I realized when I wrote chapter six, after posting it, that Candy's name
went against my theme of using colors in espanol for my made up characters.
So I went back and changed her name to Blanca, the Spanish word for white.
I want to thank my reviewers, and I do so in the order that I received
reviews for chapter six, just so everybody knows that I'm not choosing
favorites.
Lady Sakura-Chan: Sometimes not even I know what the heck is going on inside my head. I write this story in my mom's room, where someone is constantly watching TV, so my attention is constantly being averted away from my writing, and then, all of a sudden, I get an idea. I hadn't known I was going to have Blanca meet Goku at a bar UNTIL it happened. I'm also glad to hear that this version is more enjoyable than the last. Last time I was highly inexperienced, so I am glad to know my skills as a writer are advancing.
Amanda: Glad you found this, and yes, I know Blanca was rather forward. She is sure Goku 'knows the score'. Too bad for her Goku is the most naïve person on the face of the Earth and had no idea what she intended to happen.
Puppiescute: Yes, things seem rather grim for Goku and ChiChi, but would I really make them stay this way.Laughs evilly:: You'll just have to wait and see.
E-Chan : I don't think I want to repeat any of the words that you used. Um. I already talked to you anyway, and if anybody wants to know of the. things you wrote of, they'll have to go find it.
BlackFireDragonK : No, your prediction is not to be, that would be too HollyWood, you know what I mean?
Nisha : This fic is kinda going along with the series in a manner of speaking. So Goku and ChiChi are about eighteen years old. At least, I think that's how old their supposed to be, I never got to see all of Dragonball yet, so I'm not completely sure.
Lady Athena 12 : Yeah, Bulma and Goku pairings are odd. And in reference to everything else, your just gonna have to wait like everybody else.
Jessica C: Yes, I did mention you before and I'm doing it again. And I'm glad to know somebody really does appreciate it, since I've now spent a half hour doing it this time. I would have done it like this time as well, but I didn't have time, my mom was taking me and my siblings out to see Radio. And Blanca put in some kinda of drug. I'm a good girl that doesn't know much of that kind of thing, so I don't know what it should be called exactly.
Lilianjiegurl: I can't see him using the Kamehameha on her.
Gip-k: so, you hate Blanca, and feel sorry for Verde. I don't know what else to say to you since that was basically all you put.
Carla Fox: I thank you for your kind words! Blanca is just a slut from off the street attracted to Goku's hot bod. his hair is weird, but his body. ::Drools::
Gohan's Onna: Whoo Hoo, you reviewed this time! But where did you get the idea of me having Dixlexia, I don't even know what that is. And I hope you will write again soon. ((Anyone who actually reads any that isn't theirs, go read Gohan's Onna's fics, the has some really good ones))
Passing girl: Um, I guess this is the steak.
A lot of revews, and I appreciate every one of them! I want to once again remind everyone that Candy is now called Blanca!
Now, on to Chapter seven.
Goku's POV
Blanca and I waked for what must have been an hour before we came up to a small house. All around there was writing on walls, kids walking the streets, and a very weird smell. Luckily a lot of that weird feeling I had gotten had worn off.
"Blanca, I'm really feeling a lot better now, I think I should just go home."
"And miss all the fun?" Blanca asked, using a low toe of voice. I kinda recognized it. It was the kinda of voice ChiChi had used sometimes, when she would be hinting that she wanted to love each other again.
"What fun?" I was getting suspicious, and more observant. Her clothes were something would never consider wearing, the outfit showed a lot her breasts, and in the back you could see the bottom of the girls butt.
She turned her key in her lock and pushed the door open. "Come now Goku, you know what I mean. Fun. A lot of fun." Blanca then grabbed my shirt and surprised me by pulling me inside.
"I really think I need to go," I said more firmly. She was starting to get annoying in a way, I don't like the way she's acting.
"Come with me, and I'll give you the time of your life." Her hand then went to my pants, in between my legs, and cupped my manhood. I jumped in response, backward.
True, it has been a long time for me, since I was last together with ChiChi, nearly a half a year now. How I longed to be with her, be with ChiChi once again. But this isn't ChiChi. "No Blanca, I'm going home."
"What, you don't want to get kinky?"
"No." I turned and left her house, then flew away, toward home. I can't believe that she just wanted to take me to her house to sleep with me. People are strange.
