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------ thz for the reviews, i apprieciate it. Even though most of them were constructive critisism

EPPY 20 (good luck with that)
(Lorilai walks in to lukes and sits down at the counter)
LORILAI- hey (gives him a kiss)
LUKE- hey (he pours her coffee)
LORILAI- (smells the coffee) hmmmm, (takes a sip) oh if only man and beverage could marry. ( takes another sip, and theres a pause) so whats new?
LUKE- since last night?
LORILAI- yeah since then
LUKE- my new ketchup bottles came in
LORILAI- oh yeah, did you get the pink ones like i told you to
LUKE- you mean the ones with the sparkley caps
LORILAI- yeah those
LUKE- (sarcasticly) yeah they are right next to the pluffy place mats
LORILAI- i'm telling you, you should take those out more often, you would get more bussiness
LUKE- if bussiness means people like taylor, then no thank you
(taylor comes in)
LORILAI- (taking a sip) speaking of the devil
TAYLOR-(holds up a cup) luke what is this!
LUKE- thats a cup taylor
TAYLOR- i know that, where did it come from?
LUKE- well considering you just brought it in my dinner, i would have to say you
TAYLOR- this is a lukes coffee cup
LUKE- you don't say
TAYLOR- guess where it was?
LUKE- i don't like this game anymore
TAYLOR- it was on the cement right infront of my store
LUKE- well i'll be damned (smiling)
TAYLOR- do you think this is funny? this is not funny, littering is aganst the law in these here parts
(lorilai is watching with interest)
TAYLOR- you better do something about this luke, b/c if it happens again, i'm going to have to do something
LUKE- bye taylor
(taylor puts the cup on the counter and leaves, luke takes the cup from the count and puts it in the garbage)
LUKE- (looks at LORILAI) i thought you said you were going to stop that
(OPENING CREDITS)

(Rory is at Yale, walking out of a class, talking to James)
JAMES- so how about that paper
RORY- yeah i know, 20 pages in two nights
JAMES- its inhuman
RORY- mortally impossible
JAMES- so who's your partener
RORY- oh Paris
JAMES- good luck with that
(she looks over and sees jess wait on a bench reading, with two cups of coffee)
RORY- (to James) i'll catch up with you later
(she walks straight over to jess and james is just standing there)
(she is now standing right over jess)
RORY- hey
(he looks up)
JESS- hey (he stands up) i got you coffee (he hands her the cup)
RORY- (she takes it) (she gives him a kiss) thank you
JESS- are you ready
RORY- oh my god i forgot, i have this big paper due Friday
JESS- oh
RORY- i'm sorry
JESS- no big deal
RORY- your up set
JESS- i'm not up set
RORY- it was going to be our first real date as a couple, and here i am blowing you off, for what a paper
JESS- rory calm down
(they start walking)
RORY- your right it isn't my fault, its Mr. Keelings fault. Is he crazy? A 20 page paper in 2 days. I'm telling you the man is insane.
JESS- ok he goes to the top of our hit list
RORY- i'm sorry
JESS- its fine, we'll just re-schedual
RORY- (smiles)
JESS- what?
RORY- re-schedual, just never heard that word come out of your mouth before
JESS- and that is funny to you?
RORY- frankly yes
JESS- yeah well i wouldn't have had to say that word if you didn't blow me off
RORY- i knew you were up set
JESS- (he stops to kiss her) i'm not up set, well go out another time, but if i'm going to go, i should now before traffic
RORY- ok, i'll talk to you later
JESS- (he kisses her one last time) bye (and leaves)
(rory walks into her apt. and paris is waiting for her)
RORY- how did you get in here
PARIS- how the hell are we going to do this, 20 pages in 2 days (saying in a doubting way)
RORY- i remember locking the door when i left
PARIS- we should do it on the revolution
(walking to the kitchen to get a soda)
RORY- i know i didn't give you a key
PARIS- how about i do 10 pages and you do 10 pages and then we put them together
RORY- (sees the window open) (then looks at paris) you didn't
PARIS- it was 80degrees in here
RORY- i give up
PARIS- your right, it should be 15 each, b/c we are going to need to cut out some stuff to have it make sence
RORY- soda?
PARIS- no thanks i have one (holding it up)
RORY- right

(COMMERSIALS)

