I finally received the five reviews I asked for (truthfully six…), but I think I'll never put this charge on my readers' shoulders again, it seems to be way to heavy… (ok stop with irony), I just think that this was unfair from a writer: I write firstly for my own amusement, even if I think that I'm bothering to finish this fic for my (few but good) readers… AND Flamingfiresenshi, I do really appreciate you efforts to review my story, and I'm very happy you liked my story, but I also like more constructive criticism: if you think something is not good, tell me!

Well, now I think I will go on with the story! For my two faithful readers ;-)

Akito was kissing her, again, and with his new passion, with this warmth that spread shivers through her body….

She was lying on the bed and he slowly climbed on it. His body was pressing against hers…His lips were soft but in the same time strong, she could feel the warmth of his breath.

His tongue gently touched her lips and searched its way through her mouth…she felt her heart slammer against her chest. She opened her lips: his kiss immediately deepened and she felt his heartbeat on her body. His hands ran randomly from her neck to her waist and back again…

She shyly put her little hands on his neck and pulled him closer to her. She perceived his shivers and the emotion that she had given him and she became bolder. Her hands started gently caressing his strong back. His hands ran down to her lower back and he pulled his lover body closer to his. Sana had a moment of hesitation feeling this new intimacy but then the pleasure overcame her thoughts and she slowly and instinctively opened her thighs to him, to have him moving his body between them.

Akito had begun it as a "shut up please!" tender peck, but it had taken him nothing to be overcame by the desire and he tried to deepen his kiss. When Sana let his tongue in her sweet mouth he was highly surprised but felt even more pleasure. And then her hands touching his back… to feel her shivers of pleasure, her fast breath, her pulse… He didn't know what was he doing when he pulled her so close to his body aching with pleasure, and when she opened her thighs to him he forgot who and where they were, moving his body and pressing it against her to give her back this overwhelming feelings…

Mary Jane gave out a loud scream of fear and surprise, covered her face with her hands and ran out of the sight of the intimate scene. Akito and Sana paralyzed right where they were and watched the door, where they saw their best friends staring at them with shocked eyes. It was weird, utterly weird, their eyes locked for a long while.

Then slowly Akito's angry face (the passion he had shown to Sana was lost for everybody else the moment he heard the scream) became calm as always. He was the same "nothing has happened" as always. With this extraordinary calmness he slowly climbed down from Sana's body. He picked his back-pack up and exit the room as if his friends were invisible.

Sana had the reddest face her friends had ever seen, her eyes were still glimmering with pleasure and it felt weird to Tsuyoshi to think that they mostly remembered him of the old Sana, the innocent, happy child of his primary school years. And it felt weird he should nearly have forgotten that happy period, when Sana, in spite of all her problems was a happy child, because in the last times she had been so different, so "turned off". Was it weird she should seem a child now, after, well, after "that" or "almost that"? Tsuyoshi's eyes were full of tears and they melted with the blood flowing down from his nose (the first reaction!): he was touched, Akito and Sana loving each other, well, it felt so right! For the first time he thought maybe they loved each other even the same he loved his Aya (and this is a lot from Tsuyoshi! Sorry guys for the comical interruption, but even if my Tsuyoshi is caring and mature, he has to be in character!).

She got up in her camisole and ran out of the room. Her friends were still so shocked they let her pass through them like a hurricane, as she used to.

After that eventually Tsuyoshi ventured giving Aya a glance. Fuka moved slightly her head and put her hands on her mouth:

"What"

"Well"

"Err"

"That's the most…"

"Let's go…".

Naozumi had started searching for Mary only a handful of seconds after she had run away so quickly, but he hoped no more to find her somewhere, when he heard a muffled sobbing coming from a closed door. It was a dusty box-room. The red haired girl was hiding her face between her knees, in the background brooms and buckets: to him, she seemed a modern Cinderella. He boldly thought: HIS Cinderella. He fell on his knees in front of her, and gently put one wet lock, that was hiding the line of her jaw behind her ear. Now he could see the soft curve of her cheek, lucid with hot tears. He gently kissed it and she sobbed louder.

