Chapter 5 and only 1584 words I am shamed…please review J

Chapter 5 the date

Randy sat in his warm hotel room , he felt like an idiot , he couldn't believe he had kissed trish

It didn't matter he thought 'maybe she's forgotten about it'. but , she hadn't if anything she loved him more now. She lay on her sofa watching TV , well she wasn't paying much attention until she heard a knock at the door , she got up and opened the door

" hey trish !"

" eddie , torrie hey" trish let them in , looked around the corridors and returned inside

" what is it ?" asked trish curiously

" well torrie said you should be the first to know , we're a couple !" said eddie

" great !" exclaimed trish " is that all ?"

" yeah !" said torrie stepping outside with eddie

When they left there was another knock this time it was randy

" hi !" she said

" ready to go ?" he asked

" yup , lets go" she said , grabbing on to Randy's arm

They climbed into a limo and set off.

When they arrived they got a private table at the back of the restaurant , they ordered and got talking.

"..and that's how we got him to cluck" said randy finishing his tale

Trish laughed , she loved randy but she loved his stories even more !

They arrived at the hotel at 2:45 am still laughing and joking

When they got to Trish's room she said " thanks for tonight , it was great !"

" my pleasure !" said randy smiling

" so..you wanna come in for a bit ?" she asked

" uh sure , why not ?" he said , containing his excitement rather well

The next morning…

Trish opened her eyes and yawned she was surprisingly warm…. Too warm

She turned over to see randy lying with his arms around her !

She smiled and cuddled him till she fell asleep…

Sweet I should become an author , I have a real talent

Please R&R why are my chapters so short but so good ?