asked me that. Thanks for reviewing my story and I'm glad you like it!
Lady Samantha: Okie.... Thanks for reviewing!
Cherryblossom88: Thanks for reviewing!
Childofdmoon: thanks for the review!
Momocolady: Thanks for the review!
AUTHORS NOTE: Ummm...about the question, so far only 4 people wants this a magic ficcy...and for them I'll (either during or right after) I'll restart from chapter 2 and make it magic. But for now...it's AU. Tell me if you (the people who want it magic) want me to make an alternate magic ficcy. (same story just magic)
You Brought Me Back
By: Witch Hunter Sakura
Chapter 4: First Session
"Tomoyo put that down..." Eriol whispered, lightly opening the bathroom door. Sakura made no move to come out it last night, so Tomoyo, Syaoran, and he figured that she must've fallen asleep. Eriol took a baby step forward into the bathroom and checked for her.
He smiled contented when he saw Sakura's auburn head poking out of the bathtub. "She's asleep...how kawaii," Tomoyo muttered, pulling her camcorder back up to her eye. "I think I'll call it 'Sakura's first attempt of escape'...only she's failing miserably."
"Is she always like this?" Syaoran asked Eriol as he opened the door fully.
"Yeah..." Eriol laughed, walking slowly inside the bathroom. He soon hovered over Sakura's sleeping form. She had taken a shower right after her attack on Syaoran...well punch anyway...and dressed for the next day. Her head was tilted to one side, a smile adorning her face, and her hair was spread lightly in curls all around her. She looked like an angel...sleeping in a bathtub. "Well...today's her first day with Syaoran. Think we should get her up early?" Tomoyo nodded and got her camcorder ready.
Eriol poked her. She didn't move. He poked again. Still, no movement. So, he poked again. This time, she turned on her side, sighing contently. "You're not poking hard enough," Syaoran hissed in his ear."
"Then you do it!" Syaoran switched placed with him and raised his arm over the bath wall. He poked her than ducked his head behind the wall. "Coward. She didn't move. Poke her again!" Syaoran stared at him. They were acting like children! Just shake the woman or pour a large bucket of water on her!
"Syaoran, you took too long. She's waking up...aw..."
It was true. Sakura opened her large emerald eyes and lightly pushed herself up off the bathtub bottom. She never did notice the three pairs of eyes staring at her only centimeters from her face. She yawned, turning her head slowly. She let out a squeak, falling backwards into the bath.
- -
After everyone left, I stepped out of the bathtub. How could they scare me like that! I brushed out my hair and put it up in my usual hair do.
"Hey, Sakura. Syaoran's going to start your sessions today! Aren't you happy? Hey...nice dress." I stared at her dumbfounded. Didn't he just say that he didn't do cases like me? What's going on? "Oh yeah...you weren't there when I told Eriol. Syaoran accepted to help you, after-after..." I looked at her. After what? "Uh...nothing..." She smiled.
- -
"So, how are you?" Uhh...I can't exactly tell you, so I put on a strained smile. Anyone could tell I didn't want to be here. "Good. Now, how I work. Usually I'll just let the person pour out there problem, but I can't exactly do that. So, I'll improvise. Instead, I'll read some lines from various books. This'll help me find out where your problem in centered." Hmmm...problems...just the way I would put it, too, I thought sarcastically.
He pulled several thin-spine books from his book bag. "The first short story is 'Run'." He cleared his throat and opened the book to about half way. He started. "'She ran from him; his sparkling features, his quick reflexes, just plain him. He yelled for her, but she didn't stop. She couldn't for he'd catch her in an instant..." I gripped the armrest for support. Just like me... "...She kept running with him on her tail.
"'He tailed her evenly, grabbing for her shoulder, and when he did, she screamed. Then, there was no more.'" He looked up and I could tell my expression wasn't what he was expecting. Before he could say a word, I bolted from the room.
- -
"How'd it go?" I heard Tomoyo call, but I didn't look her way. I just ran into the only place with a locked door. The bathroom. But, before I was able to shut the door, Tomoyo stuck her arm between the door and the panel. "Talk to me...please?" I opened the door, heartedly then locked it after she entered. "It's Sakura's realm," she chuckled. "You always seem to go here whenever you need redemption." I smiled, but it seemed to falter as I remembered the story Syaoran read. It had so much to do with me...
