S-o-d:…hello there, me here with more poetry…why you ask?…BECAUSE NO ONE REVIEWING MY 2 CHAP OF MY OTHER FIC!
Raine: (the voice in my head) yeah I don't know why they aren't reviewing you got reviews on your first chapter?…
S-o-d: it's because people hate me…WHY!
Raine:……um because your gothic and you scare people? O.O
S-o-d: hey black is a cool color…there's nothing wrong with being gothic!
Raine: whatever…I'll do the disclaimer…Shrooms-of-doom doesn't own Yu-Gi-Oh and never will…she does how ever have a Yu-Gi-Oh tooth brush.
S-o-d: It's cool looking and fights cavities! .
S-o-d: Raine is kinda like my dark side so you will see a lot of her…the reason you are now just finding out about her is because…she was mad at me!
Raine: you were annoying me AND you spray painted my room PINK!
S-o-d:…I said I was sorry!
Raine: just get on with the fic!
S-o-d: okay this is in my point of view about Joey and his mom…in my twisted point of view review and tell me who you think it is!
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Dear Mother
I cry but you can't see me.
I scream but you can't hear me.
I'm trapt but you can't free me.
I'm alone but you are dear to me.
I hate you for all that you've put me though
So much that I want to run away.
Yet I love you, Dammit I don't know what to do.
Why do you go from man to man?
I feel so much pain inside,
It's as if I am dead.
But I keep these feelings with me.
As I lay crying on this bed.
You wanted my life to be better.
Then your life ever was.
But you failed miserably.
I won't hold a grudge.
I cry but you can't see me.
I scream but you can't hear me.
I'm trapt but you can't free me.
I'm alone but you are dear to me.
WHY! WHY DO YOU GO
FROM MAN TO MAN!
I KNOW MY DADDY BROKE YOUR HEART!
SO YOU FELL IN LOVE AGAIN!
BUT EACH MAN YOU LOVE BRINGS YOU DOWN!
THEY TREAT US LIKE SHIT!
BUT YOU BLINDED BY LOVE!
WHAT LOVE EVER DONE FOR YOU!
YOU'VE GOT LOVE MOM, AND IT'S RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU!
I am dying.
Ever so slowly.
I say I'm fine, but I'm lying.
I can't take much more.
Blood red tears.
Run down my face.
I search for relief.
But it's a waste.
I cry but you can't see me.
I scream but you can't hear me.
I'm trapt but you can't free me.
I'm alone but you are dear to me.
Good bye mom I'm sorry it ended like this, I will always love you,
Joey.
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Yes he committed suicide.
This was based on my relation ship with my own mother,
Right now I'm seeing a physiatrist because I self-mutated myself (in other words I cut myself)
And things are stressful they said I am defiantly suffering major depression.
Anyway review and tell me if it was good, and if any of you have ever been though therapy or self-mutalated themselves please either talk to me though e-mailing me or though a review.
I just want someone to talk to…so please if something like this happened to you e-mail me…I'm very lonely no one likes me everyone hates me and it hurts.
Bye for now.