I just don't know what I'm going to do, now that I know ChiChi loves another. My naiveté let me believe it was me she loved, and now that I know of the truth, of her lies of her lasting love. it doesn't seem that I have much else to live for. I still have fighting, but it doesn't seem enough anymore.
I will have to defeat Piccolo before I let myself go, if I don't then nobody will be able to stop him from hurting others. So I will train, and I will fight until I can rid the world of what threat there is. After that. I'm not sure really. Though I doubt I'll do much to make sure I stay well. I won't drink anymore, that has proved to lead me into unwanted situations.
Other than the drinking, I will most likely go back into the state I had been in before Krillen had come over. I'll just sit there, in the place that I had once thought I would live my life contently with my wife. Now, I will live my life there alone and miserable.
ChiChi's POV
Once Verde and I got back to the house, there was an awkwardness between us. We could both feel it, but neither of us would point it out. I had been so shocked by his proclamation of love that I couldn't think of anything to say. I am touched, he cares enough to help raise another man's son. I know that there aren't many men out there like that.
Verde has been wonderful to me, but I simply couldn't accept his offer. As much as hate the idea of being alone all my life, save for my child. As much as I already love my child, I still want a man to love, to share my life with.
"ChiChi, I think I'm going to go lay down for a while." Verde said, heading up the stairs.
I nodded at him. "Is there a certain time you would like to get up?"
"No, don't bother getting me up. I can set my alarm so I'll be up by dinner time." Verde said, continuing to go upstairs without turning to look at her again. I can tell he's somewhat hurt. But he'll get over me, it can't be too hard to do. It's not as if I had much to offer him in the first place.
I still find it hard to believe any man would want to have me, let alone when I am pregnant. Not only that, but Verde is a rich businessman that works for Capsule. He could have just about any woman, I'm sure. It was probably because of my convenience. I already live here, his girls have come to like me, and he knows how much I care about his family now.
His girls are wonderful smart little girls. Verde is a handsome polite man. I would do well with this life, I could probably be somewhat content even. But never would I be truly happy.
I have to do what's best for my baby, and that is telling Goku about him so they can know each other.
Or is that the best thing? Goku tired of me in a matter of months, what would he do when the baby came. Sure, he had said he wanted a child, but he had also had the gall to say he was happy with me, and then left for three days straight. What kind of father would he be?
Goku didn't seem like a man that would have the patience to deal with a baby, he wouldn't have a clue as to handle things. Not only that, but he would most likely get bored, and decide to go train instead. Would he be at all interested in his son.
Maybe he would, once he considered the child old enough to train. Then both of them would be gone training. So is it wise to tell Goku?
I don't know anymore, I'm so confused. I want what is best for my baby, but I don't know what that is. I just want to know what I have to do to make my baby happy in life. Does that mean Goku, or Verde?
Verde's POV
I can't believe I lost her. She still loves that fool that didn't keep her. She loves him, and not me. I knew that my chances were slim, but to actually be rejected by the first woman I have come to care about in so long is maddening.
I have finally gotten over Rosada, but now what will it take for me to overcome my misery after losing ChiChi? Both loved other men, so was I destined to lead women to their true desires? Would ChiChi stay with Goku so her child would have a father?
I have far too many questions, it seems. I can't come up with an answer to a single one of them either.
It had felt so good to kiss her. I had been over joyed when she responded to my kiss instead of ending it. It didn't last long however, did it? She pushed me away after only a few heavenly minutes, and demolished my new found happiness with a mere speech.
I lay on my bed, spread out comfortably. I can easily imagine ChiChi coming in here, beautiful and completely uncovered by clothing. I can imagine her soft voice, telling me it is I she wants, and not that other fool. I can imagine kissing her and loving her.
But that is all I will ever get to do. Imagine.
She does not want to kiss me, let alone love me, and I'm just going to have to find a way to accept that.
There was a sudden loud banging noise on my door. "ChiChi?"
"Verde, please, help me. It hurts so much!"
I sprang up and went to my door. When I opened it I found ChiChi on the floor, clutching her stomach.
"What happened?" I asked, kneeling beside her.
"I-I'm bleeding Verde, I think my baby is in trouble."
Poor ChiChi, and what is to happen to Gohan Chan?! I should explain. Saiyan babies require more energy from their mother than human babies do, so having one is extremely difficult. Not only that, but with all the stress that ChiChi has had due to her separation from Goku, it has put a strain on the baby. So she had some bleeding, which could mean a miscarriage.
