Shitza: (listening to the different BB themes) Doesn't the different BB songs rock?

Oh, hi... sorry... just relistening to a lot of music. Did you know that once I was thinking about having Kim to sing a lot more in the different stories. For example, during the battle between Veymo and Kim/Daichi, they would have used the song In the End by Linkin Park. Of course, I changed my mind a while after so that didn't survive. I was also thinking about using music, but not text, meaning rewriting beautiful songs like Sign of Wish. Sadly enough only one line survives, and that is the fact that Kim can sing... so unlike me... hem, hem...

If you wonder why I changed it, its because I have given Ming Ming more to do. Kim started too look too much alike Ming so that was the reason for having that subject out of it. Not that I dislike Ming, I mean even if the girl is a little weird and very hyper-alike, she is a great blader and good at her stuff.

Anyway, this chapter sure will be interesting for all of you. Haven't you wondered who made the Bladebreakers land where they came? I have gven out hints and clues but I wonder if you have solved the clue. I simply can say the culprit is not too far away. LOL

This is a ver finishing chapter, so sorry it sounds so boring. There are a lot of details written, and a lot of new things added as well. You may wonder why I've been writing and speeding things up, but this is a flash chapter down towards the departure home.

Chapter 19 Goodbye Forever

The sun shone brightly over them. Tyson sat under a tree with huge red nuts, situated on a small cliff, humming for himself. It was a relaxing day, a day of peace. In his mind he could simply imagine the demons roars as they would never be able to get up ever again. He smiled humming happily as suddenly something ran up to him, attacking him...

"BOH!" a child's voice said. A small girl with bright green hair and red eyes laughed. She had pig tails, was dressed in a pink outfit that matched every villager of this place. The same top and the same kind of skirt. The girl had climbed up to his quiet spot, now sitting watching him. Tyson smirked back and gave her the thumbs up. The girl squealed, nearly falling back down. However her trained reflections saved her and she climbed back up again, laughing even more.

Tyson smiled. The small girl continued climbing, now heading towards some fruit a few metres above them. It was a long climb, but she looked dtermined to do it. Tyson didn't bother to help, he knew how women in this place reacted when men did their jobs. It was a complete dishonour to be helped by someone, something he did respect and therefor he wouldn't help unless help was really needed. Instead he dozed back, thinking. He could still not drop the fact he had seen his mother, for the first time in years. Maybe it could have been an illusion, but he doubted that any illusion would have caused the sme reaction within his heart.

Suddenly he heard a small scream as the girl fell down again. He sighed and stood up, catching her. The girl looked shocked for some seconds as he showed her an easier way of getting lunch. Launching his blade Dragoon served them with hurricane winds and a neat pile of oranges.


"SO, are you thinking of continuing that plan of yours?"

"Of course, actually we are close to succesful. Just a few more days and its off to freedom!"

"Yeah, can't believe we're going to make it!"

"We are bound to, we are bound to succeed!"


When you think everything is over, do ask yourselves is it really so? Remember as well as you have friends there may be enemies. Enemies at school, enemies at work. For Kim's part it was an enemy in her own Village. Calinia (see chap: 3, Dear sisters and Dear brothers), the snob who wanted the high post as pristess, had finally challenged Kim into a duel. A duel involving blades. A duel which decided the best female blader in the Village, and thus also so who would have the post as the high priestess.

The match would take place on top of the volcano of the Village of fire. People from all the ten villages had assembled around to watch. The Bladebreakers and Zeo had chosen to stay within their elements, yet since no one trusted Calinia, espacially not Zeo, they had their elements ready if anything would happen. Kim looked calm as she raised her bow, ready to fire the classic way she allways had. Calinia had a whip for a launcher, giving her the sort of domnestic feeling oozing from her. All the children yelled loving to see the fight that was about to start.

The women launched into the air. This was no battle in a dish, they simply had a few pillars standing on where the blades bounded upon. It was a deadly fight, if you fell you were dead. Their blades kept airborn by the immense heat. Kim dried the sweat from her forehead, still not stopping her eye contact with Calinia. The white haired women, still ver young though, started to attacl leaving Kim to put up all the defences she had.

'She was never this strong.' she though as Ruyaka was thrown back. The other blade followed, and the bit beast, a big blue bear, chased after. It soon caught up, rammed the Phoenix to thr ground. Ruyaka screamed in pain as the magnicient bird hit the lava, the blade following after. Kim watched in fear as the blade slowly melted. The bit chip flew back to her hand, but thus was that. She had lost.

