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FastFuriouschick-Lex's part inthe storyline does improve for him, after this chapter he onlygets hurt once more.i'm thinking about maybe pairing Lex with someone else...but i don't know whoyet...most likely...

Jeweled Stars- Is the mary-sue really bad? Was it that chapter or the whole fic so far?

I don't know what the Techno's gun things are called so for my story they are called tasers.


Rayne got up a few minutes later, she dressed, and walked into the hall. Her guards had left, so she assumed that ment she could leave the hotel. She walked outside, and headed toward the mall. When she turned the corner, the guards at the door, told Mega she had left, and was heading toward the mall. A few kids saw her coming, and having watched the citynet broadcast of the wedding, they laughed and hid. She arrived at the mall a few minutes later. Everyone was still asleep except for Trudy and Amber who were feeding their Brady, and Bray, in the cafe.

"Hi," Rayne said

"Rayne, why are they here," Trudy demanded.

"They, who are you talking about?"

"Ram and that other guy."

"They stayed," Rayne asked unable to hide her confusion, and enthusiasm.

"Yes, why," Trudy asked.

"I sent them a message yesterday, but I didn't ask them to stay."

"But we did," Ram said walking into the cafe, "We can do more here. Why, excatly did you marry Mega anyway," he continued trying to change the subject.

"He threathened to kill the mallrats," Rayne said only half-lieing.

"Oh," Lex said hearing the last part.

"I'm sorry for haveing to betray ya'll, but I had to. Trudy you said them, who else came," Rayne said ignoring Lex.

"Me," Slade said as he to came into the cafe.

"I'll bring ya'll information whenever I can," Rayne said.

"Why don't you try and get more information now," Slade said still upset about being punched.

Lex followed Rayne out stopping her before she got anywhere, "Rayne, wait."

"What do you want," Rayne asked coldly.

"I'm sorry," Lex said, "for the note."

"Yea," Rayne said turning back around.

"Did you?"

"Did I what?"

"Sleep with Mega," Lex practically yelled causing the group from the cafe to come running.

"Yea. I mean sorry honey, I don't feel good. Dosen't excatly work on your wedding night," Rayne said sarcasticly.

"How could you?"

"How could I. Lex we didn't have have thing, there's nothing for you to be mad about," Rayne said turning around.

Lex put his hand on her shoulder to stop her, she spun around and punched him, knocking him out cold. The group stared at her in surprise.

"He deserved it," Rayne said coldly, and finially leaving.

"She might not be comeing back for awhile," Ram said calmly.

"I supposed we had better drag him inside," Amber said irratablely.

"Yea," Jay said walking out and grabing on toone Lex's shoulders.

Ram grabbed the other arm, the two of them pulled him inside of the doorway. Gel stood over him wondering what to do, she ran into the cafe and got a glass of water and dumped it on him, when that didn't work she just ignored him.


Don't worry Lex's story line will get better for him...I hope