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------ thz for the reviews, i apprieciate it. Even though most of them were constructive critisism

EPPY 16 (A DAY IN STARSHOLLOW)

(LORILAI AND RORY WALKING FROM ELDER GILMORE HOUSE AFTER FRIDAY NIGHT DINNER)
LORILAI- so are you coming home this weekend
RORY- i can't i have alot of paper stuff to do
LORILAI- honey, come on you haven't been home for a month now, give it a rest
RORY- a month ago you were complaining about me coming home to much
LORILAI- well i thought you might meet me some where in the middle
RORY- well i...
LORILAI- come on please, please come home with mommy, i'll buy you coffee
RORY- i really have to do this paper thing
LORILAI- a REALLY BIG CUP
RORY- mom
LORILAI- i won't take no for an answer
RORY- fine
LORILAI- YAY, i say this calls for a movie night
RORY- i just have to go hame and pick up my home work
LORILAI- i think i feel a bradathon coming on
RORY- oh no you don't, i am not watching that oceans 11 again
LORILAI- fine since its your weekend, you pick
RORY- i think we should go with farris, and the matrix triligy
LORILAI- i love the way your mind works

(OPENING CREDITS)

(LORILAI AND RORY WALKING THE STREETS OF STARSHOLLOW)
LORILAI- so what are you in the mood for al's luke's or pete's?
RORY- (PASSING BY THE DINNER SHE SEES JESS WORKING) how about al's
LORILAI- ok but i need coffee
RORY- alright i'll get al's
(LORILAI WALKS INTO LUKE'S AND JESS IS WORKING AT THE COUNTER, WHILE LUKE IS SERVING A CUSTUMER COFEE, AS LUKE COMES BACK TO THE COUNTER JESS NOTICES RORY WALKING DOWN THE STREET AND WALKS OUT THE DOOR)
LORILAI- (TO LUKE) what was that about
LUKE- oh, you know jess, spurratic
LORILAI- right, so i need coffee
LUKE- is 9 O'Clock at night
LORILAI- are you seriously doubting me
LUKE- your right what was i thinking
(RORY IS WALKING AND JESS POPS UP NEXT TO HER)
JESS- hey
RORY- (NON-CHALONTLY) hey
JESS- haven't scene you around
RORY- haven't really been around
JESS- are you mad
RORY- no
JESS- really because you seem mad
RORY- not mad
JESS- ok, so why so distant
(RORY'S SILENT)
JESS- ok don't tell me
RORY- i don't me to be, distant that is
JESS- ok, and your not mad (EMPHASIZES NOT)
RORY- (SHE STOPS IN FRONT OF AL'S AND TURNS TO JESS) (VERY CALMLY) i'm not mad, i just don't think its a good idea for us to spend alot of time together
JESS- and why is that
RORY- you know why
JESS- no achually you stumpt me on this one
RORY- because things always get weird between us
JESS- they don't have to be
RORY- but they do
JESS- so its like that
RORY- i really should order
JESS- don't let me stop you
RORY- (WALKING IN) i don't plan on it
(EVEN THOUGH SHE HAD COMPLETLY BLOWN HIM OFF, THE WAY SHE DID IT, JUST CURLED HIS TOES. SO WHEN SHE WALKED IN TO AL'S WITH THE CONFIDENCE THE BIG CITY HELPED HER GAIN, HE COULDN'T HELP BUT SMILE AT THE CHELLENGE. THE CHALLENGE TO WIN HER BACK)
(BACK AT LUKE'S)
LUKE- so what do you and rory have planned tonight
LORILAI- just a little movie night
LUKE- sounds fun, need food
LORILAI- well um you see...
LUKE- i'll get you food
LORILAI- ok
(JESS WALKS IN AND GRABS A POT OF COFFEE AND STARS POURING FOR CUSTUMERS)
