Hey! Alright this is my new chapter. The best one yet! Ya'll will get to see, the convo they were suppose to have at lunch, not at lunch but in the morning. There will also be some action. So yea. and maybe...alittle something else. I would like to thank my friend Kemiko For writing the Youko part and other parts in the story. But mainly the Youko part cause it is SOOOOO GOOOD!
Chapter 7
I walked into the forest, knowing that I wouldn't make it unless I ran. Which is what I did. I felt the twigs and branches hit my face, I knew I would end up with a couple of scratches or to but that didn't matter, I just needed to see her.
I kept on running through the forest, now in the deep end of it. I stopped when I got to the place I needed to be.
The waterfall.
I'm the only one who knew of this waterfall, me and my grandma.
(A/N: Some of you might be thinking: GRANDMA?)
I believe that when my grandmother died, her spirit stayed here.When I was a little girl and found out that my grandma died I ran to this water fall. I looked into the water coming from the waterfall and saw my grandmother in there. From then on, I would visit her spirit when ever I needed to talk.
I began to take off my clothes and then dived into the water. People would think the water would be cold but it felt like a hot spring, nice to bathe in.
"Grandma."I called her.
I watched as her glowing spirit showed up in front of me.
"Hello child." she said in her ancient, warm,loving voice.
"Hi gran." I said, as she studied me with a smile on her face.
"Nakamura, I see something troubling in thy eyes." She said in that wise way of hers.
"Ye..yea.You know the usual thing with father" I said to her not wanting to tell her the truth.
"Child do not lie to thy grandmother. There is something else troubling thy, something with.." She said as she looked at me closer with her deep blue eyes. " A young man. Would thy care to tell me how thy is being troubled by him?"
I looked into my grandmothers eyes.If someone were to look at her eyes and decide what age she was they would say a 5 year old. She had the eyes of a 5 year old, still filled with color and joy. It is only her wrinkles and voice that keep her from being that age. I looked away from my grandma and into the sky.
"I don't know grandma. He makes me feel different. Sometimes I hate him and sometimes I can't make up my mind. He makes me feel like someone else and it confuses me.This thing is driving me crazy!" I said as I sinked myself a little bit more into the water.
My grandmother began to chuckle in a kind manner.
"What?" i asked a little irritated that she found this funny.
"Thy are just like thy mother. So troubled to say their feelings." My grandmother said as she smiled making the wrinkles next to her eyes show.
"Grandma he's one of those popular guys, that have every girl after him." I told her.
"Child thy feels that way, because it was meant for thy to feel it. It was like destiny meant for it." She said as she left.
"Hey! You can't just leave like that. COME BACK!" I said a little angry. "I don't even know what that means!"
I stood up and got out of the water. I slipped on my clothes and looked at my watch.
Yes, thirty minutes before school starts. I'll make it.
I began running back to my motorcycle.
Shuichi's POV
I stepped onto the school grounds and began making my way over to Yusuke and Kuwabara. I felt someone next to me and turned around to be greeted by Hiei.
"Hello Hiei." I greeted him.
"Hn." Was all I got back from him.
At that moment I felt a bad sensation, like I needed to throw up. I hunched over and took a deep breath and my vision blurred.When I calmed down I stood back up and looked over at Hiei.
"Your eyes they were a goldish color . What's happening?" He asked me.
"Youko. He's been acting up almost like demanding to free himself. Ever since the
dark tournament." I explained to him.
"Well, what did you expect it's only been a week." Hiei said.
We made our way over to the boys silently.
"Sup!" Yusuke and Kuwabara greeted us.
"Hi" I greeted them back as Hiei just 'hned'.
"So Kurama. What's up with you and the Nakamura girl?" Yusuke asked me.
"What about her?" I asked Yusuke.
"Well, yesterday when you say me holding her in my arms, there was a tinge of gold in your eye. Which scared the crap out of me man. I really thought you were going Youko on me." Kuwabara said.
Then I remebered. I felt angry at him..sort of...sort of like I felt ...well, jealous.
I didn't answer Kuwabara, I couldn't tell him that.
