Alright...I have decided to continue...only because the reviewers wanted me to. SO YEA.
Chapter 11
Shuichi's POV
I sat in a hospital chair, my head in my hands. I heard someone walking towards me. I looked up.
The doctor.
"How is she?" I ask as I stand up.
"Shuichi?" The doctor asks me.
I nodd my head in agreement.
"Young man...we don't think she'll make it." The doctor says, sighing.
I feel a deep pain in my chest, I look around with wide eyes.
Nakamura's dieing. There's nothing I can do about it.
"Kurama!" I look over to my right and see Yugasi, Hiei, Yusuke, and Kuwabara running towards me.
Yugasi's face was stained with tears."Kurama! Tell me she's alive!" She yelled.
I feel a salty tear flow down my face. "They don't know if she'll live."
"No! She can't DIE!" She cries out.
I didn't know what else to do but hug her.
"Shuichi...don't let her die!" She screams at me.
I try to hold the tears back but they just keep coming."Yugasi, I can't promise that! I just can't." I say to her.
She continues to cry outloud. Her best friend was dying why wouldn't she cry. Nakamura's life is slipping through our hands.
"Shuichi! She can't die! She's the only person I can really talk to!" Yugasi says as she throws herself on the floor and continues to cry.
Kuwabara walks up to her, and picks her up.
"No Kuwabara. I want to die with Nakamura! I can't live, knowing my best friend is dead!" She yells.
Yusuke walks up to me, his eyes red from crying. He pats me in the back. "Are you okay Kurama?" He asks me.
I wipe my tears away, but it's no use they just keep coming back. "No Yusuke, i'm not fine."
"Sorry." Yusuke says as tears fall from his eyes, and he hugs me.
Yusuke, is here crying...he's one of the toughest guys I know...but he's here crying.
"Fox, Is she really dying?" Hiei asks me, as he stares at the ground.
"Yes." I say as I walk over to a wall and lean my head against it.
I had called them, when I got to the hospital. Like around 3 a.m. They were all at my house, waiting.
I punched the wall hard, as I cried. "She's leaving. She's gone for good."
I felt someone's hand on my back. "It's okay Kurama. Just be strong." It was kuwabara.
I can't believe it...he's actually being serious for once.
I got off the wall and took a seat. I look over to Yugasi who is still on the floor crying. I notice Hiei walk up to her and whisper something to her.
"Alright Hiei." She says.
A watched as she hugged a shocked Hiei.
"Thanks Hiei." She says, as her crying calms down.
I noticed Hiei ease into her hug. He knew she wasn't going to let go for awhile.
I heard someone running towards up and I looked up.
Yukina.
She stopped once she saw my face.
"Kurama! Where is she?" She asked at once. "Yusuke and kuwabara told me.
I looked over at the guys.
"I can heal her Kurama!" She said.
I forgot about her and Genkai.
I stood up and and led her,quickly, to Nakamura's room. She was in a coma.
"Kurama, stand out here. Make sure no one comes in, Koenma and Genkai don't know i'm here. I don't want to get caught. Give me a hint if someone's coming." She said to me, as she stepped into the room.
I knew as well as she did that we weren't allowed in. So I had to keep a look out.
I hope she can heal Nakamura. I hope she can.
I leaned my head against the door and waited for her to finish.
A couple of hours later, the door opens.
"Kurama." Yukina says as she comes out of the room, tears threatening to fall."I'm sorry,I couldn't heal her completely. It's impossible. Her wounds are deep."
She hugs me as she cries on my shoulder.
"It's okay Yukina." I said, as I rubbed her back.
"Kurama. I don't know if she'll make it. There's a possibility she won't." She said. "Genkai, isn't here. She could probably heal her. " Yukina said, as she looked up at me. "I know...that Koenma would find out. So I don't know, if you want to do that."
She's right. But if Nakamura doesn't get healed and soon, she'll ...die. There's no choice. I don't want her to die, i'd rather her be alive, then dead. She doesn't deserve to die.
"Yukina. Call Genkai. I don't care if koenma finds out. As long as she's alive." I said, as she nods.
"If that's what you want." She said as she began to walk away.
I waited until she turned the corner, then I entered Nakamura's room. I knew where aren't suppose to be in here. But this would probably be the last time I look at Nakamura.
I stepped into the medicine smelling room, and sit in the chair next to Nakamura's silent and still body. I look at her face, and the memories of how we first met in the hospital come back.
Flashback
"Young man, you should be proud. You just save this girls life. You may go in if you want to." I smiled, at her compliment, and nodded my head, as I walked into the room.
I sat down in a chair, on the far corner of the room.
'Look at her Shuichi. Isn't she beautiful.'