LUKE-jess next time, tell me when your leaving
JESS- (SARCASTICLY) sure next time uncle luke
(LUKE SEMI- ROLLS HIS EYES AND LOOKS AWAY, AT JESS' PARDICTABLE ATTITUDE)
(RORY WALKS IN, CARRING THE AL'S BAGS)
(JESS NOTICES HER ENTRENCE, AND DESIDES TO CONTINUE WHAT HE IS DOING)
RORY- (TRYING TO IGNORE THE FACT THAT JESS IS IN THE SAME ROOM) mom are you ready?
LUKE- you guys got als'!
LORILAI- well um...
LUKE- then why would you say yes to my food
LORILAI- because you make it so good
LUKE- i can't believe you got al's, his food sucks
RORY- it does not, you just need a required taste for it
LUKE- it's gross (HOLDING UP LORILAI'S FOOD)
LORILAI- (KISSES LUKE AND TAKES THE FOOD) don't worry we'll eat yours first, BYE BOYS!
LUKE- bye
(AS THEY WALK OUT RORY TAKES A GLANCE AT JESS AND AS HE SEE'S HIS FACE LOOK UP SHE TURNS AWAY, HOPING HE DIDN'T NOTICE)
(AS THEY WALK BY, CAMERAS TURN TOWARD THE TOWN TRUBIDOR AS HE SINGS "OVER-RATED" BY GAVIN DEGRAW)
(AT HOME AFTER THE MOVIE'S)
RORY- i'm glad we saved farris for last
LORILAI- you always save the best for last
RORY- who would do it any other way
LORILAI- so this weird thing happened at the diner earlier
RORY- oh yeah?
LORILAI- yeah i walk in and jess walks straight out, i mean i know he is repulsed by me, but normally he can stand me to drink coffee
RORY- oh right, i bumped into him around that time
LORILAI- bumped?
RORY- well he bumped into me
LORILAI- now we're making sence
RORY- he just wanted to see if i was mad
LORILAI- really? why?
RORY- um, (SHE NEVER GOT TO TELL HER MOTHER OF THE CONFRONTATION SHE HAD WITH JESS LAST TIME SHE WAS IN TOWN. SHE COULDN'T TELL HER, IN A WAY SHE FELT ASHAMED, BECAUSE SHE WANTED TO BE OVER HIM, HE HAD HURT HER SO MANY TIMES, SHE DIDN'T WANT TO LOVE SOMEONE LIKE THAT. YET SHE DID, BUT SHE WASN'T ABOUT TO ADMIT IT TO HER MOM, SUPERWOMEN, AS SHE USUALLY SAW HER, SHE ALWAYS DID FINE WITHOUT A GUYS, AND NEVER FEEL THIS BAD FOR ANYONE LIKE JESS.) i guess he thought since i haven't been in town for a while that is was his fault
LORILAI- oh, i see. why would he think that?
RORY- who knows?
LORILAI- well..
RORY- what?
LORILAI- is it
RORY- is it what?
LORILAI- is it his fault you haven't been around
RORY- no, i've had alot of work
LORILAI- (UNSURE) uh huh
RORY- i have, being a sophmore at yale is hard work
LORILAI- i'm sure it is
RORY- it is (REAFFIRMING)
LORILAI- your right, but you would tell me if it was right
RORY- (NO, SHE WOULDN'T, SHE DIDN'T. WHAT COULD SHE SAY. WHAT WAS THERE TO SAY) (WITHOUT REALIZING IT MOMENTS HAD PASSED AND SHE HAD STILL SAID NOTHING, SHE DIDN'T WANT TO LIE TO HER MOTHER. SHE HAD DONE IT BEFORE AND HATED IT. SHE COULDN'T LIE ABOUT SOMETHING AS STUPID AS THIS MUST SEEM)
LORILAI- rory?
RORY- huh
LORILAI- do you want to tell me anything?
RORY- i do, just not now
LORILAI- are you sure, i can make a batch of coffee
RORY- no, i still don't have things figured out
LORILAI- well i can help you
RORY- i still have work to do and ...(STARTING A DIFFERENT SENTENCE) we'll talk, just not tonight
LORILAI- ok
RORY- i'm tired, i'm going to bed
LORILAI- ok night hon
RORY- good night

(COMMERSIAL)

