Although the story is complete, I thought I'd take the time to address some things from the reviews I've gotten, which I very much appreciated. It compelled me to keep writing this story. Anyway, in regards to Lori--I don't know what point in the story you are speaking of when you ask who had a passionate kiss. It's probably Jess and Rory, though. To Thucydides: I respect your constructive criticism and I agree with you that Jess would not reveal that he slept with Rory. However, he also wouldn't have said a lot of things that I put in his mouth, calling her an snobby, elitist socialite and the like. In one episode of G.G., it took some pushing, but Jess finally admitted to Luke that he got the black eye from a swan. I didn't want to go through a bunch of dialogue of "What did you do?" "Nothing" "Had to have done something, how do you explain not stopping her"; blah blah blah.
I truly believe that the ending that I created will be similar to what we'll see on the show in the future. However, I'm willing to consider making an alternate ending for those who a) did not feel this jibed with the show or b) just want more Jess/Rory stuff.
Finally, I'd like to add: Paris is awesome. She does a lot of odd stuff and I feel, is not fleshed out completely on the show. You never know what she is going to do. She comes off (especially in the early seasons) as a very structured, don't-rock-the-boat kind of person. She made Rory run with her in the Student Council Elections, not because she and Rory were friends, but to ensure her place at Harvard. She's an insecure, mile-a-minute talker who is extremely intelligent and has numerous barbs and insults stored away in her brain. You can practically hear the theme for the wicked witch when she comes barrelling down a hallway.
So, the 'unpredictable' element of Paris--she worked very hard to get into Harvard, then goes 'Whoop, this lily-picking freak said Rory and my journey is not done, I guess I'll forget about my hardcore desire to go Harvard and just follow her around like a puppy, even living in the same dorm room. She jeopardized her status as a Yale student by dating a professor, got into (ack!) arts & crafts, dumped her perfect boyfriend (Jamie), starting dating Doyle, is grossed out by sick people yet is pre-med...I guess what I'm trying to say is that I really would like to know the innerworkings of Paris' mind. You think you understand her, have her pegged, and then she does something totally out-of-character.
Okay, I guess that's all. If you would like me to write an alternate ending, either write it in the review or email me at