Thanks for the review and if you like this one you like Colors of the Wind my other story

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Zhao smiled in triumph , finally they had spotted the flying bison that belonged to the Avatar . "Captain ! get ready to shoot that bison down !" the captain did as he was toldAnd waited for the signal the admiral smiled and nodded they released the catupaults"Goodbye Avatar " Zhao mumbled to himself

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"Do you hear something Katara ?" Sokka asked " Yes ! I hear your big mouth !"she said Sokka gave her a glare and continued munching on Leechy nuts . "Come on guys stop fighting " Aang said cheerfully "it's a beautiful day. " Aang received glares form Sokka and Katara as well as Zuko , and Appa groaned while Momo purred and cocked his head to the side . Sokka turned around and shrieked " Yeah! A beautiful day to be shot out of the sky kinda day ! " Aang whirled around and so did Katara and Zuko their eyes widened in shock

"Aang look out ! " she cried Aang began dodging the flaming rocks as fast as he could .

Suddenly Katara lost her footing "woah help ! " she hung on to the edge of the saddle"hang on Katara !" she looked up to see Sokka handing her a rope Zuko got ready to grab her when the rope snapped "Help! " she screamed she grabbed Appa's fur and tried to hang on but her hands slid through the oily fur and she fell into the freezing water below"Katara ! " Zuko yelled he looked for her in the vast ocean below , Katara slipped under the water unable to swim any longer she saw she was far away from the bottom that was good she couldn't feel anything the water was so cold suddenly she blacked out when she felt a hand grab her out of the water

Sango- thanks for reviewing , and thanks for the critisim ! hope this is better