Oh my god I am so tired today lol it took me forever to finish this chapter lol I had to look up some lyrics it was annoying lol
Well I would like to take this time to answer some of my reviewers for Chap. 16.
Oh yeah and for those of you that noticed the mistake on the lemon. Yes I know I messed up so don't get mad cause I did that I changed some stuff on the lemon so that it would make sense thank you to all of you guys that noticed and told me!
I guess that happened cause I just finished the chapter for my other story and she's a virgin in that one I guessed I was just a little bitty mixed up! LOL!
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Xsachi: lol thank you I'm so glad you like it!
Kagome 2001: WEEE YEAH I feel so loved lol I little too hyper! Thank you! And wow I updated two days after you read! See u didn't have to wait too long
666loser666: I'm so stupid excuse my stupid ness okay ppl for those of u that read chap. 16 and the part where they were at the spa and when Sango asked Kanna the question about Shippo it was Kanna who was blushing not Kagura… I don't know why but I get soo confused with those two names! Sorry hope you understand my again idiotic mistake! And WOW such a good reviewer gives 666loser666 a cookie YEAH! MUCH THANXZ TO U!
Tippedtiger: Thanx and for your questions,
1,That's kind of obvious… lol yes she is!
2,Ummmm? Hehe ummm lets say they didn't (scratches head and thinks) hmmmmmm?
Inugurlume: lol yeah while I was writing I was thinking… what should the ring look like? And I just think of the first thing that came to my mind when I thought… Kagome so that's how I got the flower detail and the color green.
Numbuhxxx: I am so hurt! I AM NOT A PERVERT! I am very mature for my age! j/mLol well lets just say I watch too much mtv! Lol but yes I am sure I am not a perv! 8-0
Eeeeeekk: Lol yes funny is always better than violence I thank my 2 year old cousin for making me and when I say make me I mean make me! Watch barney with him. That's how I got that idea and I think Miroku is a purple perverted dinosaur in some ways! Lol it suits him!
Pyro Chi: thanks that was what I was going for not too kinky! Lol you were the only one that guessed right! How ironic!They're getting hitched!Lol yes! (Gives Pyro Chi a cookie)
Kawaiigirl-777: lol yeah I know but don't worry I'm a total KIKYO HATER like not i think she's all bad i just hate her... does that make sense! I didn't do that on purpose but I need it to look like it's not too easy for Kags.
Confused person: Yes I know thank you for telling me, go back to chap. 16 I changed the lemon a little bit.
Sesshie's Black Dominatrix: LOL YEAH A HYPER PERSON! LOL I'm glad I made you happy! Thank you so much for reviewing
Lost-Love14: yeah I know read back to the lemon I changed it some! Thanks for pointing it out!
InuheartKag4eva: lol thanks for reviewing! 3
Sako: lol I know I can picture her mom already! LMAO!
Tetsuna: Yes no more violence or killing now its just hanging on the cruise and Hawaii lol don't worry! Thanks for reviewing!
Lilrin13: THAT'S exactly what I was going for! Lol I can picture Miroku in a purple dinosaur suit-asking woman to bear his child... LMAO!
Dieforinuyasha: yes but I think I might do a mild lemon or maybe even a lime because they're not the main characters but I will have something special for them too!
The-Wind-Caller-Dragon: LOL I'm glad you liked it! Yah I am in honors English… wow so you have a little more vacation time, my school starts tomorrow (august 8th) and I'm peeling from bad sunburn! Not a good way to start school lol!
Kiddie Kidda Kitsune: I KNOW KAGOME ISSS SOOO LUCKY!
MoonlightHanyou: lol I'm glad you like it!
OMG IF I FORGOT SOMEONE I'M SO SORRY! Wow that took so long to write all right on with the story!
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Chapter 17, Day 2: A night out for them, and drunken boys…
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Kagome felt warm and fuzzy when she slowly awoke from the world where pigs can fly and your dog could talk.
She felt complete and bliss. She sighed as she fluttered her eyes open to see Inuyasha sleeping like an angel. He wrapped his arms protectively around her waist and rested his head gently on top of hers looking contempt.
She giggled a bit when she saw his ears twitch towards her. She tried to get up to touch them but his hold on her tightened.
"Yashie…" Kagome whined as he smiled a bit before bringing down his head for her to reach.