(rory and lorilai walking to the door for friday night dinner)
LORILAI- hey long time no see
RORY- yeah, i had this insane teacher who hineyrumpusigned a 20 pg paper, that was due in 48 hours
LORILAI- crazy
RORY- i know, but i had a partner
LORILAI- who?
RORY- paris
LORILAI- crazy
(rory smiles and rings the bell)
EMILY- hello girls come in come in
RORY- hi grandma, you seem happy
(they walk into the living room)
LORILAI- yeah really happy. (suspiciously) why?
EMILY- oh no reason
LORILAI- ok
EMILY- well if you must know, me and your father are getting married
LORILAI- but you are married
EMILY- well we're doing it again
LORILAI- why?
EMILY- because its fun
LORILAI- why?
EMILY- are you trying to be difficult
LORILAI- well at this particular time, no. Its just that people usually re-new their vows on an annaversery, usually the 50 year annaversery
EMILY- well we were going to wait until then but our favorite church is going to be knocked down this coming summer, so we figured we would get it done then
RORY- thats great grandma
EMILY- just act surprised when your grandfather comes down, i was suppose to wait for him, to tell you
(RICHARD COMES DOWN THE STAIRS)
RICHARD- rory, lorilai guess what
LORILAI- what
RICHARD- me and your mother are re-newing our vows
RORY- really? thats great
LORILAI- you don't say
RICHARD- (looks to emily) you told them
EMILY- thank you lorilai
LORILAI- (smiles) any time
(they walk out of elder gilmore house)
LORILAI- so that was strange
RORY- i think its cute
LORILAI- yeah well you think possums are cute
RORY- they are
LORILAI- no puppies are cute, kitties are cute, MICE are sometimes cute, possums are creepy
RORY- leave me alone
LORILAI- so are you coming to visit mommy this weekend
RORY- yep
LORILAI- you know that is the one good thing about you dating jess, there is no doubt whether or not you are going to visit
RORY- (smiles) so i'll meet you back at home
LORILAI- the pizza will be waiting
(rory walks in the dinner, sees jess at the counter and walks up to him. He immedietly notices her entrance and smiles. She walks up to him and kisses him)
RORY- (after they release, yet still fairly close) hey
JESS- hey
(she sits back)
JESS- how was the paper?
RORY- a horror, but its finished
JESS- (nodding in understanding) good, what are you doing tonight
RORY- pizza at home with mom
JESS- i see
RORY- you want to join us
JESS- (stressed) no its ok
RORY- oh come on, i miss you
JESS- i miss you to, but i think dinner with parents should be arranged
RORY- its not dinner
JESS- its eating at a dinner time
RORY- munching really (correcting him)
JESS- (smiles) i need preparation
RORY- ok i invite you now, you prepare yourself, and come by in an hour
JESS- i'm not sure i could get a life altering disease in an hour
RORY- your going to have to get along with my mother sooner or later
JESS- we get along fine
RORY- sure when you don't talk
JESS- we talk enough
RORY- the occastional "hey, wheres rory?" bit isn't talking
JESS- good book though, wheres waldo that is
RORY- we are together now, and i am very close with my mother, and i would like you guys to talk more
JESS- it was achually the first book i read
RORY- i'm not saying you guys should be best friends or anything
JESS- i had the whole collection
RORY- jess!
JESS- i know
RORY- i'm just saying i would like it there could be a more comfortable atmosphere when you guys are in the same room
JESS- she doesn't like me rory
RORY- she does like you (he gives her a look) hey (in defence) when we broke up..
JESS- (interupts) which time? (and smiles)
RORY- the last time we broke up, she was the one that said, "he had a good reason rory" "he loves you rory" "give him another chance rory"
JESS- she said that (emphasizing she)
RORY- well yeah, the last part may have been my consious, but yeah she said that
JESS- i'm not getting out of this one am i
RORY- you can, i don't want to force you to do anything you don't want to do
JESS- as she digs she nails into my arm
RORY- (smiles) would you? (give him innecent look)
JESS- (rolls eyes) don't give me that look
RORY- i don't know what you are talking about
JESS- rory its not...(looks at her) uh... ok
RORY- (exsitedly) ok?
JESS- what time should i be there?
RORY- just give us a half hour
JESS- i thought you said i had an hour
RORY- well i just thought of a deadly disease you can get in an hour
(he smiles, and she kisses him)
RORY- thank you (she walks out)
(jess has just realized that the small audiance in the dinner was watching jess grow soft, thoughout the conversation. They were still staring)
JESS- this is a diner, eat. (they continue to stare) jeez (he walks upstairs)
(lukes who has been watching the whole thing comes out smiling as jess goes up irritated, as luke walks in the small crowd gets back to eating and talking)

