Hi there ya all!
To those who reviewed my stories I have only one thing to say…………
Thank you…….. Thank you! Thank you……………..!
Really, unfortunately it saddens my that I have not had enough time to really do updates more often and for that I am very sorry, I promise to better, much better. Unfortunately I have been very busy and my job keeps me on the go. But it doesn't mean that I am about to give up, I will continue forward…
Which brings me to the next subject. I finally had some spare time this past week and printed my own work on paper and read carefully through… Needless to say, I think it sucks….
I am my own worse critic and feel that I can do much better……. The First three chapters did not like the way that I would have liked, not one bit! I feel that they are poorly written and the plot and structure are week and lack thought. It has a boatload of grammar errors, I never took the time to really proof read the story before posting it and as a result it doesn't flow the way it should.
I know I can do better than this.
The 4th chapter I liked better, but again. Lots of grammar errors and I did not proof read it. So I am going to rewrite the story, not completely, but enough where I think it would be a vast improvement. The basis will be the same. The original will remain posted, but don't expect any new chapters soon. I promise that the new and improve story will be better.
Sorry for this guys…..
I promise I will get this back up soon.
I am open to any suggestions or opinions.
Love,
Rin's Faith