I hope you all enjoyed this chapter, and if you wished to be mentioned again, all you have to do is revew!!!
Lady Sakura-Chan: Sometimes not even I know what the heck is going on inside my head. I write this story in my mom's room, where someone is constantly watching TV, so my attention is constantly being averted away from my writing, and then, all of a sudden, I get an idea. I hadn't known I was going to have Blanca meet Goku at a bar UNTIL it happened. I'm also glad to hear that this version is more enjoyable than the last. Last time I was highly inexperienced, so I am glad to know my skills as a writer are advancing.
Amanda: Glad you found this, and yes, I know Blanca was rather forward. She is sure Goku 'knows the score'. Too bad for her Goku is the most naïve person on the face of the Earth and had no idea what she intended to happen.
Puppiescute: Yes, things seem rather grim for Goku and ChiChi, but would I really make them stay this way.Laughs evilly:: You'll just have to wait and see.
E-Chan : I don't think I want to repeat any of the words that you used. Um. I already talked to you anyway, and if anybody wants to know of the. things you wrote of, they'll have to go find it.
BlackFireDragonK : No, your prediction is not to be, that would be too HollyWood, you know what I mean?
Nisha : This fic is kinda going along with the series in a manner of speaking. So Goku and ChiChi are about eighteen years old. At least, I think that's how old their supposed to be, I never got to see all of Dragonball yet, so I'm not completely sure.
Lady Athena 12 : Yeah, Bulma and Goku pairings are odd. And in reference to everything else, your just gonna have to wait like everybody else.
Jessica C: Yes, I did mention you before and I'm doing it again. And I'm glad to know somebody really does appreciate it, since I've now spent a half hour doing it this time. I would have done it like this time as well, but I didn't have time, my mom was taking me and my siblings out to see Radio. And Blanca put in some kinda of drug. I'm a good girl that doesn't know much of that kind of thing, so I don't know what it should be called exactly.
Lilianjiegurl: I can't see him using the Kamehameha on her.
Gip-k: so, you hate Blanca, and feel sorry for Verde. I don't know what else to say to you since that was basically all you put.
Carla Fox: I thank you for your kind words! Blanca is just a slut from off the street attracted to Goku's hot bod. his hair is weird, but his body. ::Drools::
Gohan's Onna: Whoo Hoo, you reviewed this time! But where did you get the idea of me having Dixlexia, I don't even know what that is. And I hope you will write again soon. ((Anyone who actually reads any that isn't theirs, go read Gohan's Onna's fics, the has some really good ones))
Passing girl: Um, I guess this is the steak.
A lot of revews, and I appreciate every one of them! I want to once again remind everyone that Candy is now called Blanca!
Now, on to Chapter seven.
Goku's POV
Blanca and I waked for what must have been an hour before we came up to a small house. All around there was writing on walls, kids walking the streets, and a very weird smell. Luckily a lot of that weird feeling I had gotten had worn off.
"Blanca, I'm really feeling a lot better now, I think I should just go home."
"And miss all the fun?" Blanca asked, using a low toe of voice. I kinda recognized it. It was the kinda of voice ChiChi had used sometimes, when she would be hinting that she wanted to love each other again.
"What fun?" I was getting suspicious, and more observant. Her clothes were something would never consider wearing, the outfit showed a lot her breasts, and in the back you could see the bottom of the girls butt.
She turned her key in her lock and pushed the door open. "Come now Goku, you know what I mean. Fun. A lot of fun." Blanca then grabbed my shirt and surprised me by pulling me inside.
"I really think I need to go," I said more firmly. She was starting to get annoying in a way, I don't like the way she's acting.
"Come with me, and I'll give you the time of your life." Her hand then went to my pants, in between my legs, and cupped my manhood. I jumped in response, backward.
True, it has been a long time for me, since I was last together with ChiChi, nearly a half a year now. How I longed to be with her, be with ChiChi once again. But this isn't ChiChi. "No Blanca, I'm going home."
"What, you don't want to get kinky?"
"No." I turned and left her house, then flew away, toward home. I can't believe that she just wanted to take me to her house to sleep with me. People are strange.
I just don't know what I'm going to do, now that I know ChiChi loves another. My naiveté let me believe it was me she loved, and now that I know of the truth, of her lies of her lasting love. it doesn't seem that I have much else to live for. I still have fighting, but it doesn't seem enough anymore.
