[Ju-On, The Grudge]

[Chapter 6]

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Laura tries with all of her strength to lift her body up on her feet, but when she trips, the cause of the effect was when she put her left feet in front her and knowing that she's in a hurry, she accidentally kicked her left leg.

Laura then decided to crawl away, but then she hears steps approaching, Laura the started to yell.

Laura- No, No! Help! Oh, God! Help!

Laura is now trying to crawl into the entrance of a hallway, and as she was at the corner of 2 walls, (from now I'll say the right corner or left corner) her arm was grabbed.

Laura- Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Laura then hit the arm, but then she notice the arm wasn't pale and then walking in front of her was her father, was the one holding the arm. Laura's Dad then grabbed Laura and then hold her in his arms, Then out came her mother.

Laura- Oh! Mom, D-Dad! Oh, God (sobbing)

Laura's Dad- It's OK, dear, settle down, I'm here, it's OK. Please settle down.

Laura's Mom the dashed to Laura who was in her husband's arm and then holds on of Laura's hand and the father holds the other hand.

Laura- Ow, stop! It hurts!

Laura's Mom- Laura, please calm down, Mommy's here!

Laura then tried to hold in her tears, but she can't, but she was stop yelling, she was just saying nothing as tears came out of her. Laura and her parents both then decided to go upstairs by taking the elevator.

Laura- No, let's take the stairs!

Laura's Dad- Don't worry honey, nothing is going to happen.

Laura- No! Something is out there!

Laura's Mom- Honey, please, you were just seeing things.

Laura- No, I wasn't it felt real!

Laura's Dad- It's OK, we'll just go-

--DING-

The Elevator finally came down from the 6th Floor. Laura's eyes then went wide, because she remember while being chased by the girl, it said in the screening that the elevator was on the 1st Floor, but she then tried to fall asleep.

As the family entered the elevator, time passes by. Laura's Mom, notice a mirror behind from her first visit to the hospital, she decided to look again. Thus time, Laura's Mom saw a girl stand in front of her family.

Laura's Mom turn back and saw nothing, she thought it was just her imagination, as they enter the 6th Floor and exit the elevator, and they notice the lights came back on.

--Laura's Hospital Room—

Laura finally calmed down and she and her parent are just talking and Laura was in her covers.

Laura- Mom, Dad, I feel something's right, like something is...

Laura's Mom- What honey?

Laura- Haunting. I mean, all the time I first enter that house and keep staying in that house, I felt something was wrong.

Laura's Dad- really, and oh Laura, where's Hamtaro?

--Security Room—

We see Hamtaro on the desk, sitting down with his head on his knees and his arms around his knees, he shivers in fear, after a little while, Hamtaro thought it would be safe to go out, but then he heard something, the same croaking sound he heard back at the house, Hamtaro then quickly went back down on the floor and closed the door by pushing it with all of his strength and then got on a chair and went up and locked the door.

Hamtaro then turn and looked at the computer the screen and then he saw Laura's father coming out Laura's Hospital Room, Hamtaro then jumped off the chair and jumped on to the computer screen. Hamtaro saw Laura's father going in the Elevator, but then as Laura's Dad went in the elevator, something came out, it seems to be a huge black fog, the fog suddenly covers the whole computer screen, Hamtaro was beginning to sweat, but then he saw a pair of eyes opening cover in darkness, Hamtaro shrieked and pushed himself back as a reaction and fell to the floor from the desk. Hamtaro rubs his head.

Hamtaro- Ow, that hurt. Oh, man! What's going on here?

Hamtaro was then startled for the doorknob was being shaken, as Hamtaro turns his head saw a frightful sight, 3 girls with pale faces and long hair was pounding on the door and even having both hands on the window. Laura then went under the area of the desk where people put there legs and hid under there, still facing the door and the 3 girls trying to get in.

Hamtaro- No! Go Away!

Hamtaro then felt a breeze for there is a tiny opening in the area and then hands came out of it and as they tried to grab Hamtaro, Hamtaro screamed.

Hamtaro- Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

Hamtaro got on his feet and ran toward the door and unlock the door and opened with all of his strength, but when he turned around he notice half of the girl's body was on the floor, under the table crawling to him, Hamtaro finally got the door opened, but he bumped into something and it was... Boss and the Ham-Hams

(Until Next Chapter)