KiraraCuite here - cool o got 288 hits and two reviews I'm ok with that and they might be two cuez they get all the cookies
Ty: Hey KiraraCutie can I have a cookie (big puppy eyes)
KiraraCutie: Sure Ty but you don't need to make those eyes I see Max has been teaching you
Ty: hehe ok thanks Kiraracuite (eating)
KiraraCuite: well scince you're here want to do the disclaimer?
Ty: mure mimamamutie moun't mow madaid
KiraraCutie: yeah thanks
Max: KiraraCuite don't own Beyblade
KiraraCuite: Max?
Max: Hey KiraraCutie guess what I had sugar (runs around) here's the story
Crimson eyes just stared back into Midnight blue ones. Till…
"What are you doing get off of him, Tala get him off!"
Max came just in time to hear and see a girl yelling she was wearing a white business looking suit and a hat with a feather sticking out of it. soon a boy with red hair was pulling Tyson off by the back color of his jacket.
"Hey put me down!" Tyson yelled
"Tyson there you are …" Max said running into the scene
"…I'm sorry Sir my friend a little excited"
Max held out his hand to help Kai up, Kai was going to take it but Hilary slapped Max's hand with her glove.
"He doesn't need your apology he is Kai Hiwatari" Hilary exclaimed
Tyson got out of Tala's griped by slipping off his jacket
"Hey lady my friend was just trying to be nice"
"Well I'm just keeping dirty animals off him" Hilary said all snooty
"So why are you around him?" Tyson said with a smirk
"Well at least am not poor"
"I am not poor I have everything I need unlike you" Tyson was getting Hilary angry by the second till she snapped she raised her hand and was about to hit him but she could not move her arm. Kai was looking down at her with piercing eyes
"That's enough, Hilary lets go" he was ticked off
He put her arm down and led her to the platform turned around walked to Tala and took the jacket he was still holding and walked back to Tyson handed it to him walked to the platform turned
"You better get going you have a minute to get aboard"
Walks into the ship
"He was nice" Max said
"Yeah in a sourpuss way"
>>>On the ship
"Hey Max I found our cabin it's over here!" Tyson yelled excited
Max came running up behind him
"Ty you know other people are on this floor to right?" Max says playfully
Max unlocks the door and walks in
"That's not nice Max, hey way do you get the top bunk?
Tyson came into see Max climbing the ladder to the top bunk
"Cues I got here first (smiles) and look this rooms all ours" Max spread his arms open and showed the whole room. In the room was a radio, closet, sink, mirror, and the bunk beds.
"You know it's kind of cozy but it could use a tad of paint and a fridge"
Max was smiling and jumped down from the top bunk
"Well my fellow gentleman shall we be on our way to the dinning room tonight there is a feast of all you can eat"
"haha I agree my good sir lead the way"
>>>Hilary's Room
"Wow look Kai is it not beautiful?"
Hilary was talking about a dress it was midnight blue that sparkled Kai looked up and it suddenly reminded him of the boy he meet
"I wondered if he got on the ship?" Kai said absent mindedly
"What's that sweetie?"
"I said I wondered if you'll like your gift"
"You got me a gift? Let me see it let me see it" Hilary was begging like a dog
"No" Kai said it so straight no one would think twice… no one but Hilary
"Please tell me"
"No"
"At least a hint"
"Blue"(1)
"That's not a hint"
"Yes it is" (he gets up and goes to his room)
Kai went to his room it was across the hall inside you see a living room and a hallway that leads to the bedroom and another door that leads to the bathroom but there was a hidden door only Kai knew about and inside was pretty big it was all for a safe, that held two necklaces. The way to that room was behind a painting of a Phoenix and Dragon in the bedroom. Kai went to a mini bar that was in the living room and got a bottle of Vodka and sat on the sofa and his last though was…
"Tonight the opening feast, tonight will be a great day to die"
Kiraracuite: so that was fun now I have to start Chap 5 that's goanna be long I am going to take awhile to type it up
Ray: Hey KiraraCutie I come in the next one right?
KiraraCutie: Ray that's right you do I have been inspired to write
Ray: ok well she left to write so Fireie Gurl guess what your right KiraraCutie was watching Titanic when she got this idea you'll get to pick between two pictures when they are done and TKE came up with this so yay for her
TKE: (1) This is a challenge. Can anyone understand the hidden meaning to this?
Ray: if you get it right you get a prize what is it I don't know? So read and Review thanks