The frantic factory
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The next day, there were tons of people gathered outside of Olaf's factory. Klaus arrived, early with violet.
"Klaus! There's nobody here, but us and that huge crowd!" violet said, confused.
"They'll get here. Maybe they slept in." Klaus said, smiling. He was so exited, he was finally going to meet Mr. Olaf, and see his factory!
Eventually, a sleepy isodora and messy Carmela arrived. Isodora was holding Quigley's hand so he would practically drag him, for she was so tired.
Carmela was standing next to esme "Nero was sick" she grunted. Then soon sunny arrived, with Duncan. Klaus waved at sunny.
"Hi!" Klaus's sister said
She smiled and she walked with Duncan to the row of winners.
I want to go in, NOW!"Carmella yelled
"Camellia, it's nine-fifty nine. Just wait one more minute." Esme said.
Camellia growled at him. Quigley tugged isodora's arm, to get her to wake up. She dropped her teddy bear but went back to sleep.
"Isodora!" he screamed. Sunny didn't say anything, just frowned. Duncan was eating a chocolate bar.
"Ducan! Stop eating!" Quigley said. Klaus and violet were just fine.
Suddenly, the gates opened.
"Please Enter!" A voice came from the factory, probably some microphone or something. The golden ticket winners entered through the gates. "Close the gates." The gates closed. The winners stood there.
"Come closer." The voice announced. They came closer. "Thank you for coming visitors, you are welcome to my factory today, and I humbly await the excitement." there was a microphone lying on the ground.
Camellia picked it up, and spoke into the microphone to see if it worked. It did. Her voice as spread through the streets.
She nudged esme and gave it to her. Esme sighed.
"Hello, everyone. If you want to know who will be the winner of this contest you should know that it will be the greatest person in the universe. That person's name, is..." esme started, then pointing to camellia and was about to say her name until...
The doors to the factory opened and revealed a bunch of dolls. They sang,
Mr.Olaf, mr.olaf The Amazing prisoner!
Mr. Olaf, mr.olaf, Everybody Give a Cheer!
He's Modest, Clever, and So Smart, Barely Can Retain It!
With So Much Generosity, There is No Way To Conation It!
To contain it!
To Contain, To Contain, To Contain!
Mr. Olaf, Mr. Olaf, He's The One You're About to Meet.
Mr.olaf, mr.olaf, He's a Generous Who Just Can't Be Beat.
A Magician and a Chocolate Whiz,
The Best Guy Who Ever Lived,
Mr.olaf, Here He IS!
They all stared at it oddly. Then fireworks and candy shot out of the place where the dolls were.
The fireworks hit the dolls and made explosions, blowing them up. The dolls began melting and stopping and the singing faded away... slowly... Then, they all stopped.
Everyone stared and just kept staring, except for one person. Guy with a black coat on and gloves and a walking stick, He was clapping.
"Heheh... Wasn't that great! I mean, it was just wonderful! Completely designed by me, and even I think it's amazing! ...Wow." The guy said, walking up in front of them.
"Who's he?" isodora asked. Quigley raised her eyebrow at him.
"Um, sir? I don't believe you're supposed to be in here right now." Quigley said. "We are the golden ticket winners, not you..." The man smiling.
"Um... hello, hello, hello! I'm count olaf!" Olaf said, smiling.
"Wow, so that's what he really looks like." Said sunny. Klaus glared at sunny.
"He has feelings, sunny, ya' know?" Klaus said
"Totally agreed." isodora said. "He has feelings lots of feelings, like the fact that chewing gum should rule the world!" Quigley glared at her, angrily.
"Isadora, those may be your thoughts, but not anyone else's! Quigley screamed.
"Ladies and Gentlemen please..." Olaf said. He stared at esme like he was in a trance, and what is you name little lady" "carm-" not you! "Her" "esme- esme squalor"
When he was done staring like it took 10min. "Now, how is everyone doing?" Klaus nodded, isodora fell asleep on Quigley's leg, and sunny growled. Camellia and Duncan didn't do anything.
"Well... Um... It seems like you're all doing okay," Olaf said, frowning.
"Isadora! Wake up!" Quigley screamed. "You can't sleep all day! I told you to go to bed early." isodora woke up, still tired.
"Well, you seem all cheerful!" Olaf said to Klaus.
"Yep. I'm very exited to be here!" Klaus replied, smiling. Olaf turned to isoadora.
"Oh, uh... That's... nice... You seem all ready for bed with your teddy bear and pajamas..." Olaf said, nervously. "Now, you three look like you're going to barf..."
"Well, let's go inside! It's freezing out here!" Olaf said, happily. They followed Olaf in. "Please, it's fine, place your coats on the floor, nothing' wrong with that!"
Isodora took off her pajamas, which she was still wearing (she had clothing under them), and Klaus took of his backpack, which he wears all the time, and Duncan, camellia, and sunny didn't have anything really to take off.
Quigley took off his green sweater and violet took off her coat. Olaf was wearing a black, smooth, nice looking jacket. He took it off and revealed his cloths. His walking stick looked a bit like a candy cane, he had reddish and blackish Goth-like cloths on, with purple gloves and a tall black hat. He was also wearing a golden "O" around his neck.
"Well, lemme' see who you all are." Olaf said, happily. He looked at Klaus. "You're good." He looked at isodora. "Oh my gosh..." He looked at sunny. "Ahh." He looked at camellia. "Whoa!" He looked at Duncan. "Interesting size..."
"Okay I've got it! Klaus is good, isodora is WAY too small and I do not like the gum thing, sunny is just... ahhhh! Camellia is insanely scary and frightening, and Duncan is fat. Okay, that's all!" Said Olaf, smiling.
"I'm not SMALL!" isodora screamed. "You got something' else to say, jerk?" sunny asked. Eduardo started crying.
"Follow me, to the chocolate room!" Olaf said, walking. They walked through the giant hall, which had wallpaper of poison and antidotes. They came to a door.
"In here, you'll find all kinds of fun stuff! I call it, The Chocolate room." Olaf opened the door. "Now, I know chemistry is fun, but these sets are not to be played with. They are for eating! There really good!" Everyone stared.
There was a huge river of chocolate going through the whole room. There were trees, growing basketballs on them. There were giant chemistry sets that you could suck on. There was also tons of beautiful bright green grass, so bright it looked as if it was glowing!
"Try some of my grass if you'd like. You can eat anything in this room, but I'd go for the grass. The grass is nutritious, probably the only good-for-you thing in my factory. The trees grow "cema Berries", which are yummy and eatable anytime for some good tastes. Just, mark my words, DO NOT drink from the chocolate river. Enjoy yourselves!" Olafs long speech ended, and he let everybody in.