ObsedianFox13 I'm glad you like my idea for the next story. I apologize for and spelling and grammar mistakes. I thought I had caught them all. I think once I'm completely done with the story I'll go back and correct any mistakes. So please just try to ignore them.
E.S.C no worries there, I'm an Inu/Kag supporter all the way.
Bubblez4ya that's weird, I sent it again. Oh and your e-mail doesn't show on your review. If you still don't receive it tell me and I'll give you my e-mail so you can contact me then I'll have the right one.
Adri66215 well thanks for the review any way. I thought they were OOC so I guess I'm not the only one. Still it turned out pretty good.
Darkhanyou483 it was a lot of fluff. I hope I didn't overkill on the waff.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only hmmm… since I admire the fact that you did the dare and the fact that you're such a loyal reader I'll put it to vote.
BlueMoonDog why thank you. Its not everyday someone tells me my story is the best remake of anything.
Samurai Fish I'm also glad that I'm not a mean author.
QT102 I'm glad to see so much enthusiasm.
Animegurlzrule I know. I haven't found any completed versions of "Ever After."
Clouds of the Sky I'm glad you like it.
Mii-chan1 hail to the fluff!
Kogaandkagomeforever I was starting to wonder about your name.
Krazie-edge no need to apologize! Enjoy being hyper!
Kag2inu that is one of my all time favorite scenes in my story! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it enough to review it!
AN: So what do all think? Should I put in a 'oops! Saw her in the bath!' scene? Please send in your opinions. If voted yes then I will upgrade to T for teen. So if you find that you can't find this story under K+ then check there.
'Sigh as much as I would love to sit here and watch Kagome all night we still have business to take care of.'
'Why is he awake?'
'Urgh.'
'Getting there.'
'Argh.'
'Ok either wake up so we can talk or shut up so we can watch Kagome in peace.'
'Mugh.'
'WAKE UP YOU LAZY ASS!'
'I didn't do it!'
'…'
'What are you talking about?'
'Uh nothing?'
'Whatever.'
'Anyway now that sleeping beauty's awake-'
'HEY!'
'-we can get on with business.'
'Business? What business?'
'If you would stop interrupting him you would know now shut up!'
'Keh'
'Thank you, Youkai, now as I was trying to say we need to figure out the Kagome issue.'
'Issue! What issue! There is no issue everything's fine! I'll have my body back soon, you two will stop bugging me, and I'll be on my merry way!'
'What about Kagome!'
'What about her?'
'Oh no! There's no way your going to back to that "all I need her for is getting back my body and mind" attitude!'
'You can't fool us! We live in your head! We know you love her just as much as we do!'
'You go right on thinking that.'
'Don't you dare pull this crap now! You admitted that you were falling in love with her.'
'I did no such thing!'
-Que flashback-
He cracked open the door just enough to see inside. Kagome was swaying and dancing around while singing softly. Inuyasha did not bother trying to pick up the word just concentrating on the sound. Slowly he walked into his room and started dancing with her. One hand intertwined with hers and the other on her hip. Kagome didn't pull away, just simply flowed with him.
'I never noticed how graceful she was. She's funny, calm, quick-witted, and everything my mate should be. I have to agree with youkai. He did find a perfect mate.' All to soon the song ended and they broke apart.
"Thank you for the dance my good sir." Kagome curtsied and smiled brightly. 'He's getting nicer. I think I'll like staying here.'
"The honor was mine." Inuyasha bowed. 'Wow I have fallen for her.'
-End flashback-
'Where the hell did that come from?''Your memory. And you have me to thank for that. So you see? You can't pretend that you don't at least like her.'
'I sure as hell can try.'
'Besides what makes you think that we would just leave you alone when you get your body back?'
'Huh?''Earlier you said and I quote, "Issue! What issue! There is no issue everything's fine! I'll have my body back soon, you two will stop bugging me, and I'll be on my merry way!" So what makes you think that we will stop bugging you?'
'If anything we would start bugging you more.'
'Making it so you can't sleep at night.'
'We won't make you forget about Kagome either.'
'Oh no. We'll plague your mind with images.'
'Memories.'
'Hey this isn't funny.'
'Then when you'll think that you'll do anything as long as you can't see her happy face…'
'We'll get into your conscience.'
'Remind you of anything mean you ever said or thought about her.'
'Come on guys stop joking around.'
'After that we'll show all the possible happy ending you could have had with her.'
'Mating.'
'Having pups.'
'Seeing your pups grow up.'
'Growing old together.'
'You know this isn't going to work. In order for me to be scared of a life without Kagome I have to like her first. Which I don't.'
'Good.'
'Then you won't mind us. Because after we finish showing you the life you could have had with Kagome…'
'We're going to show you the life Kagome could have without us.'
'She could wander off and die by the hands of some blood crazed Youkai.'
'Or she could be raped by some unworthy male.'
Now Inuyasha was starting to growl. Now since youkai was in control of the body it didn't escape his throat. In fact the room was completely silent except for Kagome's gentle breathing. The complete opposite of what was happening in Inuyasha's head. The growling only escalated when they continued.
'Then again she could be living the perfect little life happily married.'
'A nice house…big yard'
'Living with the love of her life…'
'Koga.'
Everything went silent at that one word. Inuyasha immediately stopped growling, from shock or unspeakable anger and jealousy no body knows. The youkai and human just stayed quiet letting the possibility sink in before they continued.
'Oh yes I can see it now.'
'They'll have pups…'
'Lots of them…'
'Running in the yard….'
'In Kagome's arms…'
'Her belly filled with pups…'
'His pups…'
'Koga's pups inside Kagome.'
You could practically hear Inuyasha's mind snap at the last comment. He had remained silent when they had brought up Koga being Kagome's mate. It seemed his anger, jealousy, and possessiveness was just building up as they continued taunting him. He had tried staying calm. Trying to convince himself that he didn't care. But the last bit about Kagome bearing Koga's pups sent what little control he had flying out the window. Now it was a really good thing that the youkai was in control because if Inuyasha were then he would have woken up Kagome with how loud he was yelling.
'NO WAY IN HELL, HEAVEN, OR EARTH IS HE GETTING NEAR MY KAGOME! SHE'S MY MATE NOT HIS! SHE WOULD NEVER GO TO HIM!'
Now if the human had a body he would be smirking. Where as the youkai was in control of the body and he did smirk. Then there was Inuyasha who was still oblivious to what he's admitted.
'Hey you never know. After she breaks the curse and you tell her you don't like her…who knows? Maybe she'll go to Koga for comfort…'
'Then while she's being comforted by him she'll realize how sweet and kind he really is…'
'Then she'll fall madly in love with him.'
'WHO SAYS THAT I'LL LET HER LEAVE! SHE'S MINE DAMN IT AND NO WIMPY FLEE-BITTEN WOLF IS GOING TO CHANGE THAT!'
'Who says she likes you back?'
'Maybe she doesn't think you're the right one for her.'
'I'M THE ONLY ONE FOR HER!'
'That was easier than I thought.'
'-Clap clap- I'm so proud of you. It looks like our little Inu if finally growing up.'
'It's a proud moment.'
'What are you two babbling about? Wait… oh shit.'
'It was an honor manipulating his small mind with you.'
'Like wise if it were possible I would shake your hand right now.'
'I hate you both.'
'So how are you going to make up for yelling at her?'
'I have an idea…'
AN: Wow…I scared myself with this chapter…