She squealed in delight as she lightly rubbed his fury ears and giggled every time he would pure or growl when she would stop.
Kagome finally stopped after she kissed each tip of each ear and went back to see him.
Inuyasha's eyes were still closed but opened when Kagome came in front of him.
"Morning angel…" he said kissing her lightly on the lips.
She smiled back and snuggled up to him.
"Morning, what time is it?" she asked as she played with his fingers with hers.
Inuyasha looked over to the side clock on their bed and smiled evilly. " 3:46 pm."
Kagome's eyes shot open in shock.
"WHAT!"
Inuyasha laughed hard as he saw his girlfriend put up a fit like how she never woke up this late and all that jazz.
Inuyasha had to laugh even more when he told her what they were doing.
" A CLUB!" she screamed in delight.
"Yes a club but we aren't going till 9:00 we have to eat and if you want," said Inuyasha looking at her like he was going to die.
Kagome knew that look on any guys face.
"WE CAN GO SHOPPING!" screamed Kagome again.
He nodded covering his ears. "Keep it down bitch, the others could probably hear you…" as soon as Inuyasha finished his sentence 5 people burst through their door.
"WE'RE GOING SHOPPING!" all the girls screamed as Miroku and Shippo walked in half asleep.
"Shit what the fuck are you doing here!" screamed Inuyasha covering Kagome's and his still naked bodies.
Everyone fell silent as Miroku smiled from ear to ear.
"So you were getting giggy with it last night huh? No wonder the other people on this boat were complaining about loud noises." Said Miroku now fully awake and staring at his two red faced friends.
"MIROKU!" screamed Kagome as Sango, Kanna and Kagura slapped him over his head.
"Damn why is everyone hitting me?" asked Miroku as he rubbed his head.
"Soooooo what are we doing today Inuyasha?" asked Shippo now smiling at Inuyasha as well.
Inuyasha shot him a death glare before answering his question.
" We're going to go eat first at a restaurant called Chops Grille-steak, then…shop on the 3rd floor I think, and then at 9: 00 we go to the Jewel night club. Now will you guys please go?" pleaded Inuyasha.
Everyone nodded as they winked at him or her before leaving.
Kagome let out a breath she never knew she was holding and then smiled at Inuyasha.
"So… that was interesting," she said as she got off the bed and walked over to her clothes. She put on her undergarments and then put on a baby blue halter and a blue jean mini.
"Yea it was, but not as interesting as last night." He said as he too got dressed in loose blue jeans and a white long shirt.
"Oh boy you're getting like Miroku," said Kagome as she hugged him.
"That purple perverted dinosaur." He said grinning.
Kagome laughed in his chest and sighed. "Yea if you put it that way, purple is the guys favorite color"
"Freaky…" he said as he kissed her forehead.
She just laughed again and went to brush her teeth and fix her hair in the bathroom and then Inuyasha soon after.
They both blushed as they saw the group waiting outside.
They were all dressed in casual clothes and looked at the couple clearly annoyed.
"Are you done being kissy googoo gaga!" screamed Kanna.
"No" chuckled Inuyasha as he pulled Kagome to him and kissed her passionately.
The group sweat dropped as they witnessed Inuyasha shove his tongue down Kagome's throat.
10 min. Later….
"Okay we're done!" announced Inuyasha.
"Stupid BAKA!" screamed Kagura and Kanna.
"Oh shut it will ya!" he said in a mocking tone.
"Guys please, I'm hungry I didn't eat last night!" screamed Kagome.
"I wonder why," whispered Sango to Miroku.
"I have the faintest idea," he said grinning.
"You know I can hear you right…" said Kagome giving the pair a nice death glare.
"FINE! We'll be good, lets eat!" Miroku said.
Inuyasha lead them over to a big restaurant on the 2nd floor, and asked for a table.
The restaurant had different settings in each section with tables. One had a beach setting, a party setting, a rain setting, and every setting you could imagine.
The group was lead to their table, which happened to be a privet table in a rain forest setting. There were vines and flowers covering the walls as small droplets of water dropped down (think of the restaurant rainforest, you know with sounds and fake animals but still all looking very realistic.) It was merely breathtaking.
Inuyasha sat next to Kagome as Sango and Miroku sat in front of them. Shippo sat next to Kagome as Kanna sat next to Shippo and Kagura sat in front of Shippo and next to Sango.
