This is my second story ever submitted. I found it in an old collection of miscellaneous poems I wrote last year. Please review. Basically, it is a poem for Jedi Outcast, From Kyle Katarn's POV. The setting is in Desaan's ship, the Doomgiver. It is painfully short, but it is only a short poem.
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As I dash through the enemy craft, my saber in my hand,
I long to stop Fyarr and his attack on sacred land.
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As I cut through my opponents, I fear not for my own hide,
I fear what happens if I cross over to the dark side.
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I came to save my partner; she was captured by Desaan.
On my way, I battled his apprentice, Tavion.
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On this ship, the Doomgiver, I seek to destroy the shield.
Rogue Squadron is attacking, but the Remnant will not yield.
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I'm in the main reactor; a stream of foes is steady.
They don't fear me; they know they should; for death, they should be ready.
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And that's it. I may add to the poems, but I don't have any plans to do so. Please review.