A/N: There aren't enough Jin poems out there, so here we go. Let the oh-so-slight angst parade march onwards!
Woe to Mortals
Wind may roar and wind may whip
Waves may beat upon the beach.
Houses be humbled;
Trees toppled
But the little Wind Master
plays on without complaint
Shrieking with glee
In a shrieking gale
He soars above the waves as they beat the beach
Above the humbled houses,
Above the toppled trees
Above the whipping winds
To the sky far beyond
Where he continues his play
On a whisper of the wind's breath
Among the stars that shine.
Below the gale shrieks on
unheard by him and unrelenting.
Oh woe to the mortals
Without wings upon their feet.
A/N: Hooray for linebreaks! Anyways, is it up to my usual standards? I hope so. I have a few reviews to reply to, so here we go:
akuvari: I don't mind! It makes me very happy to know that you liked Crystal Tears so much. Knock yourself out!
Fruit is NOT a Dessert: Thanks so much! (happy squeal) aha I love your username.
Silverfingers: Ah, sorry Mags. This charcter's DT too so you probably don't know abouthim. But Jin's just this happy Irish (um...I dunno, maybe Scottish) demon. Hiei has so many little problems, it's unbelievable. I dunno if you'd call them "quirks" or problems. Hmmm, poem time.
Pure white cat: Thanks!
hatori obsesser: (grins) Thanks so much!
Lady of the Rose and Rain: Hmm, interesting thought. He could be talking to himself, or Shiori. Cool! Two interpretations!
Alright guys, I've gotta go clean my guinea pig (sweatdrop)...yes. You know that I love and crave reviews, right? They make me happy. In words unnaturally close to silverfingers', not reviewing is like MURDERING THE AUTHORESS IN COLD BLOOD.
Please. Don't kill me. Review your thoughts on this poem, your confusion, or just a straight up "awesome" if you so believe it tobe true. Are there any requests for charcters? Most likely the next poem will be about Genkai, unless anyone has a dire appetite for some other character's poem done by me.