They talked about stuff like what they wanted to do and couldn't wait till they were at Hawaii, Just normal stuff.
They ate and had a good time, basically what they came to do.
After they ate they walked up to the third floor to go, dare I say it… SHOPPING! (Lol)
"Oh boy I can't wait!" squealed Kagome in delight as she squeezed Inuyasha's hand.
"Kagome please… stop that," he said covering his ears with his other hand.
"Oh quit being a baby," said Sango as she pointed over to a store that read ' Papaya' (I love that store it's one of my favorites in dolphin mall)
"I want to go in that one daddy!" she said hugging Miroku.
Miroku laughed and played along.
"Alright sweetie but you'll have to model for daddy okay," he said squeezing her ass lightly.
"Ewwwww daddy's a pervert," Sango screamed as she grabbed Kagome's hand and pulled her into the store.
The guys sighed as they watched all the girls run around the store and throw clothes at them.
"Damn what did you get us into Inu?" asked Shippo holding amounts of clothes in his hands.
"I don't really know…" said Inuyasha as he saw Kagome walk out of the small changing room in a tight black mini and a red halter that had a bunch of names all over the shirt like slut, princess, snob, nerd, rocker, prep… and then big black bold letters across her chest that read, "Don't label me!"
"Now I know why" Inuyasha finished saying as he stood up from his spot and hugged Kagome.
"Hello gorgeous" he said as he kissed her.
"Hi" she said and looked at him.
"What?" he asked.
"Do you like it?" she asked twirling around for him to look.
"Yes angel, change" was all he said.
"Why?" she asked.
He sighed and backed her into the room.
"I'm going to buy it for you, is that all you want?" he asked.
"Nope" she said pointing over to a pile of clothes.
Inuyasha sighed and kissed her. "Anything for you angel"
She giggled and playfully pushed him out.
Inuyasha walked back over to the guys with a stack full of clothes in his hands.
"The things I do for her" he said as he heard the guys laughing.
(9:15 pm Clubbing time!)
They were excited and stood in line for the club.
The club took up the whole 4th floor and took awhile to get in.
They sighed as the bouncer pointed to a group next to them.
"We have to do something to get his attention," said Sango wearing a black and pink spaghetti top and a jean black mini.
"Yeah I think we already knew that babe," said Miroku wearing black pants and a purple button up that was unbuttoned showing off a black under shirt under it.
"Okay then what do we do?" asked Kagura wearing low rider jeans and a silk white top.
"Yell?" asked Shippo wearing an orange button up and jeans.
"Already tried that remember," said Kanna wearing a pink halter and a white skirt.
"Yea then we'll just have to… Kagome get on my shoulders." Said Inuyasha wearing a red button up shirt that had on three out of seven buttoned and black loose jeans.
"Say what mister!" said Kagome wearing the same outfit she tried on.
"Just listen to him, if you don't we might never get in" said Kanna.
"Alright whatever." Said Kagome as she got on Inuyasha's shoulders and felt him grab hold of her.
Then she felt him pull her shirt down to revel more cleavage than she thought was possible. She screamed out as loud as she could. And boy could Kagome scream! The bouncer looked over and grinned at her.
"That group with the babe on the mutts shoulder's!" he announced.
Kagome heard Inuyasha growl when he let her down and held onto her waist as the group made their way over to the entrance.
Once there the bouncer winked at Kagome. "Hey cutie!" he said as he eyed her ass as she walked in. She felt his eyes on her and so did Inuyasha and she turned to look at him.
"Hey, quit staring at what you can't have because I'm taken." She said and kissed Inuyasha on the lips lightly before continuing to walk in with her friends with him.
The bouncer turned and mumbled something about 'stupid dog mutt' as the group was walking through the door
"Kagome I…" Inuyasha said.
"WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT!" she screamed as she walked in and didn't say anything else once she saw the club.
The club was huge and was packed with people and music blasted through the speakers. The walls were black with lights and what looked like flowers painted on them in a light white. The floors were black too but it sparkled and shone off light. There were booths and a bar in the far off end while everyone danced in the middle as different lights shone on some people dancing particularly good.
They all looked around in shock at the club that was on the ship. It was huge!
"WOW!" screamed Sango over the music.
"WOW! Is right!" screamed Kagome as she started to hear the opening of "Bounce" by Fatty Koo
"I LOVE THIS SONG!" screamed Kagome and Sango as they ran onto the dance floor.