(COMMERSIALS)

(jess is in front of the gilmore house, and rings the door bell. Lorilai answers te door)
LORILAI- your right on time
JESS- (holds up a bag) i bought food
LORILAI- great (moves aside so he can enter, she starts walking down the hallway and he follows) ok, we have pop tarts, waffels, pancakes, cookies, milk for the cookies and for the cookies only, pizza, soda, marshmellows, cotten candy
JESS- maker?
LORILAI- bag
JESS- i see
LORILAI- i know its not the same, but it is better than nothing
JESS- well ofcoarse, so i now see that the hamburgers and fries were not needed
LORILAI- are you kidding me, its the main dish
JESS- (sees rory walk out of her room) hey
RORY- hey, so we got back to the future part one and two
JESS- what 3 wasn't there?
LORILAI- no its just not as good as the first two
JESS- my mistake
LORILAI- jess why don't you put in the movie and me and rory will bring out the stuff?
JESS- (take tha tape) ok (and leaves tot he living room)
LORILAI- (whispering) did you move the matches?
RORY- stop
LORILAI- b/c that couch burns to easy
RORY- you wanted this
LORILAI- i know, but it seems more fun when i disapprove
(rory looks at her rolls her eyes and heads to the livingroom with a hand full of stuff. Lorilai smiles and takes her tray of stuff and follows)
(time passes... Lorilai is awake on the floor, rory is awake on the couch on the same side as lorilai and jess is asleep on the couch on the other side)
LORILAI- (unaware that jess is asleep) i'm telling you that movie just gets better with each time you watch it
RORY- (also unaware) i know and the second one...
LORILAI- just as good as the first
RORY- that doesn't happen offen
LORILAI- the only other movie that the sequels even compare to the original is rocky
RORY- ahhh, classic (hears a semi- snore, she turns to see jess asleep, lorilai sees it to)
LORILAI- (softer) ameture
RORY- (smiles) you should see him on coffee
LORILAI- you mean luke allows blood relitaves coffee, but not his own girlfriend
RORY- well luke wasn't there
LORILAI- understandable (they get up and rory puts a blanket over jess, and they put everything away)
(they go into the kitchen)
RORY- i'm going to sleep
LORILAI- ok i'll get the lights
(rory goes into her room and lorilai goes upstairs)

(commersials)

(rory comes in the living room at 8am with coffee)
RORY- good morning sleepy head
(jess moans while trying to awake)
JESS- what happened
RORY- you fell asleep
JESS- (looks at her with a smirk) no kidding (she hands him coffee) what is this
RORY- (sarcasticly) brown orange juice
JESS- (takes a sip) stronge
RORY- the only way to drink it
JESS- so last night...?
RORY- you were a perfect gentlemen
JESS- jeez
RORY- i mean don't think i didn't hear the pleading at the door, but after an hour or two you went back to the couch to sleep for the rest of the night
(jess smiles. puts the coffee down and gently kisses her. The kiss heats up and suddenly they are horizontal on the couch)
RORY- jess... wait...
JESS- whats wronge?
RORY- my mothers upstairs
JESS- (sits up) right
RORY- (sits up) i should get some more coffee (gets up and goes to the kitchen)
JESS- (follows her into the kitchen) so some first date huh?
RORY- (smiles) i thought it was quite exciting
JESS- did you?
RORY- yes we should definetly do it again some time
JESS- maybe we should
RORY- (looks up at him and smiles) really?
JESS- well not anytime soon, but i guess i wouldn't have a stroke doing that again
RORY- lady's and gentilmen a compliment from mr.mariono
JESS- (remembering) coming from the mrs
RORY- (realizing) oh... yeah...i almost forgot about that
JESS- yeah
RORY- what are we going to do?
JESS- i don't know
RORY- wow
JESS- we'll just have to figure it out
RORY- yeah figure it out
JESS- later, i have to get to work
RORY- (he kisses her good-bye) right later...(after he leave she takes a sip of her coffee and looks up)
(THE END)