Disclaimer: I only own 1/2 of Carly and her mother.
I want to say Thanks to Kel (and every one else from before chapter 26) for continuing to read, even if mywriting is bad.
blondebouncingferret- I really liked your review. Thanks for being nice about proving me wrong. I know I screwed up the characters and their ages, but I could really care less sense their not even the main part of the story. Also they do play Quidditch in America it's just not as widely known sense Quodpot is more popular. That's whyCarly doesn't get much press. (see chapter 1) Plus Carly isn't just the youngest on an American team she's the youngest all together.
I want to ask the reviews that at least like my story to please not read the next part because it might spoil some things. You all probably realize it anyway.
Lucy Maimkill- Thank you for telling me that I am a crappy author. I know it and I'm not ashamed for at least trying. And have you read the fourth Harry Potter book? Let me describe it to you in detail so you can understand. For the quidditch world cup there are two teams. One is the Irish team and the other is the Bulgarian team. There are three chasers on each team. The three chasers on the Bulgarian team are Levski, Dimitrove, and Ivanova. The three chasers on the Irish team are Moran, Troy, and…oh gasp guess what…MULLET! To prove my point even further the book also states that both Moran and Mullet are both girls. (See page 105 of the American version of Goblet of Fire.) Also she;s half Irish and Mullet is an Irish name. So next time before you insult my characters check your facts.
A- I usually take constructive criticism well, but yours isn't really constructive. I mean come on now you can't honestly tell me that Peter doesn't deserve it. If you didn't read the books he was the one that killed James and Lily, not to mention ruin Sirius' life. I swear you can go and shove your review up your arse.
May I ask how does my name make you laugh? If your talking about Tandemswipe it's simply a type of volleyball sock and for anyone that does play volleyball if might make you laugh, but I highly doubt you do. If you're talking about Carly Mullet then look at the review above. I must say that I laugh at your name because you don't even have the balls to leave your actual name.
To the both of you, why do you review a story if you don't even like it? Why continue to read it if you don't like it? That's why its called Fan fiction it's not supposed to be the real thing.
I have a short little bit for all my happy readers. Just to keep you busy…
Chapter 27: The Beginning
Enjoy (if you're not going to then just don't read it.):
Carly couldn't take it anymore. She knew they were watching her and she knew they were laughing at her. So she decided to do something about it. Standing back up Carly stood in the middle of the room examining the walls. She stared long and hard at each trying to look through. She knew that this would do no good and that they where all laughing at her on the other side. For gods sake she could even hear them. Wait…She could hear them. Sense when? Suddenly she turned around and could see right through the wall. The masked people on the other side immediately stopped talking and stared back. She cocked her head to the side and grinned,
"Well, well, well." She said tapping her chin, "What do we have here? Watching me rot away in this cell are you?" She smirked as they all sat straighter in their chairs. They could hear her too. That was a good thing,
"Now Caroline that's not entirely far now is it?" Voldemort said standing up and walking over to the "wall." He stopped though and put up and hand that contacted with was still seemed to be invisible wall, "Do you know how you did that?" He asked raising his eyebrows at her. Keep calm just nod your head. How can I keep calm? I have no idea I could do that. There are many things that you can do that you don't know yet. Why wasn't I informed of this? I don't know. Jack-
"Of course." She stated simply, "Now can I get a chair or something? I don't want to mess up my pretty robes." The woman behind Voldemort cackled,
"Shut up whore, no one cares about you; we only want your power. And now that we have you, you're going to draw all your friends too. Your stupid boyfriend Black, the mudblood's boyfriend Potter, and the werewolf Lupin." Carly's eyes grew wide then she shook it off,
"Good then they can successfully say they helped me kick your butt." Some death eaters snickered while Voldemort sat back watching Bellatrix round on the woman,
"You are tactless you know that? Before she had no idea about her powers and now, sense you said something she does. Before she didn't even know that Lupin was a werewolf and now she does." Bellatrix growled pointing her wand at the other woman's throat. "Why don't you go ahead and tell the brat that you're her own mother?" Carly couldn't hold back a gasp,
"What?" Bellatrix ripped off the woman's mask to reveal none other then Ms. Mullet's pretty round face now twisted in disgust.
The boys took off. None of them thinking about what was going to be happening next until James stopped mind-run right in the middle of a Hogsmead street, "How are we going to get there?" This caused Sirius and Remus to stop. Sirius snapped his fingers,
"We can apparate." James smacked his head and with a crack he and the other two disappeared. Landing with another soft crack James, Sirius, and Remus looked around coldness overcoming their bodies,
"Shit. I almost forgot." He got out his wand and looked at the others, "Do you remember what Hunts taught us last year?" Both nodded and looked around again. They stood one a rocky shore with a wide ocean behind them, and a looming fortress in front of them. "Do you remember what your happy thought is?" He asked. More asking himself as he and Lily dressed in white entered his mind. Sirius nodded him too thinking about the girl he loved instead of thinking about the time she first kissed him. They both looked at Remus. Remus hesitated then nodded remembering the time Sirius, James, and Peter promised to help him every full moon.
Sirius shook himself out of his thought and pulled out his wand whispering, "Lumos" under his breath,
"Are you stupid?" James hissed, "Put it out." Sirius seemed to think for a second before muttering nox and pulling out the blueprints.
"How are we supposed to see then?" He asked. Both James and Remus turned towards him, "What?"
"Padfoot." Remus stated simply.
"I'm not a bloody cat…Oh alright." With that he transformed and looked over the map that now lay on the rocks. Staring hard he transformed back and silently put a finger to his lips. He pulled out the cloak and covered them with it. Remus muttered a silent charm and then spoke,
"Who's coming?"
"Nott." With that he led them into the shadows and crept against the wall towards a large draw bridge opening. There a cloaked man came walking out towards the place they just occupied. James pulled his wand out of the cloak,
"Stupefy." He whispered. As the man hit the ground Sirius led them into the opening. Giving the map one last glance before stuffing it into his pocket he pulled off the cloak,
"Look right now we're at the opening to Azkaban. The blueprints end at the other side of this hell hole. There, there is a door that I'm guessing leads to the other part of the castle. From there we're going to have to be careful." He said in a rushed whisper.
"Are there any Death Eaters on this floor?" Remus asked. Sirius shook his head,
"No, but we have to make sure we are not seen. Ignore the people in the cells, and run as fast as you can to the other side. Make sure to keep your wand out." He answered,
"Sense when were you leader?" James grumbled sticking his wand out in front of himself. Sirius and Remus ignored him,
"What about Dementors?" Remus asked,
"Not that I could see, but still…" With that he took off towards the other side. James and Remus followed. Suddenly Remus stopped becoming very cold. Sirius soon stopped also, causing James to bang into them, "Wha-" He stopped speaking as four, tall figures descended upon them.
"Expecto Patronum!" All three of them boomed thinking about their happy thoughts. A silver stag erupted out of Sirius' wand, a silver dog erupted out of James' wand, and a wolf erupted from Remus' wand. All three charged down the Dementors who shrieked and fled. The three animals began running towards the direction of the door wanting the three boys to follow. They did. As soon as they reached the door the three patronus' evaporated leaving them in the darkness again. Sirius waited for the others to catch their breath and then with one last look at the other side he opened the door.
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