Everyone was shocked. Calinia did some sort of a weird victory dance. The Bladebreakers all hurried towards Kim, who sat looking down upon her bit beast, pearly tears falling from her face. How? How did she loose?

Suddenly two of the guards grabbed her and dragged her away. When Zeo and the others found her again, she sat outside the walls talking to Raya. Dressed in colourless clothes and with several scars upon her arms. The laws said that the old priestess had to be taken down from her high post, and by doing so they had taken away all royalty and glory she had had. The thing that saved her from death was the fact she was the only light. If she hadn't been she could have been dead now. Tears still trickled down her face, more of shame then anything else. Raya was complaining loudly, the new priestess made hell out of everything. From having been the respected Elite Raya had been thrown down as well, but in another way. Now the priestess took care of the more fun details in her job, like leading armies and fight, to being the cleaner of the temple. It got worse now as the new priestess was hanging up riddiculous small flowers and catching butterflies for decoration. Raya felt sick from all the perfume.

Zeo bent down to his crying girlfriend, who clung to him for all she was worth. Kai caught Raya in the middle of her long speach and silenced her with a look. Hilary giggled softly while the rest simply shrugged. The sun was setting and tomorow would hopefully be a brighter day. The Villages were sending out their spies and such again now that things had calmed down. There lay a small airport in the north of China, which some had been ordered to go to. The guys would follow them and then take the first best flight back to Tokyo.

Raya sighed before returning back to the Village. A bell chimed loudly calling her back. Kim followed the rest of the back towards the Village of earth were her brother had relieved beyond relief, taken her in. Even if her popularity had slowly disappeared some Villages still gave her full access to stay, those being the Village of Darkness, Earth and surprisingly enough Lightning. Some previous hours ago, Kim had turned up with a cure for the young girl May, surprising the whole Valley. She had also explained about her hard work on purifying the lava. It wasn't much to help the whole population, but it helped one girl and that had been enough for the cold tigers to melt. Kim had been granted welcomes in a Village that once had hunted her down whenever she was near. It isn't so confusing then why she chose to stay in her brother's village, is it?

The Vilage of Earth, like all other Villages, was slowly rebuilt after the war. New houses grew from the ground and plants bloomed on the streets. The normal agriculture was yet again blooming for a new season. Daichi had sped up things so that no Village would have to starve. Ray said his goodbies before they walked in. he told them his sister wanted him to spend his last nights together with her. they all understood why, after this, who knew when they would see each other? They all suspected her was pplanning things together with her, something to do with securing the White Tiger's future.

The Remainers hurried towards the temple, were Daichi was waiting. They were late, the festivities were supposed to have started a few minutes ago and Daichi was growing impatient.He was dressed in a gold robe embroided with a leaflike patters in green and brown. He had black leather boots and a silver belt. He wore a lot of jewels and likely things making him look like the emperor instead of a priest.

Shi-Ma was still changing into her costume, which Hilary already knew how it looked like. Shi-Ma had called for her to get some oppinions. It was a beautiful dress in white with pearls making the same kind of leaf patterns as Daichi had. The girl looked beautiful, in Daichi's case stunningly beautiful.

The ceremony was ancient, and had never changed. in one way it is very unusual as it gives the new couple the same standard. Everything is from here shared equal and thus so you tie yourself for the rest of yur life, till death eventuallt settles you apart. A goblet of water to purify is shared between them as one of the Elders reads from an old book about the story of the first marriage made. Their hands are on the goblet to symbolise their trust. Four fires burn around them. The last of the ceremony after declaring their love for the world, is a mark they get. A middle aged woman steps forward with a burnt and still very hot piece of iron. She burns two small holes on Daichi's right hand, two on Shi-Ma's. it is painful. It is a magical symbol. If one of these holes will heal without a scar then this marriage is meant not to be. However that is rare because it most often leaves scars.

It is a celebration and a feast where everyone enjoys themselves. Getting drunk is not unusual with the alcoholic fruits fgrowing in this place and thus so the bladebreakers gets a flashback upon a feast some months ago when they celebrated the end of the Elite Tournemant. Well, people got drunk, they did weird stuff and such. Not wanting to look too weird or say something stupid to people that could reach anything around the world, they were slightly better at drinking this night.

Daichi and Shi-Ma had decided to move out towards Kim's and his mother's old house. It laid perhaps in the other end of the Valley, but still though it was a beautiful location. He had also said his sister could stay, however Kim had gently told him off saying she didn't want to disrupt anything. She said she was having bigger plans.

What these plans where they did not know.