(STEPPING INTO RORYS ROOM)
LORILAI- WAKE UP, rise and shine, beautiful, time to get up
RORY- ahhhh
LORILAI- (IN MILITARY SONG) its time to get up, its time to get up in the morning, dud dud dud dud dud dud dud dud du d dud dudd
RORY- leave me alone
LORILAI- the early bird gets the worm
RORY- what time is it
LORILAI- 8am on a beautiful satuday morning, the birds are chirping, the sun is shinning the coffee is brewing
RORY- coffee!
LORILAI- did i say brewing, i mean done, and will be gone, if you don't wake up
RORY- you wouldn't deprive your only child from coffee
LORILAI- i just might if you don't wake up
RORY- i'm up i'm up
(SHE GETS UP AND WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN)
LORILAI- here you go (HANDING RORY THE COFFEE)
RORY- i love you
LORILAI- aw, i love you to sweaty
RORY- i wasn't talking to you (STARTS TO PET THE COFFEE CUP, AND SAY) YOUR SO PRETTY
LORILAI- i've created a monster
RORY- so why are you up so early
LORILAI- well some one forgot to turn off their cell
RORY- oh my alarm went off
LORILAI- yes it did, and what preytel was your cell doing in my room
RORY- you barrowed it
LORILAI- oh yeah, but you had the alarm on
RORY- true, i'll take half the blame
LORILAI- fair enough, so what are you doing today
RORY- well i wanted to visit lane, but i thought we were going to spend the day together
LORILAI- oh you want to spend the day with your old mommy
RORY- i know i have a big heart
LORILAI- and ego
RORY- (SMILES) so what do you want to do
LORILAI- well i was thinking about this last night and i came up with 3 plans, i call them my 3 plans of torture
RORY- well lets here them
LORILAI- ok well theres plan A, i call it inhumanism to france, we could go to the inn and bother michelle, or ofcoarse there is always plan B which is to go to lukes and yell timber everytime somebody walks though the door.
RORY- FUN! but we couldn't do that all day
LORILAI which is why i came up with plan C we could visit sookie, and lane and go to the town meeting later
RORY- sounds like a plan
LORILAI- to sookie we will start
RORY- after this cup
(RORY AND LORILAI JUST SIP THERE COFFEE)
(AT LUKES IT IS EXTREMELY BUSY)
JESS- i'm taking my break
LUKE- what, jess you can't do that
JESS- yes i can
LUKE- no you can't, jess do you see how crowded this place is
JESS- yes
LUKE- so your still going to take your break?
JESS- yes
LUKE- JESS!
JESS- i opened this morning luke, infact i have opened every morning since i came here, and i don't just mean coming downs stairs, i achually unlocked the door, i have kepted the storage room orginized everyday after cesas screws it up, i have work 40 hours a week for the past month, now i haven't took my break yet, and i'm tired, and i'm about to loose it on these people
LUKE- jess
(KURK WALKS IN, AT THE DOOR AS IF HE IS THE ONLY ONE THERE)
KURK- I NEED A BREAKFAST ROLL
JESS- i'm out

(COMMERSIALS)

(SOOKIE OPENS THE DOOR)
SOOKIE- i knew you girls were coming over, so i made breakfast
(THEY WALK INTO THE KITCHEN)
RORY- sookie you didn't have to
SOOKIE- i know, i wanted to
LORILAI- told you sookies first
SOOKIE- i made eggs, scrambled, boiled, sunnyside up, and turned over
RORY- oo
SOOKIE- i had hash browns, bacon, sasage, toast, waffles, and bagels
LORILAI- this is so much, really
SOOKIE- anything for my girls
LORILAI- wheres the pancakes
SOOKIE- oh my god the pancakes
LORILAI- relax, sookie i'm kidding
SOOKIE- i'll make some right now
LORILAI- no sookie, please don't
RORY- look what you did
(GRABS A PAN FOR THE PANCAKES)
LORILAI- sookie no
SOOKIE- what was i thinking, you love pancakes
LORILAI- (GRABS THE PANCAKE PAN AND A KNIFE) i swear i will
SOOKIE- what are you doing, no stop, you'll ruen it
LORILAI- sit!
(SHE SITS)
LORILAI- eat!
(SHE SMILES)
LORILAI- we came here to spend time with you
RORY- we missed you, well i did anyway, you work with mom so you see her every day, but she probably would miss you if she saw you as rarly as i do
LORILAI- your babbling honey
RORY- i wonder where i get it from
LORILAI- you know what we need in this town
RORY- here we go
LORILAI-we need another party
RORY- yeah there hasn't been one for a whole month
SOOKIE- well kirks wedding is coming up
LORILAI- kirks what?
SOOKIE- kirks wedding, thats in like a week
LORILAI- kirk is getting married
SOOKIE- yeah, wait you didn't know
RORY- no
LORILAI- are you sure
SOOKIE- (PULLS OUT INVITE) yeah see, next week
LORILAI- huh, i i i, wha
SOOKIE- lorilai?
RORY- i guess she wasn't invited
SOOKIE- no she did, she had to have
LORILAI- no, i con't believe i wasn't invited
SOOKIE- i'm sure you were, you know what michelle was probably messing with your mail again
LORILAI- no
SOOKIE- i think he was
RORY- yeah, mom, i'm sure you were invited, it probably got lost in the mail
LORILAI- yeah maybe
SOOKIE- coffee?
LORILAI- please
(THEY ARE ON THE STARSHOLLOW STREETS LOOKING FOR LANE'S NEW APPARTMENT)
LORILAI- are you sure she said peach st
RORY- possitive
LORILAI- because there are alot of streets in starshollow that sound like peach
RORY- she said peach
LORILAI- like you know leach, beach, uh um skreach
RORY- there is not a skreach street
LORILAI- sure there is
RORY- no skreach was a character on saved by the bell
LORILAI- oh yeah
RORY- ha here it is (THEY ATART WALKING UP THE STAIRS)
LORILAI- its a nice building
RORY- really nice (THEY REACHS LANE APT AND KNOCK)
LANE- hey guys, come in (THEY START WALKING IN) i'm so glad you came, i made lunch
RORY- lunch? (STILL STUFFED FROM BREAKFAST SHE WAS NOT LOOKING FORWARD TO LUNCH)
LANE- well since i can't cook, we're haveing chips and dip
RORY- (NOW RELAXING) oo what kind of chips