The two boys sighed as the rest of the gang ran onto the dance floor and they headed to the bar for a drink.
Bounce 14x
"Hey Sango you know the moves?" asked Kagome as they stood next to each other in the middle of the dance floor.
"Hell yeah girl!" screamed Sango remembering the music video moves.
Chorus:
We's be bouncin, flippin, jumpin, jazz funkin, just do something
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
Move yo booty to tha boogaloo beat
Use your moves and don't refuse it just feel the music and
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
To the rhythm to tha boogaloo beat
Kagome and Sango started to move to the beat as the music blasted though the speakers.
2nd Chorus:
Get busy baby kick the funk with me
(I'm ready do you wanna rock with me)
Yeah shawty only if you get wit me
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
boogie woogie to tha boogaloo beat
By this time the two girls got everyone's attention and a bright light shown over them as they and some other people that knew the moves joined in and danced.
Eddie B:
What you hear is a testa
to get you to move your chesta
bounce your body like a seizure
make you lose all your respa
ration ain't no waitin, we came to party & shake it (don't stop)
tha crowd is breakin, pop lockin, swingin, rotatin
Inuyasha and Miroku stared at the girls in shock as they watched them sway their hips and move in time with the music. Kagura, Kanna, and Shippo also joined in as Miroku and Inuyasha watched from the bar.
Gabrielle:
Ooh go with it baby,
Movin so sexy smooth baby,
Tha way ya doin it, keep movin, show me how you move baby (Move boi)
(Dance, dance)
I'm feelin how you move boi (Bounce, bounce)
It's crazy what you do boy
Kagome looked over at Inuyasha who was still gawking over her moves. She sighed and motioned for him to come over. He shook his head 'no'. Kagome pouted and put on a sad face. Inuyasha chuckled as he put down his drink and walked over onto the dance floor to her.
Chorus:
We's be bouncin, flippin, jumpin, jazz funkin, just do something
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
Move yo booty to tha boogaloo beat
Use your moves and don't refuse it just feel the music and
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
To the rhythm to tha boogaloo beat
Inuyasha walked behind her and she grabbed his hands placing them on her hips as she started to dance with him.
2nd Chorus:
Get busy baby kick the funk with me
(I'm ready do you wanna rock with me)
Yeah shawty only if you get wit me
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
boogie woogie to tha boogaloo beat
Miroku pouted and got up as well. He wasn't going to let Inuyasha have all the fun now was he?
Valure:
People's dancin freakin everywhere
try my hardest baby not to stare
movin groovy in your funky shoes
daddy I love the sexy thangs you do
show me how you boogaloo
keep this party jumpin all night (all night) shake my fatty just the way you like (way you like)
ooh baby you do it so right, I think your comin with me tonight
Miroku walked behind Sango put his arms around her as he kissed her neck. She smiled and danced with him.
Chorus:
We's be bouncin, flippin, jumpin, jazz funkin, just do something
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
Move yo booty to tha boogaloo beat
Use your moves and don't refuse it just feel the music and
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
To the rhythm to tha boogaloo beat
2nd Chorus:
Get busy baby kick the funk with me
(I'm ready do you wanna rock with me)
Yeah shawty only if you get wit me
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
boogie woogie to tha boogaloo beat
Ron
I wanna know (I wanna know)
Do you like tha funk (I feel the funk! Oh I feel tha funk)
I wanna know (I wanna know)
Do you feel tha funk (I feel the funk! Oh I feel tha funk)
I wanna know
Marya - Spanish (x2):
Vamos a bailar aqui todo la noche.
Vamos a bailar hasta la mañana.
Chorus:
We's be bouncin, flippin, jumpin, jazz funkin, just do something
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
Move yo booty to tha boogaloo beat
Use your moves and don't refuse it just feel the music and
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
To the rhythm to tha boogaloo beat
2nd Chorus:
Get busy baby kick the funk with me
(I'm ready do you wanna rock with me)
Yeah shawty only if you get wit me
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
boogie woogie to tha boogaloo beat
Ron:
I wanna know (I wanna know)
Do you like tha funk (I feel the funk! Oh I feel tha funk)
I wanna know (I wanna know)
Do you feel tha funk (I feel tha funk! Oh I feel tha funk)
2nd Chorus:
Get busy baby get tha funk with me
I'm ready do you wanna rock with me
Yeah shawty only if you get wit me
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
Move yo booty to tha boogaloo beat
Ooh, Ooh, Ooh
Yeah shawty only if you get wit me
bounce, bounce, bounce, bounce
Move yo booty to tha boogaloo beat
When the group finished dancing the crowd clapped and cheered for the girls.
