OMG reading some of your guy's reviews was just funny…no really…) especially Mariko's! Woohoo…okie…oh and ROTC is actually NJROTC or Naval Junior Reserve Officer Training Corps. It's just a program you take in high school that teaches you certain aspects of the military depending on which one you have…me being navy. I'm not going into the navy though…not for me…but I got in the program because it was an easy PE credit…don't tell no one…shhhhh…not…I really don't care…but anyway…)
Thank to:
Mariko: Yeah I'll have to look for the translations. I found the shaman king one's but I think FMA will be kinda hard. Omg the second person to finally see that our beautiful, tragic main character is still in the living world. I really don't like preppy girls… I never knew about camel camps…never heard of em actually…but that's crazy about what they do to them...i was actually thinking of making Mr. Creepy gay…but then it wouldn't fit the story…gosh and Eriol's so cute when he does do that…hehehe I wub him. Not as much as Syaoran though! Well I should be scared of that cookie there…runs away!
Angelz Tearz: I think you are the only one okie maybe two that realizes that SOME ONE is not dead…hehehe wow you should get a cookie.
La Salle- Green Archer 13, BitterSweetMel, Aneko-chan, Cherryblossom88, Irene, and Aryfrya: ) Thanks for the review and here's the next chapter!
You Brought Me BackBy: Aya
Chapter 18: The Difference
-Somewhere, Somewhere…(earlier)
It's been how long since we've been in here…bored as hell, let me remind you. Ladriel's dead…no matter…we could always adopt a new sister. But fuck this. I'm bored.
Piggy walked ahead of me, her hair flowing behind her. God, everything is so messed up. We have a lost sister and our boss might be dead. Great no more money.
Someone touches my arm. It's Katrina. After Ladriel died, Katrina decided to change her looks. She looks so much like that Kinomoto whore. From the back you can't tell them apart.
She looked at me momentarily almost a saddened look. This was the second time she had ever been sad. The first time was when our mother was killed…by the man we were working for.
Life was so messed up!
-Syaoran's POV
I held her with all my life…
Why was it that she had to die so early? WHY! I loved her, why did she have to die?
Why god, why!
I could taste the salty tears in my mouth. I had wanted to wipe them away…but it didn't matter. More would continue. My pain would continue! OH SAKURA!
-Megan's POV
I couldn't take it. I could have sworn I heard her voice. Her warmth was around me, so why is she like this!
I heard her!
I felt her!
It didn't make sense! I pulled my knees into my arms and cried into them…
It wasn't fair!
-?'s POV
I could hear them…I could feel Syaoran's tears on my face. I wasn't dead. What're they saying? Can't they feel me breathing?
What about my heart? It's beating…aren't I warm?
I'm not dead! I cried, tears flowing like rivers from my eyes.
-Syaoran's POV
I had stopped crying long ago. No more tears would come from my eyes. Sakura's face was dry and pale…
I took my eyes from the image.
But somehow I couldn't stop from looking, so I forced myself.
"Syaoran!" I hear, but I forced myself not to look. "Syaoran! Please!"
I can't.
"If you love me, then wake up!"
And I woke up, staring into the bright green eyes that I'd thought I'd never see again.
Sakura.
-Megan's POV
I couldn't believe it.
There she was.
One minute she was dead and then the other minute she was just staring into Syaoran's eyes. She was crying.
I wanted to just go up and hug, but something told me that doing so would make a nightmare come alive…or maybe it had already.
-Somewhere, Somewhere (Earlier)
"What do you mean you need her? Just stay away from us. You've already screwed our lives up enough, killing my mother and now Ladriel's gone. Now you want Piggy? No way Jose. Do this by your fucking self we want nothing more to do with you!" I grabbed Piggy from our boss and walked steamily towards the door.
"What about your other sister? Don't you care for her life?" he said lowly. "Oh but wait…it's just you two…now where did little Katrina go in all of this?"
"Shut up! Leave her out of this!" I screamed.
"But she is already in it." He motioned for one of his men to do something, though what it was I didn't know. The man went into the next room and stayed there for a couple minutes, before emerging with a large sack on his shoulder. It was squirming.
"No you bastard." The man put the sack down and let our former boss advance on it. He began to unzip it.
He pulled back the flap and there she was, a disheveled Katrina squirming with her hands, feet and mouth bound tightly so no sound or escape could be managed.