(COMMERSIALS)
(JESS TOOK HIS BREAK HOURS AGO AND HE WAS STILL AT THE BRIDGE
JUST READING, THINKING, AND RELAXING, SOMETHING HE HADN'T DONE IN A WHILE. HIS THOUGHTS CONSISED OF HIS LIFE, WHY WAS HE STILL IN STARSHOLLOW, HE HAD PROMISED HIMSELF THAT HE WOULD MOVE AS SOON AS HE COULD, AND HE DID, BUT IT JUST SEEMED LIKE HE KEPT ENDING UP THERE. WHY WAS HE THERE? WHY? OH YEAH BECAUSE HIS STUPID MISTAKE, OF DRINKING AND DRIVING. WHY WAS HE DRINKING IN THE FIRST PLACE? THAT NIGHT SEEMED REALLY BLURRY TO HIM NOW, ALL HE REMEMBERED WAS HE WAS ED, AND JUST FEELING LIKE CRAP, HE MISSED HER SO MUCH. HE LOOKED AT HIS WATCH, HE LOST TRACK OF TIME, NOT THAT HE REALLY CARED IN THE FIRST PLACE, BUT LUKE WOULD, LUKE MOST LIKELY HAD STEAM COMING FROM HIS EARS AT THIS POINT. HE GOT UP FROM HIS READING STOP AND HEADED FOR LUKES. HE WALKS THOUGHT THE DOOR, AND THE DINER WAS EMPTY)
LUKE- where the hell have you been?
JESS- out
LUKE- (GETTING ANGRIER) WHERE!
JESS- i lost track of time
LUKE- you lost track of time? JESS YOU LEFT 2 HOURS AGO!
JESS- just to hours, me watch must be slow
LUKE- oh my god, this is coming out of your check
JESS- what!
LUKE- yes, well since i can't fire you because you are under my supervision, so if i fire you, you will go off and work someplace else, and who knows if you deside to have a beer on the way home
JESS- jeez, you make one mistake (JOKINGLY)
LUKE- one! (IN A "YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME VOICE)
JESS- relax
LUKE- get to work, your closing tonight
(LUKE GRABS HIS JACKET AND HEADS FOR THE DOOR)
JESS- where are you going
(LUKE LOOKS AT HIM WITH A SMIRK)
LUKE- out
(WALKING BACK FROM LANE'S TO LUKES)
LORILAI- OH CRAP
RORY- what
LORILAI- i forgot, i'm suppose to check in with michel
RORY- oh ok
LORILAI- it will just be a quik call, why don't you go in and get the coffee and i'll meet you nack out here
RORY- ok
(she walks throw the door and imediatly wants to turn around seeing jess, it wasn't that she disliked him, it was that fact she wasn't over him, and she didn't want to be hung up on him forever) (just looking at him she missed him so much, but she could go throw that again) (she walks up to the counter)
RORY- (looking at the table) can i get 2 coffee's
JESS- large or small
RORY- (looks at him, with an are you kidding me looking) large
JESS- caffinated or decaffed?
RORY- come on
(jess smiles then turns to pour the coffee, she then smiles to herself, and then getting angry at herself for liking the attention, and comes up witha straight face when he turns around)
JESS- here, that will be $2
(she hands him the money and walks away)
JESS- rory?
RORY- what?
(she turns around and he stars at her for a while then says)
JESS- you forgot your purse
RORY- i wan't carrying one
JESS- or whatever these small money bags are
(walks over to the desk)
RORY- wallets
JESS- that is not a wallet, wallets are leather and one color, not furry and striped
RORY- (in defence) its my moms
JESS- (looking at it as he hands it to her, and smiles) i figured
RORY- (smiles and looks down) i gotta go
JESS- ok
RORY- my mom is waiting
JESS- see you around
RORY- yeah (walks out)
(walks up to lorilai who is still on the phone, rory hands her the coffee)
RORY- i'm ready to talk
LORILAI- (to michel) i got to go
(THE END)