Rue: This chapter is filled with violence, sex, cursing and screaming...and dead people, blood, and crying! So if you-- -Gets wonked in the head with toy hammer-
Me: -sweat drop and laughs nervously- NO! Rue's wrong! this chapter might have violence in it and some cursing out of Yuki's mouth and...well I don't want to give anything away. -pushes Rue who was trying to interrupt-
Shina: Rated for content dumb ass... -rolls eyes-
Alice- The next chapter is the last one! That means we have to leave the people who read Ranma 1/2 ficcys! -eyes tear up-
Uriko: Hopefully some of them read Card Captor Sakura ficcys...Cuz you are writing your CCS story next right? -eyes me suspiciously-
Me: uh...-rubs head and laughs nervously- Yeah...-sighs and hangs arms at the sides- I guess so..
Uriko: YOU GEUSS SO! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO DO IT NOW! BUT NOOOO YOU HAD TO GO AND DO THE RANMA 1/2 STORY! -throws the CCS story at me, almost ripping it-
Me: But the readers seem to like it...so don't worry. -hurriedly picks up the CCS story before anything else happens-
Shina: Yeah...Just cuz Kortni is lazy, doesn't mean she wouldn't get rid of poor Syoaran Li! -pats my shoulder-
Me: HEY! -plops at desk- well I guess i better get started on the chapter before my crazy editor attacks me.
Uriko: WHAT WAS THAT! -eyes turn red-
Me: EEP! -types quickly-
----Chapter 5: The Fight for Akane----
Akane was seated in the bleacher part of the gym, anxious to get out of there. She could clearly see the group standing below, waiting to fight. Across from Ranma and the gang, stood Yuki. She was dress in a black outfit, but her whip was still snowy white. Shampoo looked at Mousse, and ran over to him.
"We win, I go to date with you, ok?" she told him, again. Mousse nodded. Shampoo sighed when she saw he didn't have his glasses on. "Mousse! Use the glasses or we lose!" She yelled. mousse put his glasses on and got ready to fight. Ranma looked up at Akane, who was nervous.
"Don't worry Akane! We will win! Right guys!" He yelled, looking at everyone else. The group yelled yeah, to raise Akane's spirits. Yuki pulled out her whip.
"You ready?" She taunted. The four nodded and Sai came out with a bottle of water. He chugged the whole thing, before yelling go. Yuki cracked her whip and dodged knifes thrown by Mousse. Ranma ran behind Yuki and kicked her in the back. Yuki was sent flying forward but soon steadied herself. Ryoga sent headbands shooting at her and she dodged them as well. Shampoo ran up to her and hit her with her ball-like weapons. (Have no idea what those things are called, if you do, please tell me!) Yuki fell to the ground from the blow. Ranma stepped up onto Yuki, who grabbed his legs and flung him against the wall. Akane gasped.
"Ranma!" She yelled, trying to stand up. Sai pushed her back into her seat and watched intently. Mousse sent different types of weapons at Yuki but she just dodged them. Ranma was getting pretty annoyed.
"What? All your going to do is dodge? Your not even going to TRY hitting us?" He yelled as Shampoo ran past him. Yuki grew angry and sent her whip at Shampoo's legs. The whip wrapped around her legs and tripped her, her face hitting the floor with a smack. She tried to get as Mousse ran past her.
"How dare you hurt Shampoo! Prepare to die!" He yelled, as spiked balls with chains attached flew out of his sleeves. Yuki giggled and caught each one and threw them back at Mousse.
"Silly Children...You no beat me, for I am always stronger!" She cackled. Ranma and Ryoga nodded and ran up the walls on both sides of Yuki. Yuki was laughing too much to realize the danger she was in. Sai growled as the boys were about to land on Yuki's shoulders.
