Okay, sorry I was out for so long. My internet went down and it took me ages to get it back up. I've written a chapter 3 and I changed chapter 2 so that the human girl is a dark elf. (Well, actually, a human pretending to be a dark elf.) That's to make it more realistic, because I figure even if the human is powerful, the drow will still have a very hard time respecting her. Thank you all so much for the reviews! Please keep giving me advice and suggestions.