Candeh- Okay, Sorry I haven't updated this in a long time, but I JUST like JUST got done updating "The Ring" so I decided to start and maybe finish this chapter. Which means maybe. But it doesn't mean it'll be done today, but it doesn't really matter because when you read this, it'll be done anyways and you probably don't care how long it took me. As long as it's done...
Okay, so I got a lot of people who wanted to be directly replied to. So, before I can start, I'll review to you all. Oh, and I was wondering what the average age of people liking Danny's show was. So, if you allowed to, could you put your age or range of age so I get the picture? Thanks...
So...I'll start as long as I do the promised...
Riverfox237: Hey. Thanks. I love the humor of sarcasm. -leans back in chair- it's so relaxing. Anyways, thanks. LOL..yes, I do have the power. I'VE GOT THE POWER...xP Yes, Paulina maybe be stupid..but she isn't stupid. Make any sense? Yes, what a creep she is...it should be interesting considering I really don't know what I'm going to do yet. Hey, just pretend this cave is going to explode, ok girlie? No, no I like the rambling anyways, I LOVE longer reviews. I will update...soon sort of...thanks...I'll try.
Woker72: Geez, you guys are like too smart I didn't catch the question thing as I was writting this one. Hmm...
Faunamon: Yes, yes, I have heard of you. I'm Candy there, no kidding though, eh. xP LOL...thanks for the review. I really like hearing from you.
Aud247: Shut up. I hate you...LOL. No I'm just kidding. Mucho love, my little Aud Phantom. LOL, and I can dig you out of the dust once I update this chapter...
Anythinggirl2004: Uh...who? xP
Unlikely-To-Bear-It: xP LOL...yes I'm trying to put a lot more Danny and Sam in these chapters for you. xP Still my number one reviewer.
SR-17 Fanatic: oh yes, an exploding cave. LOL, yes lets cheer for Danny. GO DANNY, dear Danny! Yes, they are all kind of a bunch of low intelligence bunch of bananas, aren't they? I mean, If my name was Candy Phantom...I think that would be a dead give away.
Master of Procrastination: LOL...wow thanks a bunch. I love hearing from your reviews. They are so freaking wicked.
Cakerut12: Explode, oh yes. LOL..I'm beginning to wonder how many times I can clarify that yes, oh yes. xP You'll find out. Danny's secret won't spill, if it does, until the close end.
Twilight Princess: LOL..I think you spelt it right though. I'm too lazy to check here. Thanks. I've never heard of "Feared Parents" But I'll look into it, thanks.
Anyways, I cant think of anything else to say...but major writer's block...sorry.
Updating in 5...4...3...2...1...NOW. xP
Chapter 6:
Dash gulped, letting the feeling go slowly though his throat as if he were trying to make their limited time go slower. He didn't waste time though to talk. The football players legs scrambled about as he searched in need for a way out.
A sly boulder snuck it's way from the cracks, landing square on his head, making stagger from his spot on te ground. He held his thick head tightly and held on to a smooth rock with his left hand.
"Ow!" He yelped to get the others attention. But it was no use, the other teenagers, huddled around in a circle, had paid no attention to Dash what so ever.
Danny's meek voice filed the room with a scream. The dark haired boy stared in search of an explanation for what the others were glancing at, the absence of his left hand. He hadn't expected to go intangible on the spot. It use to always happen at random, but it hadn't long until now, leaving him shaky. He glanced up at Sam for help as the others stared profusely at his missing hand. But, Sam hadn't thought of anything, her mind growing blank as his blue yes met hers.
Sam Manson bit hard on her lip, erasing the purple tint of lipstick from one edge of her mouth. Paulina hadn't bothered to notice. With a swift point of her finger, she yelled shocked, "Where the hell is your arm?"
He was missing a hand, but nobody bothered to correct her.
Hearing the excitement, Dash stumbled into his spot in the circle around Danny, unaware of any findings of the group. Another scream emerged from the raven haired boy, directing Dash to the missing arm. "What the hell, Fenton, you are a freak!"
Nobody bothered to amuse him. Their eyes widening with every once of suspicion.
As if there was any light in the room, Sam's face brightened as she yanked a shiny metal object from Danny's pocket. "Danny. Why do you have this in here?" She asked, shaking a metal game boy around in circles.
"My game boy?" He asked, his mind wandering far from his friend's point.
"No, silly. This...this is your dad's." She said with almost every confidence in her body. "You know what this does."
His mind clicked on as if the two had been linked.
"Oh, right guys," Danny said quickly as he got up with his other arm. "This makes you turn invisible. Only one part of your body though..."
There was a heap of sighs from the confused teenagers, every one convinced expect for Valerie who's hand remained on her hips. "How do we turn it off?" She asked, worried Danny had lost an arm, but unmistakably she'd also asked out of suspicions.