The sun shone, kids played and the Bladebreakers said their Good Byes to a lot of people. Zeo went back to the Village of Darkness to bid his farewells to the Priestess of darkness, who gladly also gave him some startling predictions as well. Tyson visited the Angora, and also followed Max to the Village of Water. The water however made Tyson feel slightly uneasy. After all, he still couldn't drop the fact he had seen his mother somewhere here. Max said good byes to the Priest and Priestess and to a litle girl that caught up with him. The girl also wore Candy's old necklace, so it wasn't hard to know this girl had meant things for the blonde boy as well.

Kai didn't have many good buys, however he had luck. Normally, through the rules, Raya would probably have been banded to see him now after their departure, but the Russian had through one of his lonesome journeys stumbled accross an abandoned sac of gold he could use to pay her out of the Village claws. the sac however had belonged to some old grumpy man that took this rather badly having been stolen from his gold. kai had a few dreamless nights to look forwards to. Once this meeting with Dickenson in a few days was over Raya would probably follow him back to Russia for a while. She had a small education that could hopefully give her a job as well, which she looked forwards to.

Ray spent all his time in the Village of Lightning to tell his lifestory for his sister. He was also given a white pigeon that would carry messages and reports back to the Valley. It made them all uneasy as he seemed to have become some sort of spy for the Village. Lin also swore she would come to visit him. They also found out their little plan they had formed over the endless amount of night.

Ray was going to marry Mariah, finally...


Days passed into dreamlike landscapes as the Valley was slowly rebuilt to its formal glory. The only exception seemed to be the Village of Fire, where things crumbled apart. Would it sound surprising then that for the next following years the children being born there would be found with other elemental strength then Fire. But there is something that would allways be unchanged and that would be when the the celestial ring would appear around the moon, awakening the dead spirits. Everyone were assembled by the lake, awaiting the arrival of the souls from heaven.

A legend in this Valley said that once you were dead your soul never left Earth. Thus so they needed somewhere to rest. This lake was purer and holier then anything else in the Valley and the reason for the demons fearing it was the dead souls. Dead pure souls that wanted to purify the demons into nothingness.

It was also said that dead souls that left Earth unwillingly could appear more often, however it was a rare thing to do. Thus so it explained about Tyson's mother. The blunette waited eagerly as the water started to form into different people. Elders and youngsters, women and men... people that had died and still couldn't rest being without the people they loved. The lake was, what you could call, the middle stage before going to heaven.

Tyson left the others and waded out into the water. His very soul was concentrating upon his mother. Kai, Max and Zeohad followed too. For Max, he was hoping to perhaps see his sister again. Kai wanted to meet his parents and Zeo needed to see his mother.

Slowly the water formed before their eyes. Tyson ran over to his mother and hugged her, surprising people as normally you couldn't hug a spirit. Kai met his parents and they began long conversations in russian. For a rare occasion Kai was crying, yet he couldn't help it. This was something his heart had wanted ever since his parents had died. His bond with his parents had been strong and had never been able to break even though he had been trained to remain cruel like his grandfather.

Zeo met his mother for the second time, he also met the original Zeo. It felt really weird to look upon the younger version of himself.

Max however never got to meet his sister, whom the other Villagers had explained she must have gone into heaven already. They told her she was very wise, which seemed to calm his tears. They all said she would wait for her older brother when his time would come.

What started most people however was as the time was almost over, the lake glowed in a bright light. Daichi grabbed Kim's hand and the two of the hurried out walking on the water. This was magic beyond magic as their mother crossed many borders to reach them. What was said between the ghost and her children couldn't be heard. but looking into Daichi's and Kim's eyes it was something very special.

It really startled them, because seeing the live version of the mother they noticed how much that had been inherited. Daichi had the same colours as his mother, plus the same abilities iupon Earth. Kim resembled a lot of the mother, but had inherited her father's colours.

The moon however would need to disappear and when the sun broke over the horizon the magical night stopped. Kim and Daichi had returned to the others, now crying happily.

They both knew it would be a long time until they would see each other again...


The day of departure soon arrived with a small team of spies from the Village of Lightning being sent of towards the direction they were heading. Raya and Kim were also following them back to Japan. The day before Kim had ended up into a big fight with Calinia, ending her time in this Valley. Calinia swore that if Kim ever appeared in this place again the Villages would hunt her down and kill her. She demonstrated this by having her soldiers chase the poor girl out. Kim got away, and Raya did too. Yet raya wasn't as hated as Kim since she hadn't "stolen" the Priestess post from the beginning. She also "belonged" to Kai now so she could do as she wanted.