"Yuki! Look up!" He yelled. Yuki looked up, but it was to late. Ranma and Ryoga landed on her shoulders and pushed her to the ground. Shampoo ran and kicked Yuki, sending her to the sky. Mousse shot a few knives at her and only one hit her in the shoulder. she hit the wall with a bam, and fell to the floor. Sai's eyes burned with fury, and Akane was shocked. She never saw the four of them work together like that before, it was amazing. She tried to stand up and clap, but Sai pushed her down.
"Stay seated...Good Job! Good Job! You defeated my sister. Now...Me and Akane will be leaving." He called, grabbing hold of Akane's wheelchair handles. Ranma jumped up to the bleachers, and in front of Akane and Sai. Sai stopped in his tracks as Ranma glared at him.
"Give me Akane...It was part of the deal...We won...now give her back to me..." He demanded. Sai chuckled.
"You really believed me! You thought that I would give you your precious Akane? How foolish!" He laughed. Akane turned her head to face her kidnapper.
"Your such a liar...You told me you'd protect me...You said you'd do anything for me!" (I never put that in the story, lets just say it happened while Ranma and the gang were trying to find her.) She cried. Sai looked at her and laughed some more.
"You...My dear, you're the most foolish one. Believing me! I was just looking for a girl to bear my child! It didn't matter who it was! You were the first girl I saw on the street! It was a coincidence that you knew Shampoo and Ranma! it could have been anyone! I lied to you this whole time! Your not beautiful, your not a good fighter! I didn't save you cuz I wanted YOU, I saved you because you were going to have my kid someday...You are so gullible!" He explained. Akane then burst into tears.
"That was the first time I ever was told I was beautiful, that I was a good fighter, th-that I was anything good! I should have known it was all a lie! How could any man do that! At least Ranma doesn't lie! I am un-cute! I am not sexy! I'm nothing! I am nothing good! Why would any man love me? Why would you pick me Ranma? WHY!" She cried. Ranma went up to her, but was pushed away by Sai.
"Hey! Let Ranma have Akane back or I you!" Shampoo yelled, jumping up on one of the banisters. Ryoga followed, holding out his heavy umbrella.
"No. It will be my pleasure in killing the man who stole Akane." He growled. Sai growled and turned Akane to the side. The was sudden bang and Sai looked up as blood shot out from his side. He bent over in pain and saw Yuki standing below with a shotgun in hand. Smoke was pouring out of the barrel, indicating she had just fired. Mousse was standing there in shock, he had never been this close to a murderer before and it was freaking him out. He backed up a few steps and Sai yelled out i pain.
"Yuki! Why did you do that! what did I do to you!" He yelled, spitting up blood. Yuki threw the gun down.
"You use me to fight them. But you don't even love this girl! She believed you when you said it! You are so low! You deserve to die! I hate you! I will not almost die just for nothing! You stupid son of a bitch!" She yelled, grabbing Mousse and jumping up to were the rest of the gang were. She put the shocked teen down and grabbed her, now dead brother. "Go...Take the girl and get out of here, I'll take the blame for his death...I'll keep in touch some how...Good Luck.." She told them, before taking her brother and walking out. They waved bye and Ranma grabbed Akane's wheelchair and punched her out, followed by the other 3.
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Me: Wow...Gory and violent! -face turns green just thinking about blood-
Rue: If you don't like blood, why the hell do you write about it? -sees my face and laughs-
Shina: Bloody stories are cool! -throws a water balloon at rue-
Alice: Hey! Were did you get that water balloon at! -looks around office for one-
Uriko: -hides and begins throwing water balloons at readers-
Me: I WANT ONE!
Rue: Water balloons are so lame! -takes out super soaker 4000 and sprays me-
Me: -screams and lunges at him- No fair! I have nothing!
Alice: Join the club! -pouts and leaves to cook-
Me: Well...Until Chapter 6: Will This Engagement Ever Work?
All: Sayonara!
NOTE FROM EDITOR! Sorry about the words in this chapter! If you have a problem with them we'll us! We will gladly fix them!
Me: -Yells from couch- NO WE WONT!
Uriko: Yeah we will! So bye bye for now!
Arigatou
Kortni's Fan fiction Crew!