Ju-On, THE GRUDGE

Chapter 8

(New: Laura's Dad's name is Forrest and the mother's name is Marian)

(New: I put Lyrics in my stories, only in some


Laura, who is on her back at this very moment, finally opened her eyes after her fallback, and she sees her parent looking down on her, her mother then lends her hand to lift Laura. As Laura got off of the cold and dusty floor, her parents spoke in concern.

Forrest- Laura!! Are you OK, did you hurt yourself?

Marian- How did you ever got on the floor?

Laura just quickly figured out that saying something unusual, like a naked pale woman crawling down the stairs to get her, they think she gone straight crazy, so Laura slickly lied to her parent by saying the lie...

Laura- Oh, I was just upset and so I just stupidly leaned on the door, but I forgot that it just... opens, sorry.

Laura's parent looked into one another, thinking that this could be a lie, but they both knew that Laura wouldn't lie, so they believed her and they all went out of the hospital, so fierce and angered for the reason so unexplainable.

--LAURA'S RENTED HOME, 11:25 AM—

As Laura opened the front door, while holding Hamtaro in her left hand and turned the door knob with her right hand, she then ran upstairs, into her room, gently put Hamtaro down on the desk and shut and locked the door and quickly laid on her bed. Laura, the only thing passes through her mind was the face of that woman she saw crawling to her. Laura then slowly fell asleep, sounding so calm and relaxed as if this thing was a nightmare. Hamtaro was worried, for all of the things that have been happening to him have been really affecting, as if there is something inside of him that is just dead, coming to the surface.

[Crawling – Linkin Park]

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

Hamtaro's eye sockets slowly became baggy and his eyes became so red

There's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface
Consuming confusing
This lack of self-control I fear is never ending
Controlling, I can't seem

Hamtaro then slowly gets on his feet and walks toward Laura as he looks at his arms and sees little red spots on his arms and his eye sockets got baggier

I can't seem
To find myself again
My walls are closing in
(Without a sense of confidence I'm convinced that there's just too much pressure to take)
I've felt this way before
So insecure

Hamtaro suddenly falls down and fainted

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

In Hamtaro's eyes we can see as if her was dying of fear and his body is like turning into dust

Discomfort, endlessly has pulled itself upon me
Distracting, reacting
Against my will I stand beside my own reflection
It's haunting how I can't seem...

To find myself again
My walls are closing in
(Without a sense of confidence I'm convinced that there's just too much pressure to take)
I've felt this way before
So insecure

We see Hamtaro looking like death, bit still alive

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing, Confusing what is real

There's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface
Consuming

Confusing what is real
This lack of self control I fear is never ending
Controlling

Confusing what is real.

--KITCHEN, 8:01 PM—

Marian, cooking a vegetable stew, with fine ingredients, she starts to worry about Laura, she haven't seen her in hours, so Marin calls Forrest

Marian- Forrest, watch the stew for me, I'm going to check on Laura!!

Marian, moving her socked feet, quickly scurried to the stairs and as she was about to make her first step, he notice something in the reflection of a mirror on her left, near the door and not too far away from her, she shrieked

Marian- Ahhhh!

Marian then into a state of quivering fear, as her head turns around, facing and eying the wall behind her, Marian Thought this could be another glimpse of her imagination that she also have been having, she just been keeping it a secret from her family, Marian walked up the stairs, one-by-one.

Marian went through a hallway and now is in front of Laura's door, about to knock on it, but she was startled, by the sound of whispers, and footsteps getting closer to her, Marian then went in a fright and try to run back downstairs, but as he was about to make a turn by cutting of a hallway, 2 doors opened and as she try to push those door, but they won't close, so she is trapped

Marian- Forrest!!!

Marian then turns around and saw, coming out of the darkness, a girl, with blood on her mouth, crawling to her. Marian then tried to kick the doors close, but it was no use, but just in time, Laura heard the scream and opened her doors and stuck her head out to see if anything was wrong and Marian quickly went into Laura's Room, and locked the door and both Laura and Marian laid on Laura's bed, in fear

(Until Next Chapter)