The Bladebreakers and Zeo also had to sign a contract which in they sealed their powers so that they would not be able to be used again, unless this contract was broken. Daichi took the contract and hid it. They would not however loose their closeness to their elements. It was only small things that could be used. Max could now find water wherever he went, Ray, Tyson and Hilary could feel the change upon weather. Kai would know a lot about unstable volcanic areas and Chief would be smarter. Dizzy also returned to her laptop, which was a relief for Kenny. He would have to talk with her once they came back home. Zeo would have a slight better vision in the darkness. Kim also had to sign, as her powers were too important to be used for bad things. The Valley seemed reluctant that she would go, but so she had decided. raya didn't sign, but she was given several grave warnings to keep her powers hidden.

They all waved their last good buys before following the spies down into the cave system. It would be a week of walking, but it was worth it.

They were going home!


Ten days later, the BBA got splendid news. It was a radio message from Tyson and the others saying they were going home and would arrive in Tokyo in a few hours. All relatives and friends ended up hurrying to the airport, all confused and all wondering what was going on? The Saint Shields had said they weren't on their way back so what was going on? They did not know.

Howeveras the plane finally landed the first thing they saw was a girl running away to escape some several angered Bladebreakers. Well, most of them were angry, Zeo just shook his head watching her run. Kai was smiling, he should have known.

It turned out to be that during her time in the Abbey, Kim had learnt a lot about Air planes, in her missions of destroying several things of NASA. It had been she who had planned and created their plane crash, making it look like an accident, but since she knew everything about planes she didn't have any problems. the reason had been her own escape. She couldn't stand that Valley, which they all knew.

"You know!" Hilary said to Tyson hours later when things had calmed down, the reporters had left and they were all going back home. "I don't think this was the last we saw of her."

Tyson nodded agreeing. The two teens sat looking up towards the stars, holding each other close. Everything they had seen was now a secret shared among them.

"Tyson" Hilary said quietly as the teenage boy was dozing of. "Don't you think we should start packing?"

"Huh?"

"Dumbass, have you already forgotten. Mariah called only a few hours ago. Ray and she are getting married..."

TBC


To Reviewers:

Storms-winter: Oh yeah, last chapter was a bit dark. And next one, well it will be like a bit alike G-Revolution. I cannot say more, but guess why I needed aname for a new beyblading company.

Fire Falcon: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I am so happy I got those attacks and your idea about double crossed attacks were awesome. this author has a lot to plan now. I am getting so much help here sadly I won't be able to use all attacks. I have already filled everything up now, yet your attacks saved a lot of time for the next fic to be started. Once more, THANK YOU!

Z Star The Hidden Dragon: Oh, then I think the saint Shields have done evil things as well, but I would never be able to hurt them further then I did. No, think that was their biggest entrance for a while. I said think, I hope I did.

Don't worry about Sequels. I am currently working on the next, or to say, working on the ideas. I also have problems seeing this soon is over. isn't this a new ercord here on or what?

storm-of-insanity: Now, I really wished I could have used more of your attacks, but the chart was full when I cam halfway. Anyway, thanks very much. Your attacks were pretty cool. I may use some more when I have written down the attack movements. It is what takes time this time. I am making up attacks for all characters that are going to enter next fic, with movements, which is around 50 different attacks. I'm not even halfway yet. Some of these may not be seen though, I will try my best here. I am still only making the attacks and putting pieces together. the attacks may be a changed, and I will probably interfere a lot into what I've made up so far. I can post all that information after Despair and Deciet.

Still. MANY THANK, MANY WONDERFUL THANK YOUs from me!

Kendo Baby: Is this counted as soon? 9h after I recieved your review. Hope you enjoyed.


Teasers for Despair and Deceit

There is a new evil corporation

There are new faces and enemies

Over fifty new attacks-I do owe you all for your help!

Dickenson is replaced by someone else

And... there is a secret about this whole story, and betrayal. Keywords to remember: You have seen him before!


End Notes: The wonderful little summary will be posted next time. I don't write summaries until stories are finished. Next fic is about a certain little marriage, you could say a new beginning. You will also notice some likenesses in that marriage from the one here. yet the next is more modern.

Since I don't know how Japanese or Chinese old marriages were held I made my own. Heh, heh, I do that sometimes. Anyway, I am really tired. If you want to contact me about things you've been wondering about then review, e-mail and I will probably post the answers on If you do wonder why it says luminoustarisma instead of Shitza its was safety meassures since there happens to be a certain word that doesn't work with this name.

Now, I am tired, talking to much. All fic news are posted on my livejournal so it's only to drop by for a visit.

Bye! I'm going to sleep!

Shitza