"You BASTARD!" I ran to him my hand clenched into a fist, preparing to punch him dead. He pulled a gun on me and pulled the trigger making me stop dead in my tracks. I looked at Piggy then at myself. No oozing blood…that's a relief. I heard a low moan and a "plip…plip." I slowly turned my head and stared at Katrina. No…I…it…no…it just CAN'T!
There on the side of her shirt was a nice clean bullet hole, and freely oozing blood made it's way into the middle of the floor. I stared at her face. She was crying and staring at me with the most sorrowful eyes, pleading to me "help me help me" but it was as if I couldn't move.
"You can save her, you know. All we need is your sister to play the part of my beloved Sakura." I nodded yes and fainted.
-Present
It was so dreading, seeing myself just get up and not seeing anyone in that depressing room. I hadn't even known if my sister had survived the bullet or not. I didn't even know if Piggy was all right. She was the youngest and I didn't even know where she was. Some sister I am…
-Syaoran's POV
Those eyes…something about them made them different…they were the same green…but they weren't happy…they were just different…I couldn't explain it, but I know they were.
She hadn't spoke yet and my mind reeled instantly towards the fact of her medicine. She must have been given another dose or something.
I looked back towards her eyes and noticed that there were tears in them…she opened her mouth to speak…but whatever she was going to say was muffled by a gunshot and the splattering of her blood across my cheeks.
"Syaoran!" Everyone looked towards Megan. She was being held at gunpoint.
"Megan!" Tomoyo yelled. "Hang on!"
"I'll come for you!" Mr. Nice yelled running for her, only to stop since the gun was pointed now at him. "You bastard let her go!"
"Who says? It can't be you since I own you! I own her too! Now come with me before I have a reason to kill you!" Mr. Nice looked back towards me and walked up towards Megan.
"Okay you win…just as long as Megan is not hurt." He stared at him.
"Conditions, 'ey? Do you love Miss Megan here…Hmmmm I like this!" He pulled Megan out the door.
"Syaoran! Listen! THAT'S NOT SAKURA! GO FIND HER!" Megan screamed before the door shut and locked.
I took in what she said…that woman wasn't Sakura…but she looked so much like her. I stared on the part of her face that was mutilated and noticed the differences. Her eyes were more Chinese and her hair was dyed the color of Sakura's hair. Megan was right…it wasn't her.
"That's not her…by just looking at her hair it isn't," Tomoyo said softly. "Judging from Megan's response…Sakura's still alive isn't she?"
"Yeah…now our only problem is the door." I stood from the bed, laying the dead woman on a pillow, and walked towards the door. "It's a simple key lock…so if… Hey Tomoyo, you got a bobby pin?"
"Yeah." She pulled out a pin from her hair and handed it to me. She took her hand from her hair and it fell much to her dislike. "Oh this had better work Syaoran! I needed that pin!" she whined. I just laughed. I pulled the pin apart and inserted it into the lock.
"Tomoyo…you look lovely with your long hair like that though…keep it down, please. For me?" Eriol pouted, giving her a puppy dog-eyed look.
"I hate you Eriol…" Tomoyo turned back to me. All I had heard were a couple clicks but nothing to actually tell me that the lock had opened. A couple jiggles, more clicks…but nothing! This was frustrating!
"Tomoyo…another pin please…" I said through gritted teeth. She handed me another and I inserted that one next to the other one. There was a little switch I was…CLICK…got it! The door opened slowly towards me.
"The doctor did it…oh my god…"
"Shut up Eriol…"
And so we walked out…entering the depressing mansion of the notorious killer Grassiass only to find my love, Sakura.
And in the midst of this heartfelt statement…pure emerald eyes opened to darkness and spoke her true love's name…
"Syaoran."
You brought me back…thanks…-END
OKIE NOW IT IS THE END OF THE STORY! OMG W00T, SCREAM, SHOUT, KICK YOUR BROTHER…DO WHAT EVER! IT'S OVER…
…what…
it's…not?
…what?
…sequel?
YEP THERE'S A SEQUEL! …OMG THERE'S A SEQUEL! SHIT YES I'll HAVE YOU KNOW THAT THIS IS THE FIRST EVER FINISHED STORY OF THE MAGNIFICENT ()) AYA! WOOHOO! –dances-
OKIE SO IT'S OVER…greatness…now I get to start the sequel…oh and be more than welcome to suggest a heartfelt title if you want…omg it's really over! And there's a name for the creepy man…yes I finally found one that was really stupid and funny…grassiass )