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Kralia thank you for the constructive criticism. I know I suck but hey, it was a spur of the moment idea. Unfortunately, Wormtail, being sadly neglected, had previously experienced an unlucky injury to the arm. (The result of an experimental charm performed by the ever-cruel Sirius)
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Sorry I don't think this chapter is my fav but oh well
Chapter 2
"Thank goodness someone has got sense enough to turn on a light." Hannah continued pruning herself and turned to button her blouse. She shot Sirius a fiery glare over her left shoulder. He seemed not to notice.
"So, how do you suppose a magical train breaks down?" Remus asks conversationally. Unexpectedly, the compartment door blasted open and flooded the room with light from the corridor. Peter Pettigrew stood in the doorway with wand in hand and a bandage on his left arm. (Just for you Kralia)
"You guys aright? I heard the screams and found your compartment from the plans that you discussed" He Looked around the room and tried to suppress a fit of laughter. The trunks had toppled out of the storage compartment and the girls' personals were strewn all over the place.
The occupants of the room also saw the jumble of the belongings on the floor and the girls threw themselves over them to attempt to hide the explicit display of undergarments. Sirius took advantage of this distraction to stuff a lacy pair of panties into his pocket.
"Look Lily," James exclaimed excitedly. "Lily we match! It's a sign! A sign of destiny." Lily looked down at her exposed bra and let out another shriek and threw on the nearest shirt. She then subtly looked to James' boxers. They did indeed match: White with red polka dots. Creepy.
The nearest shirt was Hannah's, who was considerably smaller than Lily. It fit Hannah comfortably, and was naturally extremely tight on Lily. The boys didn't even bother to conceal their stares.
"You all disgust me" She glowered unrelentingly at James.
"I found your robes." Announced James as he pulled them out of the cupboard. She snatched them away from him and hurriedly threw them over her shoulders.
The lights flickered on over their heads and the sound of the engines started up again as a feminine voice filled the train.
"Students, I apologize for the temporary inconvenience. We have resumed our transit to Hogwarts and will be arriving shortly."
Soon after, the train slowed to a stop.
"Finally!" Lily gathered her stray belongings and crammed them uncharacteristically into her bag and stormed out into the crowded corridor.
The other girls quickly followed. They made their way through the crowd to the awaiting carriages. Hannah and Natalie joined a group of fellow sixth year girls from various houses in one carriage while Lily made off to her duties as prefect.
"Lily is hot when she's angry." James announced as they loaded up onto the carriage. His companions rolled their eyes and Sirius heaved an exaggerated sigh. "Her eyes get all narrowed and her cheeks turn pink and she licks her lips. Oh she licks her lips whenever she's angry. Its quick and completely luscious."
The carriages traveled smoothly up the hill towards Hogwarts castle.
"Hannah," whispered Natalie to one of her best friends "I… um, well, I think I…'
"Like Remus?" Hannah had a knack for finishing peoples' sentences,
usually to her preference. Natalie blushed and suddenly became very interested in the hem of her robes and began to fidget with a loose thread. Her blonde bangs fell over her brown eyes.
"How did you know?" she had never told anyone about it and she figured she hid it very well. "Was it that obvious? How could you tell?" She was basically pleading now. She was naturally very inward about her own feelings. She spent so much time on everyone's happiness, it seemed she was unconcerned abojut her own.
Hannah looked at her friend with compassion "I think I got a hint in our first year when you wouldn't notice if I hucked a note at your head but you were to buisy staring at the back of remus' head, sighing every 30 seconds. Then there was that time in our third year when you stumbled on the stairs and fell right into him and turned a shade of red that resembled or house color. Then there was today, and in between, everyday consisted of at the very least two full minutes of staring." She nodded her head, satisfied with her explaination. "I don't think there is a Gryffindor who doesn't know, besides Remus.His oblivion is actually pretty sad."