Sam sighed, pressing down an 'A' button placed to the left on the game boy. Danny's hand reappeared almost on cue, leaving the two shocked. "See?" She noted, still staring at the player in her hands.
There was a huff from Dash as he walked back over to the boulders, "It was in your back pocket. What should have been missing was your ass." He heaved heavily as he jolted up another boulder from it's place.
"Ha ha." Sam mimicked, "Do you realize," She asked, glancing over at Paulina's pink stopwatch, "That we only have two and a half minutes to get out of this place?"
"TWO AND A HALF MINUTES?" Tucker asked, bolting up from a rock. "That's too little time if we plan to get out my way."
"Your way?"
Tucker rolled his eyes. "It was almost obvious. While you guys were staring at Danny and his parade right here," he joked, "I found a way out." He pointed to the roof of the cave where it bear an opening. A skinny hole big enough to climb out of. There was a beeping on his PDA.
"I scanned this place while you were doing whatever you'd like to call it," He cried as-a-matter-a-factly, "It's the ghost zone—"
Paulina squealed, "Her mind racing as she started to climb up the rocks to the hole. "That means Danny Phantom lives here!" She cried, staring out eh dark opening through the cave.
Tucker's eyes closed, "Yes, and it's stopped raining, even though we could care less about that." No body sensed the sarcasm.
Kwan followed Paulina, his feet moving faster than the girls's because of recent training in football. But Paulina had gotten to the top first, with a big heap of her strength. "It's a pool out here!" She said, breathing in a breath of fresh air. "But I see sort of an island." She cried, pointing up to the green sky. "We'll have to swim."
Kwan met her at the top, followed by Dash. "It's a long way," He called from the top of the cave, a boulder sinking below his feet."
"Pshh," Tucker wined as he reached the top after Dash, "It's pretty close to me."
Sam rolled her eyes as she stared climbing up the rocks to the top. "It's not hard to swim, you guys." There was a huff from the top of the rock, "And girls. I was a swimmer for a long time."
"That's not fair, Ms Susy Nobody." Paulina huffed, her arms crossed tightly across her chest.
"Actually..." Tucker sighed, lowering his hand to grab onto Sam's "Holy Crap," He sighed, pulling her with both his hands now, "Your soaking wet."
Sam slipped from his left hand and reattached it with her remaining arm strength.
Tucker managed to help her though the crack in the rocks with a little help from Danny...
The others turned away as Danny lifted his foot on to another rock, a little ways from the top, staring at the swim ahead of them. "This cave is going to explode in 54 seconds." Paulina cried as she stared at her clothes. "These are brand new." But she lost her breath as Dash push her in the water with him, the time remaining only 35 seconds.
Kwan jumped in too, his strong legs making a higher jump. With his free hand, he yanked Tucker in the water, who glanced up at Sam.
"Only 20 seconds." Paulina yelled, thankful for her underwater stop watch.
"Danny still is down there." Sam called back to the others. She stuck her head through the crack, ignoring hints from Tucker that the others were still watching.
"Go! Guys, GO!" Tucker yelled, trying desperately to shoo the others away, but they remained still.
"10 seconds. 9 seconds." Paulina chanted, wiping sweat from her forehead.
Danny's hand gripped a pointy rocks, sending blood down his arm. In panic, he let go of the rocks, floating only inches above the rocks.
"8 seconds!" Paulina said, "Come on, Sam!"
"I cant just leave him here!" Sam cried pointing to the rocks.
"7 seconds. 6 seconds..." A trickle of sweat trickled from Sam's forehead.
Danny shook his head and made himself invisible. He jumped from the rocks, flying up towards Sam. "Just...MOVE." He cried with a new strength.
"5...4...3...2..."
Candeh- Please, please review. Please and thanks. Agin, if you want to be addressed by me, please say so, I'd be more than happy to include you in this.
Oh and guys, I updated "The Ring", as I've said in the start and I'd appreciate it if you review that one too...because...I love you all so much. xD
Aw..what a cute face? How could you not review to the cute face?
I'm also thinking of making a new story. But as I've said, writer's block and I cant think of what to write about. I've actually wanted to put myself in one, but I know you guys and me, from experience, that you:
1.) Don't really get a lot of reviews from those,
2.) And don't really get anywhere.
3.) Lacks Danny Sam romance, which I like to put little hints of scattered around...
So, lastly, if any of you could give me ideas, I'd be more than happy to dedicate the fiction to you. ;)
So, keep those minds going.
Ah...crappy writers block.
See you next time. xD
Oh and the good thing is, I already have planned for the next chapter so it'll be soon as long as you press that little review button.