FLASHBACK
I ran out the door of the mansion, leaving it open behind me as I trailed down the steps and into the street.
"GET BACK HERE!" I heard my captor scream. I had a feeling he wasn't going to give me up so easily. With that thought, I bolted into the park that lined the street. Bad idea on my part. I was wearing a very expensive dress, and I couldn't really move in it. It caught several times on the underbrush, much to my dislike. "You're near...your stupidity shows it." I could hear his footsteps near me, so instead of running and getting caught, I ducked behind a grove of trees and bushes, hoping he wouldn't find me. "Come, my little blossom, come out and save the torture of me trying to find you." Each time he took a step, twigs broke under his weight, signaling to me how close he was. I dreaded every second he inched closer. Then all went quiet.
I heard a ruffle of leaves right behind me and something grabbed my arm roughly. I whipped my head around and I found the man's piercing dark eyes staring into mine.
"Gotcha." I screamed.
"SAKURA! WAKE UP!" My eyes fluttered open wearily. I felt...extremely weak. I stared into Tomoyo's eyes. Uhhh...did I miss something? "Finally...you fainted and we couldn't revive you. We were so worried!" WE? Fainted? I really did miss something... Suddenly, the door opened to reveal Eriol with a stash of towels and Syaoran with a bowl of steaming hot water.
"You're awake! Thank goodness," Eriol said, dropping beside Tomoyo. Syaoran set the bowl down on the sink and turned slightly towards me, just enough to stare into my eyes. I stared at him for a moment, until Tomoyo asked me if I was hungry.
I shook my head "no" and smiled. "You've been asleep so long, I don't see how you can't be hungry!" Tomoyo said happily. "We'll get you some anyway! Come on Eriol!" Tomoyo skipped out of the room with a very scared Eriol attached to her hand.
- -
"Are you all right?" I looked up and noticed Syaoran looking at me. I smiled and nodded my head. The story really didn't hurt me...it was the memories that reminded me of it. "I'm sorry." Whoa. What? I looked at him disbelieving. Didn't he do this to everyone? I mean isn't this his job? "I should've stopped when you were like that...gripping the armrest I mean." I stood up from the floor and patted my bottom of the unnecessary dirt and crumbs. Syaoran...it's your job. I looked at him and smiled, signaling to him that I was fine with it.
I skipped out of the bathroom and out of my bedroom, walking straight into the hallway. Today was getting better...thank god. I turned around to see if Syaoran was following me, but I ran into something. I looked up and found Syaoran staring at me.
"You shouldn't stop in the middle of the hallway, someone will run into you like I did." I looked at him angrily, then stalked off towards the kitchens where I saw Tomoyo and Eriol sitting in the back kissing to their hearts delight. I sighed. How it must feel to be in love...
I walked over to them, breaking their small make-out session, and smiled for my rudeness.
"Sakura! We were wondering when you were coming down. And you brought Syaoran!" She pushed two plates our way and returned to smooching with Eriol. I sweat dropped and turned to Syaoran who was looking at them a little disgusted.
Then we ate...in silence. Oh, how I wanted to talk. I pained me to see people just blabbering away without a care in the world while I sit here waning behind my smile. I sighed and picked at my food.
- -
I stared at her. She was having such a hard time and it was amusing to me. I watched her eyes glisten over as she remembered her voice...her old life. It was so hard for her, but I couldn't just let up her pain. She was much too fun.
I got up from my seat and left a twenty on the table. See you around, Sakura.
- -
Sorry...sorry sorry sorry sorry! I know this was waaaaaayyyyyy to short...even for me...this chapter was just for a little session and a flashback of her past...fill ins basically.... hehehehe don't kill me... ;.;
Okie...that little kitchen they were in?...it's half a restaurant...so the man was sitting near the street while Sakura and co were sitting right inside the door of the hospital restaurant...okie...(There was something like that at the hospital I went to when I broke my leg...half of it was for the patients and the other half was for workers, residents, and guests.)
Okie...the next chapter...we...uh...review to find out....