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You Brought Me BackBy: Aya
Chapter 17: Is she…?
-Syaoran's POV
I sprinted down the hall…something wasn't right. Something was missing. I immediately thought of Sakura. She was the only one in danger right now.
I had just lost Tomoyo and Eriol…actually I really didn't care too much right now… I just needed to find Sakura and fast…
All of her depended on me.
I slowed down, catching my breath. Megan ran right into me, causing her to fall to the ground with a 'thud'. I looked to her and she smiled.
"Wow, you run fast…" Megan breathed, letting her friend pull her up. Eriol and Tomoyo still weren't near at all…I wondered what could be taking them so long…
Megan stared ahead of me and fixed her eyes on the hallway that was ahead of us. "I remember this place," she spoke grimly. "Sakura's room's not to far from here…but then again…neither is my dad's…" She said the last barely above a whisper, but I had heard her. What had happened? The guy behind her noticed this too, keeping a keen eye on her as he trailed behind her. She walked slowly down the hall, where silence engulfed her. I finally followed.
-?'s POV
Darkness swam around me, uttering simple words that meant so much. Was I dead? It was so hard to tell…
I lay upon the black floor for a long time, thinking of my life and what it was before I had come here…wherever here was.
It seemed to me like this was my inner sanctum where my most precious thoughts resided. Memories fluttered across my eyes, giving me a feeling of loneliness, but then again, some memories, gave me that feeling of belonging. How I miss those memories.
Tears poured from eyes…I was unable to stop them from coming. I was missing out on my life…and there was no way to prevent it from happening. My mind was shut out from the world…
No one could hear me…and I couldn't hear them.
-Eriol's POV
We lost Syaoran long ago, due to Tomoyo's heaving and gasping. Sometimes I hated Syaoran and his fast sprinting. I comforted Tomoyo as she stopped her fit of coughs. We had stood there for what seemed a long time before Tomoyo stood and ushered me to follow.
"We are going to find Sakura on our own since Syaoran and that other girl—whatever her name was—ran off…just in case they end up…not finding her…" Tomoyo smiled to him and began walking down a long, silent hallway filled with aged doors. "Here we go…"
And so we set down the hallway…
-Syaoran's POV
Megan walked slowly, fear etched on her face. She was afraid of something…I could tell this guy next to me was afraid also…not for him, but for her…
-Megan's POV
This was so hard… I had to face my father to save the only best friend I may have ever had. But the fear was tremendous on my shoulders…it wouldn't leave.
I wondered how Sakura got through all of this…she had to be trained…she was so strong-willed and determined and tried her hardest not to think of her horrible fate…
Sakura! Where are you!
-?'s POV
The blackness somehow calmed me…I don't know how since I'm so used to brightness and happiness. It was definitely a change…
But I couldn't help but feel this sense of fear and longing coming from my inner heart. It was like someone was calling to me…but it was really hard to remember the voice.
Sakura!
So familiar…but I can't remember…
Where are you!
I know who's calling me…I have to know!
An image of a girl floated before my eyes…
Megan…
-Megan's POV
Megan…I stopped. That was Sakura…I'm sure of it. Her voice lingered in my ear for a moment before I screamed, startling Syaoran who was standing next to me.
"What? What is it!" he yelled.
"SAKURA! SHE'S ALIVE!" I screamed, jumping on Mr. Nice and hugging him till there was no end. She was alive…now I knew I could face my father…
Tears poured down my face as I happily giggled, figuring Sakura had been able to withstand my father's ways.
Too bad I couldn't realize how wrong I was…
-Evil guy's POV
It pained me to know my princess wasn't dead…
It was simply tragic…
The medications didn't work and the nurse who had assured me they would, would pay…
But it was different…I couldn't kill her…I mean she could become my mistress…though there would be a lot of fighting back…but I would have the most beautiful woman on the earth…
I stared lovingly at her as her faced scrunched in confusion…
So beautiful…
I stared at her body. So full and luscious…how I wanted—
-With Tomoyo and Eriol
"STOP RIGHT THERE!" Eriol yelled, bursting into a room. He held his hand out as to strike someone…but he was let down for there was no one in the room. In fact, there was no one in the last couple of rooms he and Tomoyo had come to.
"Eriol…give it up… I'm worried too…but I'm not acting stupid…" Tomoyo sighed heavily and continued to walk as Eriol donned his usual mischievous smile…
"It's the next one…I know it!" He ran up to the door and swung open the door. "STOP RIGHT…there?"
Tomoyo's eyes went wide as she stared into the dank room…
There she was! SAKURA!
"Oh mi god! I got it right!" Eriol screamed and ran into the room after Tomoyo. She turned irritably around.
"Eriol…do me a favor…and SHUT UP!" Eriol sunk back behind her as she ran and hugged her lifeless friend. "OH SAKURA! You're alive! You're alive…I'm so glad I found you!" Eriol came up behind her and stared sadly at Sakura's limp body…
"Tomoyo…she looks a little—"
"Eriol! She's not…I refuse to believe it! She's not…I refuse…" She pulled Sakura closer to her. "She can't!"
"Tomoyo…" She began to sob, her tears landing on Sakura's pale complexion.
-?'s POV
I felt something on my cheek and I brushed it lightly away. Staring at my fingertips, I saw that droplets of water were on them. I tasted the water…it was salty…like tears. Tears…?
But who would be crying over me?
-Syaoran's POV
Megan actually got up and ran to the end of the hallway…but we were not greeted with a large stone door as like the other doors, but actually it was open. Someone was inside partly because I could hear muffled noises. I stepped cautiously into the door and stared at my surroundings.
My eyes landed on one person, but she wasn't moving…
SAKURA!
-END
But let's see…is she alive…or dead? hehe no one knows but me! XP
Well…I've had the most not cool time…I was all psyched that FullMetal Alchemist was exciting and all…but now…my mo has done the worst thing in HISTORY…okie not that bad but still...
SHE TOOK OFF THE CABLE! That means no more anime! Omg I'm gonna faint…me being the anime fanatic……that I am! It's disturbing! T.T I'm crying! Not really but close…no more of Ed's funny expressions or Al's obsession with kitties! Nononononononononono!