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Chapter 11

Kai's POV

I struggled to keep focus.

To see what was happening around me.

The world around me was fading, blurring out my vision as I watched my friends horrified faces.

I could feel something on my forehead, something cold and then it gone and something cold comes back, I frown.

My mouth is dry, my stomach feels as if it's in knots and my legs feel like jelly.

I hear people speaking; I hear their voices echo behind a closed door, my head hurts.

I close my eyes and moan, I'm not sure if I do, I don't even know what's going on.

The voices stop and the thumping in my ears gets louder, louder, it's coming closer, don't hurt me please.

Flashback

"He's my grandson Dickinson not yours", I hear someone speak, where am I?

"Please Kai, run save your sister", who are you?

"Please big brother don't leave me", what's going on?

"Kai! I'm sorry Kai I should have helped you when you needed it I'm sorry", Tala?

End Flashback

"Tala!" I screamed.

Normal POV

There was silence in the room.

Rika looked up from her place next to Scot, Mr Dickinson removed the cloth from Kai's forehead and Tala looked up sharply.

Kai's eyes were wide open, he was staring straight at Tala, he smirked at him, he turned to everyone and he fell back whispering, "I'm sorry".

Rika jumped up and was now holding Kai's hand shouting at him, "No, Kai don't give in, it's not your turn yet, Kai don't leave me like this, please Kai, and I need by big bro, Kai!"

Mr Dickinson called an ambulance, and so, he, Rika, Scot and Tala all went into the ambulance and were headed to the hospital with the others taken in cars.

Voltaire thundered into Leon's room, he trashed the place; he threw everything out the window when he came across a picture, the phoenix.

He stared at it for some time before ripping to pieces and letting it lose on the wind.

And he screamed, and all he could see was red.

Red the colour of Hate

Red the colour of Love

So different so balanced

So like Kai…

Kai was wheeled on a stretcher into the emergency area; Mr Dickinson took hold of the paper's he was to fill out.

The Breaker's, Bryan, Tala, Rika, Scot and Monica all sat waiting while Scot got some medical attention for his wounds everything seemed to lose time and time began to slow down.

Kai's POV

What's going on?

Someone save me before I die, please someone catch me when I fall.

I need your help; I need your safety, and please someone save me.

I was gone, I was no where to be found, I was in limbo.

I was covered by darkness and by light.

I was there and then I wasn't.

Where was I?

Somewhere I've been before.

Somewhere up promised I would never go…

Nowhere…

I'm in no mood to carry on and I realized that there hasn't been any commotion about Tala and Bryan being there but there will be soon I promise.