Sango and Kagome just giggled some before taking a bow. The group danced to other songs and the guys drank too much.
(About 5 or 4 hours later)
"Kaggie I want… (Hiccup) to kiss you!" said a drunk Inuyasha.
"Inuyasha I'm over here and you're talking to Miroku." Laughed Kagome.
Miroku lay on a couch and was laughing and looking at Sango.
"SANGO!" screamed an equally drunk Miroku pulling Sango in his arms.
"Miroku drunk is not attractive." Said Sango kissing his forehead and sitting next to him.
Inuyasha was about to take another sip of vodka when Shippo came and the rest of the group.
"INUYASHA, stupid!" screamed Shippo hitting him on the head.
Inuyasha groaned in pain as he clutch his head. "Stop screaming Hippo!"
"It's Shippo dumbass!" screamed Shippo hitting him once again on the head.
Kagome sighed as she looked at her watch "It's 1:30 am people we should get these drunks in the cabins."
Sango sighed and slapped Miroku on his back.
"HEY! What was that for?" Miroku said as he played with Kanna's hair.
"FOR ruining our time!" she screamed.
Miroku laughed and started to sing the theme song to barney as he continued to play with Kanna's hair.
"Stop touching my hair barney!" screamed Kanna.
"WHYYYYY it's so… WHITE!" screamed Miroku as he attempt to make a grab for her hair again.
"Yeah and so is Inuyasha's, bother him!" She screamed hiding behind Shippo.
Inuyasha was laying his head on Kagome's lap as he played with her bracelets.
Kagome just sighed again. "Let's go guys"
"Why is it whenever there's a party the guys always ruin our fun!" screamed Kagura hitting Miroku and Inuyasha on the head.
"HEYYYY! Why (hiccup) does that! (Hiccup) Lady!" screamed Inuyasha as he and Miroku got up.
"Okay then I'm driving!" screamed Miroku.
"You idiot we're on a cruise, A BOAT!" screamed Sango.
"What's a cruise?" asked Inuyasha.
"Oh my god! Inuyasha you planned this trip!" screamed Kagome taking the bottle out of his hands.
Inuyasha pouted but then started to clap and jump. "You mean I'm SMART!"
Everybody sweat dropped.
"Oh boy," said Shippo.
"Men are idiots!" screamed Kagura.
"Hey!" screamed Shippo.
"You are too you got drunk the last time!" said Kanna.
"…"
"Exactly!" screamed Kanna.
"…"
"Let's go already!" screamed Sango grabbing Miroku's hand and pulling him towards the exit.
"Alright, let's go," said Kagome grabbing Inuyasha's hand as well.
"Kagome you have a nice ass" Inuyasha said once they were in their cabin.
Kagome rolled her eyes and handed him a pair of red snobby boxers and a white tank.
"Change Yashie you're drunk." She said as she grabbed a pair of puppy pink PJ pants and a white tank as well.
"I can't," he said pouting.
Kagome sighed as she walked up to him and took off his shirt and unbuttoned his pants for him.
"You're such a baby Yashie" Kagome said as she climbed in bed
"Yea but I'm your baby, (hiccup) angel," he said as he climbed in after her.
"I hope you know you're going to have a massive hangover tomorrow." She said as she kissed his cheek.
Inuyasha smiled and mumbled an "I love you" before drifting off into sleep.
Kagome smiled and snuggled closer to him. "I love you too… my Inuyasha"
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That's like the second chapter I ended with them going to sleep. (Sighs) okay next chap. Is Miroku and Sango's night okay! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol
Sorry about the wait it seems like getting ready for school took longer than I thought. LMAO! Well I'll try to update each weekend or so but I won't take so long like a month or three weeks my most will be two weeks but that'll only happen when I'm bombarded in homework.
All right if you want to know when they're getting to Hawaii. There are getting there by the 4th day okay lol I know I know.
Okay any questions…. Review and love you all for all the support and wonderful feedback!
Cookie otherwise known as Amanda LY (love you)