"Were you jealous Kurama? Do you... like Nakamura?" Yusuke asked.
They all waited for me to respond.
"Yes, you do Kurama. Just say it. I can tell it in your eyes. They are look the same way as mine look when I think of Yukina." I looked at Kuwabara.
Wham!
Hiei had hit him upside the head.
"Hey!You little mi-" Kuwabara began his insult but never finished.
"Shut up will you." Yusuke said which made them be quiet.
"Kurama. We found out who the kitsune is." Hiei stated.
"But we found out some other news. Koenma's father wants her to breed in spirit world and you know he will get what he wants. They have already decided on that and there is no changing that. If she stays in ningenkai the demons will search for her and mate with her if she likes it or not, same goes for Makai." Yusuke explained to him.
I gave them a confused look."Why would it interest me that they would want to breed her?" I asked them. "I don't even know the kitsune to even worry about her."
"Because Kurama. it's Nakamura!" Hiei yelled at me.
I felt like a knife just went through my heart.
"Kurama you okay? You look pale." Yusuke asked me.
"See I told you it wouldn't have been a good idea for him to find out the love of his life is going to be used as a breeding machine!" Kuwabara added.
"No I'm okay." I said as I began to walk away.
Nakamura, be used as a breeder?
I couldn't stand it anymore.
Why would koenma chose her ?
Why did it have to be her?
Why did it have to be the girl...I love.
End of Shuchi's POV
I walked on the school grounds, making my way to the door. I saw Yusuke and Kuwabara looking somewhere, at someone with concerned faces. There was that short guy again, looking the same direction they were, with an emotionless face. I followed their gaze, and saw Shuichi. I gasped.
He looked pale. He looked hurt.
I kept walking, but wasn't paying attention, and I crashed into a jock in our school. I realized that they were the reason I tried to take my own life.
"Hey. If it isn't the bitch." Ken, the leader, said. His two goons behind him snickered.
"We never got to finish what we started at the party." Akimatsu sneered. He grabbed her hand.
"LET ME GO!" I yelled, trying to yank my hand away. I had had enough of this!
"Now, now, now, be a good little bitch and calm down." Senkatsami stated.
I growled in frustration. Anger blinded me. Men. I can't stand them! They always use you for their toy!
I couldn't get my hand out of Akimatsu's grip, so I bit him, surprisingly drawing blood.
"BITCH!" He slapped me, hard. I landed on the ground hitting my head. Everything was fading. My vision started going black. The last thing I saw, was a tall silver haired man, with two sliver ears, and five silver tails, and a silver tunic. Wow.. that's… a lot of silver. I thought, before passing out.
Shuichi's POV
I walked on, trying to get my mind off of what I had just heard. Sadly, Youko piped in.
'She's mine! You can't let them do that!You can't let them take her away!Let me out Shuichi!'
'No Youko! I can't take that risk.'
'SHUICHI!'
I ignored him completely. I stopped dead in my tracks when I heard Nakamura yell. 'oh no…'
I doubled over in pain, clutching my head as Youko beat at my barriers. 'Youko… no!'
'I WON'T WATCH THIS!'
'STAY BACK!'
I fought to keep Youko in check. I could tell I was loosing. I could see strands of my hair turn silver.
'LET ME OUT!'
'NOOOOOOOO'
I had lost. I know I did. Because now, Youko took over.
End of Shuichi's POV
Youko's POV
I watched as Nakamura hit the ground. Anger boiled in the pit of my stomach. The three boys looked at me in horror. I flexed my claws. Nakamura had already started her transformation, and it continued. Her long black hair pooled around her body. A red tail with black tips twitched slightly by her side, along with her red and black tipped ears. Before she feel unconscious, I noticed her beautiful blue eyes. She was beautiful. If I wasn't I this situation, I'd stare at her all day.
I took a slow, predatory step towards the three boys. I could feel Shuichi in my mind, trying to come back. I ignored his pleas. He didn't want me to hurt them… but I did.
I walked to them, their eyes wide with fear. How I loved to see it. I stood over them, looking down upon them, with my arm raised, ready to strike.
