Yaaay you reviewed... well one person I didn't know reviewed and said they wanted more soo... why not? Aaanny way I decided to make this chapter two parts... not cause its xtremely long... well actually it is HA... well longer any way but my editor isn't on so she cant' edit the second half so im left with only a half edited and I don't want to miss any big fat mistakes... even though the first half prolly got some mistakes but I don't caaaare here it issss (i changed it to chapter two cause part 2 is really long nowwww)

Chapter 2

All of the sudden Nor felt the entire building vibrating. Very slow at first, it sent a small tingle, a resonance, up her feet into her entire body. She looked out the window to see what might be causing it, but she couldn't see anything that could be causing it. She walked away from her window and stopped, the vibrating had changed, she could feel the difference. It was stronger now, not by much, but a little stronger. It changed again, still getting stronger yet. The vibrating was growing in power, strong and fast. In what felt like seconds the entire building had begun vibrating to the point where it was apparent.

Nor's chair fell down from where it had been set last and began to move back and forth in her cell. It hit wall, after wall, after wall until it smashed itself into pieces, pieces that continued to move around her cell. All of the furniture that wasn't attached to the walls in the entire prison was on the floor in pieces, or on a rare occasion, whole and a large deadly projectile. The vibrating continued to grow and gain strength. She needed something to hold onto, something that would keep her from falling. She looked across the room at the first thing she thought would do the job, her bed. When she went to move forward, towards her bed, a chair leg came out of nowhere and smashed into her leg. She winced and fell down, but she didn't have time to think about if her leg was broken or not, she needed to get to the bed, and she needed to get there fast. She tried to get up but she fell down, the vibrating was too strong. She tried again and failed. She tried a third time and was finally able to get to her feet, she stumbled but kept her balance and took another step forward.

The building began to shake now, it began to shake to the point where Nor could barely stay standing up. All the chair pieces were flying accross the floor of her cell, it was hard for Nor to even stay standing up, let alone dodge flying pieces of wood. She stumbled forward and lost her balance, she threw her weight in the opposite direction of the bed and stayed standing up. The bed wasn't far away, but with this vibrating, Nor knew she couldn't make it there without falling over so she went to move toward the window so she could hold onto the bars. She turned around to head back when the building shook powerfully and her body was pushed toward the window. Seconds before she was about to hit her head she noticed that the view outside wasn't moving at all, the building wasn't moving back and forth, it was just... vibrating, she didn't have time to think on the question though. She threw her weight backwards to try and stabilize herself, like she had done before but the building shook in the other direction, the direction she was throwing her weight, she flew backwards and smashed her head on the side of her bed. She screamed in pain and held on to a bed leg to stop herself from further smashing her body up against the walls.

She really hadn't noticed what was happening around her during the shaking and she just realized that all the doors were off their hinges and on the floor. Everyone was awake and either out of their cells, or making their way out of their cell. This was her chance; this was her chance to be free again. She pushed herself up off of the floor using the bed for balance right when the shaking stopped. It just stopped, not slowly subsiding in a way as the vibrating had began, but it just stopped completely. Nor looked around puzzled. She didn't know what had caused the shaking to begin with, and she didn't know why it stopped, and she didn't care.

She bolted to the door into the hallway between two walls of cells. There were a few torches in random places that were lit and still shining, they illuminated the scene of destruction; it looked as if a twister had just strolled straight through the prison floor and ripped apart everything in its path. Through all of the destruction and confusion everyone was running to then nearest stairwell so that they could finally leave a place that had contained them for so long. Nor began to run down a flight of stairs closest to her.

As she ran down the first flight of stairs Nor could hear cries coming from stairs below, cries that mingled with the shouts of the Gale Forcers. She couldn't go back now, she couldn't go back even if she wanted too. There were so many people running down the stairs behind her. But Nor wanted her freedom and she would do anything she could to get it. With this thought in mind, a new determination formed, she began to run faster and claw the people ahead of her out of her way. As she ran down another flight of stairs she saw them, the Gale Forcers. There was a torch on the wall behind the Gale Forcers, its light reflecting off of their metal weapons and illuminating any reflective surface on their uniforms, giving them a supernatural, powerful appearance. Her heart beat faster at the sight of them but her feet didn't slow in the least. She kept going at full speed down the stairs. She didn't care that they had weapons, she didn't care that they were geared. All she cared about was being free. Nor counted the Gale Forcers, ten. They must have spread out to each stairwell in the entire prison... no even then there would be more than ten. The only possible explanation for this was that the vibrating did more damage on the lower levels then it did on the upper ones, leaving more of the Gale Forcers injured. Logically, though, this didn't make sense. If the building had been shaking so violently the top would have gotten the worst of it not the bottom. Despite the strangeness of the shaking Nor reminded herself of what she saw out the window, or what she didn't see for that matter, and what she didn't see was the building shaking.

She stopped halfway down the stairwell and grabbed the railing. It's now or never. Her hands tightened on the railing and she threw herself over the railing onto the stairs behind the Gale Forcers. She turned her body in a way so that her shoulder to the brunt of the blow when her body hit the wall. She fell down to the stairs behind the Gale Forcers, she was going to be free! She cried out in triumph. Big mistake. They noticed she had made it over and one dispatched from the group and went to go after her. She looked behind her and saw him chasing her. She needed to get away. She needed to be free and he wasn't going to stop her from getting what she needed. Nor ran like she never ran before, down 10, 15, 20, 30, 34 flights of stairs. When she hit the first floor she ran toward the first door she saw, moonlight was streaming through it, illuminating it, making it look like a beacon of hope. A beacon for freedom. A beacon for Nor. She ran and just kept on running until she was out of the building, out of the prison yard, away from the walls, into an alley behind a row of houses. She still didn't stop running. She wanted to get as far away from the prison as possible, as far away from the emerald city as possible.

All of the sudden, as she turned off a street around a rather large and wealthy looking manor she felt somebody, or something grab her arm.

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