'Yes, she is very pretty.'
'Yes.'
'wait a second. Youko do you like her? Is that why i'm feeling weird?'
'Yes, Shuichi.'
I was wondering, why my Youko's hormones had kicked in at school the otehr day. I just shrugged them off back then. But they returned at the party, but only for awhile.
I looked at Nakamura and noticed she had awoken. I smile at her and begin to walk over to her.
"Good, your finally awake." I say. I made an attempt to touch her hand, but she flinches.
I look at her, but smile again, taking my hand away.
"Why are you here?" She yells at me.
I didn't have time to answer because the nurse came in.
End Of Flashback
She had hated me back then. But I couldn't hate her.
I looked at one of the tables in the room, and notice a vase filled with roses.
Just like the ones I gave her.
Flashback
I walked into the parking lot and open the doors of her car with the keys. I pulled a rose out of my hair and dropped it in the backseat, instantly hundreds of roses appear.
I smile and go back upstairs, to hand the nurse the keys to her car.
I ha to go back to get her car, which she had left at the party.
End Of Flashback
I smile at the memory, and look over at Nakamura again.
I noticed she had bruises all over her body also.
That couldn't have been from the cutting. Someone must have hit her.
I could feel Youko getting angry.
'Youko try to control yourself you are in a hospital.'
'Fine!'
I look at her bandaged arms. Both were now bandaged. She had lost alot of blood, from the first time and that was only about a week ago. She must have lost alot more, this time. She had cut herself more this time. Not just once or twice.
I looked down at my bloodstained clothes. I could smell the mixture of salt and water, reach my nose.
Am I crying? No.
I look up and notice Yugasi in the doorway, just as she begins to close it.
I hadn't even heard her come in.
"Hi Shuichi." She says as she sits in the seat next to me."I asked the nurse if I could be with Nakamura in her last hours or minutes of life. She said yes."
I nod my head.
"Shuichi. How did you find her?" She asks me.
I look up at her and began to tell her how I found her.
Acouple of minutes later I finish my story.
"I never knew." She said as she began to cry.
"Yes." I said.
BBBBBBBEEEEEEEEEEPPPPP
I stood up quickly, as did Yugasi.
"OH MY KAMI! SHUICHI SHE'S DYING!" Yugasi cries out.
Where's Genkai and Yukina!
'Shuichi! She's DYING! Don't let her die!'
'There's nothing I can do Youko.'
I could feel Yugasi hold onto my shirt for support. I hug her.
At that moment the doctors rush in. Everything happened so fast.
"Clear!" One of the doctors yelled.
"1! 2! 3!" another one yelled.
"CLEAR!" The other one yelled, as he pressed machines onto Nakamura's chest.
"MOVE OUT OF MY WAY!" I heard someone yell.
Genkai.
"You idiots! You cannot help her! Now GET OUT AND LET ME WORK!" Genkai yelled.
"WE CAN'T JUST LET YOU TAKE OVER JUST LIKE THAT! WE DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU!" One of the doctors yell.
"I'm Genkai." she simply replied, soon after the doctors left.
Genkai placed a hand over the place where Nakamura's heart would be, as light emerged from her hand.
I could feel my heart pounding in my chest, as I watched genkai and heard the beeping machine.
beep. beep.
I sighed relief and almost fell.
I felt Yugasi next to me stiffen and stop crying.
"Shu...Shui..Shuichi. SHE'S ALIVE!" She yelled her voice filled with happiness.
I smiled. "Yes, she is."
I looked over at Genkai."Thank you."
"It was nothing Kurama." She says as she begins to walk out.
She stops as she begins to open the door. "Oh, kurama I know this isn't the time, but Koenma will want to see you tomorrow."
I nod.
End Of Shuichi's POV
Okay, i'm going to end it here. I'm sort of having writer's block so please help me! If you have any suggestion or anything you want to happen in the story...don't hesitate to say so...i need help. I'm not sure what my reviewers, reader, whatever, want to happen in the story. Atleast add ONE suggestion. LOL. I really need your help. LOL. Thanks..
Now to thank my reviewers:
Hirina:This chapter was my best one? REALLY? YAY! See I didn't end it there. LOL.
Kiwadoi...: Oneword...hey that sounds familiar like from a song. An old one at that... yea it is easier.
Pixie-loves-night: NO IT ISN"T THE END! lol. No it isn't...because everyone wants me to continue. ButI have writer's block. SO yea.lol
Bookworm0492: Yes, it shall continue..and what the hell is anti-climacitic? LOL
Sonya-White-Angel: it was sad wasn't it. Yea, well, i'll continue.
Yuki Amida: Yea, i argue with myself sometimes...lol.
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