"You should learn your place." I said, in a deep, deadly voice. I was aware of Shuichi's entire school watching this display. "Now… I shall help you find it."
I brought my hands down, about to slash them into little pieces, but I stopped. My eyes widened as I realizes that I couldn't move my arm.
'Shuichi! Let me go now!'
'NO! I won't let you do this!'
I growled as I felt Shuichi fight to gain control. I didn't want him to… but he did.
End of Youko's POV
Reader's POV
Youko's body shrunk, as his hair turned back to red. His eyes were no longer golden, but a deep green. No longer in the tunic, Kurama pressed his hands to his head, and stumbled back wards. Yusuke and Kuwabara were at his sides. Hiei had picked up Nakamura, and looked at his partners.
Kurama felt no jealousy this time, as he steadied himself. He ran off, Yusuke and Kuwabara behind him. Hiei glared at the three boys, still cowering in fear, and promptly disappeared in front of their eyes. Kurama jumped onto the schools roof, as the detective and the idiot followed, jumping from roof to roof, while Hiei did the same, only faster than the other three.
They arrived at Kurama's house, and laid her on his bed. Kurama started pacing, cursing himself for what just happened.
"I shouldn't have lost control! I should have held Youko in! Now what will happen! Everybody knows know! What will I say to my mother when I have to go back to the Makai! "
Hiei growled. He got up and punched Kurama square in the jaw, earning gasps from all three (Kurama, yusuke and Kuwabara)
"Would you snap out of it! It WAS NOT you're fault! If you forgot, we can always have Koenma erase their memories!"
Kurama gasped. He shut and opend his mouth stupidly. 'Now why didn't I think of that?'
Kurama stood up and goes into his room.
Yusuke grabbed his comunicator and opened it. Botan's face appearing on the screen.
"Hello, Yusuke. So have you found the Kitsune yet?" Botan asked. He shot glances at Hiei and Kuwabara, who just shooked their head.
"That's what I need to talk to Koenma about." Yusuke said.
"Alright, I'll pass you through." Botan said.
At that moment the binkied toddler showed up.
Alright that's it for now. I know it's short, but it's a cliffy. Uh I had to make it into the reader's POV because then nobody would understand the story and the same goes for Youko. The next chapter will be reader's a little at the beginnning, then it'll change into Shuichi's POV. Then maybe i'll add Nakamura. Not sure. But most likely that'll be the way i'll do it.
Now on to thanking my 8 reviewers:
Kemiko3955: Hmm...maybe we will be seeing him without a shirt...soon..lol. Oh yea, and thanks for writing half of my story.
Hirina: Thanks for letting me know that. LOL. This chapter was the longest i've written...ever.
Sonya-white-angel: Thanks for reviewing...oh yea.. If you read the first chapter you would have known she was trying to suicide herself and cut her wrists. Her wound re opened when she collided and fell.
animegirl2961: Was it a good type of funny or a bad type? lol
Desa The Dragon: Yes, you figured my story out...YAY! You really concentrate when you read don't you? You don't miss a thing. lol. Which is good.
Lady Nicky: Maybe you should say it gets better by the update lol...
Yuki Amida: Lol...well, i know poor kurama, but you never know things might change. lol
Mikanena: Hey, it's me! lol. I reviewed LOL. ( 9 reviews WEEEE!)okay, got to chill. lol.
Forbiddensoul562: Thanks for reviewing. Yea, it's a kurama x oc. lol. Hmm...alright i'll start writing now. lol.
Now, thanks to my new reviewers:
Yuki Amida and forbiddensoul562. Well, come to my reviewer club. LOL.
I want 10 reviews for my next chapter! Thanks. Tell your friends! peace.
Oh almost forgot, read these stories they belong to my friends and they are really good.
American kids, by kemiko3955
feudal era adventure, by kemiko3955. I'm not sure if that is the correct title but ifyou look in her profile it should say the correct name.
behind these crystal eyes, By hirina.
Reasons I hate you, by Hirina.
They are really good so read them...they need encouragement and I realllllllyyyy want to read their next chapter. lol. thanks