"That's not what I should define a well accepted kiss!" Naozumi said, trying to lighten up the atmosphere.

"Nao, you…you are so kind"

"Please, never say that word again! I'm really tired to be kind!" said him with sudden heat.

Mary was surprised by his altered voice and look up at him. He was frowning and something between his eyes and a bitter expression on his mouth told Mary Jane a well known secret.

"Do you love Sana Kurata?"

"I did"

The little, triangular face of the girl expressed her sorrow mirroring his. She had red little lips, wet stains on her cheecks, and red puffed eyes, but she look lovely right as she was.

Naozumi smiled and leaned toward her, until his lips were touching hers. The kiss was nothing passionate or deep, but it was the sweetest one Mary Jane had ever felt.

He stopped the kiss but she gave him one after a second. His face became sad, he said:

"Don't do it because you are sad, I'll never stand this another time"

It felt as if she was talking with a long experienced man, who had suffered and won't suffer again.

"Naozumi, seeing Akito with Sana has been a bad blow to me…"

His face grew sadder.

"But I don't think I was hit because I love him. I did. But now I think my love was something between gratitude, fancy for his male beauty" Naozumi snorted "and the normal desire a girl of my age can feel for a boy; playing for love, you know…I didn't take it as something really serious"

He was frowning, paying attention to what she said, wanting to know more.

Mary Jane smiled, "It seems weird now to talk so seriously about things like those, I was not used to…"

"I'm taking it seriously" said Naozumi

"I know, and I'm trying to be mature, just to talk with you…you maybe can't understand, but a fourteen years old American girl is maybe a little childish for a fifteen years old Japanese, or maybe you and Akito are special people…"

"I've really never thought you are childish, Mary, please, speak on!"

He was impatient, snapping…he wasn't as kind as always, Mary Jane felt impressed by his strong feelings, again.

"I'm sure of that, and this is something about you I truly love…" her face was now maliciously smiling.

"If you feel like that, why were you so shocked by what we saw?"

"You should know why. You too were shocked by the scene, and you were not dating miss Kurata. I was dating Akito. Seeing him in the arms of another girl, seeing him between the thighs of another girl, when we not even kissed once, it WAS shocking, shouldn't it be? I would never imagine Akito was able to love so much, with this passion! And my pride suffered, maybe my tender affection for him suffered, but I'm calming down right now!"

He kissed her again, on her lips, with a repressed passion, now.

"So, here you are!" panting, a drop of sweat on his stoic face, Akito was standing, his hand on the wall.

"Hello, Kamura."

The two, taken aback for the hundredth time by his calm, watched him without words. He stood there relaxing against the wall. He was not even looking at them.

'He came to see if I was going well, he came for me, he searched me without even talk with Sana before going after me, because he likes me even if he doesn't love me. He is my friend and he is good. And now with his weird, unsocial, uncaring behaviour, he is here for me, supporting me' thought Mary, and the glance she exchanged with Naozumi told her he was of the same opinion.

"Well, now I think I should go…" said Akito.

And all of them lived happy together.

Joking, I was joking! No! It's not finished here (sorry for you…)! There will be at least another chapter…and maybe some surprises, R&R

P.S. reading my story at length, I didn't feel proud of it. I know it his the first try of a non English writer, but what I really regret is that I had a good plot to develop (usual theme, but always interesting), big, nice, funny characters to use and all the time I needed to do it, and I didn't do a good job. I'm not talking about grammar, spelling, fluency of language, I'm talking about the ability of speaking about real life, of describing real feelings, of capturing the reader with what I tell…

Please, tell me what you think, tell me if you'd like to read another story from me, suggest me what would have interested you more if I had put it in my story.

I say it another time. This is NOT the LAST CHAPTER, so you'll read more! I hope you're gonna like it!