OK! This is the first chapter :D
Its short because I don't know why but.. if I get many reviews… (critiques, flames, among others) I will continue (I love flames 'cause they made me laugh xD)
WARNING: this is another horror story by me miry the fox.. nods aand as you may know…. I like death and blood.. so.. all my stories have death and blood.. so please don't go OMG! Why did you killed blah, Blah, blah…. COME ON! Its HORROR!
Now.. go on with the story
All characters © Sega/sonicteam
October 3rd
Rouge the bat was walking through a very dark road in Angel island. It was midnight, it was so dark that she couldn't see nothing. The only thing she could barely see were some terrifying shadows between the dark trees. There was a silence, a desperate silence. No one else was there, just Rouge, the moon and the shadows.
She looked very beautiful. Her sky blue eyes shone with the moonlight, her fur looked so beautiful like snow and her skin was so fragile like a flower.
She walked. She walked all alone through that road searching a place to hide. Hours passed and she was still walking through that endless road. Her body was tired. But suddenly a little smile was drawn in her face. Just in front of her was a huge mansion. She felt an enormous relief. She ran, ran towards that mansion. She left all her bags in the floor and knocked the door. But no one answered. She realised it was open. She went inside and in that instant an awful smell surrounded her. The mansion was pretty old, the wood of the walls were rotting and everything was cover in dust. But suddenly a voice was heard. No, its wasn't a voice, they were giggles. The giggles echoed in the huge mansion. Rouge panicked. She went running towards the door but it closed. She tried to open it but it was locked. The giggles continued but this time they were louder. They stopped. A scream, a horrible scream was heard. The door opened. But this time no one went out. The only thing that was left were some bags, some bags belonging to pretty bat girl.
Author's note:
First of all… I would appreciate if you tell me some grammar mistakes.. as I'm a Spanish girl I need to practise my english oh by the way.. its very similar to that sonic x episode.. you know the one with king boom boo.. but..this one has JUST SEGA/SONIC CHARS and death and blood boogie
Thanks for reading the short and crappy chapter… the other chapters are going to be longer I promise!