I will have to defeat Piccolo before I let myself go, if I don't then nobody will be able to stop him from hurting others. So I will train, and I will fight until I can rid the world of what threat there is. After that. I'm not sure really. Though I doubt I'll do much to make sure I stay well. I won't drink anymore, that has proved to lead me into unwanted situations.
Other than the drinking, I will most likely go back into the state I had been in before Krillen had come over. I'll just sit there, in the place that I had once thought I would live my life contently with my wife. Now, I will live my life there alone and miserable.
ChiChi's POV
Once Verde and I got back to the house, there was an awkwardness between us. We could both feel it, but neither of us would point it out. I had been so shocked by his proclamation of love that I couldn't think of anything to say. I am touched, he cares enough to help raise another man's son. I know that there aren't many men out there like that.
Verde has been wonderful to me, but I simply couldn't accept his offer. As much as hate the idea of being alone all my life, save for my child. As much as I already love my child, I still want a man to love, to share my life with.
"ChiChi, I think I'm going to go lay down for a while." Verde said, heading up the stairs.
I nodded at him. "Is there a certain time you would like to get up?"
"No, don't bother getting me up. I can set my alarm so I'll be up by dinner time." Verde said, continuing to go upstairs without turning to look at her again. I can tell he's somewhat hurt. But he'll get over me, it can't be too hard to do. It's not as if I had much to offer him in the first place.
I still find it hard to believe any man would want to have me, let alone when I am pregnant. Not only that, but Verde is a rich businessman that works for Capsule. He could have just about any woman, I'm sure. It was probably because of my convenience. I already live here, his girls have come to like me, and he knows how much I care about his family now.
His girls are wonderful smart little girls. Verde is a handsome polite man. I would do well with this life, I could probably be somewhat content even. But never would I be truly happy.
I have to do what's best for my baby, and that is telling Goku about him so they can know each other.
Or is that the best thing? Goku tired of me in a matter of months, what would he do when the baby came. Sure, he had said he wanted a child, but he had also had the gall to say he was happy with me, and then left for three days straight. What kind of father would he be?
Goku didn't seem like a man that would have the patience to deal with a baby, he wouldn't have a clue as to handle things. Not only that, but he would most likely get bored, and decide to go train instead. Would he be at all interested in his son.
Maybe he would, once he considered the child old enough to train. Then both of them would be gone training. So is it wise to tell Goku?
I don't know anymore, I'm so confused. I want what is best for my baby, but I don't know what that is. I just want to know what I have to do to make my baby happy in life. Does that mean Goku, or Verde?
Verde's POV
I can't believe I lost her. She still loves that fool that didn't keep her. She loves him, and not me. I knew that my chances were slim, but to actually be rejected by the first woman I have come to care about in so long is maddening.
I have finally gotten over Rosada, but now what will it take for me to overcome my misery after losing ChiChi? Both loved other men, so was I destined to lead women to their true desires? Would ChiChi stay with Goku so her child would have a father?
I have far too many questions, it seems. I can't come up with an answer to a single one of them either.
It had felt so good to kiss her. I had been over joyed when she responded to my kiss instead of ending it. It didn't last long however, did it? She pushed me away after only a few heavenly minutes, and demolished my new found happiness with a mere speech.
I lay on my bed, spread out comfortably. I can easily imagine ChiChi coming in here, beautiful and completely uncovered by clothing. I can imagine her soft voice, telling me it is I she wants, and not that other fool. I can imagine kissing her and loving her.
But that is all I will ever get to do. Imagine.
She does not want to kiss me, let alone love me, and I'm just going to have to find a way to accept that.
There was a sudden loud banging noise on my door. "ChiChi?"
"Verde, please, help me. It hurts so much!"
I sprang up and went to my door. When I opened it I found ChiChi on the floor, clutching her stomach.
"What happened?" I asked, kneeling beside her.
"I-I'm bleeding Verde, I think my baby is in trouble."
Poor ChiChi, and what is to happen to Gohan Chan?! I should explain. Saiyan babies require more energy from their mother than human babies do, so having one is extremely difficult. Not only that, but with all the stress that ChiChi has had due to her separation from Goku, it has put a strain on the baby. So she had some bleeding, which could mean a miscarriage.
I hope you all enjoyed this chapter, and if you wished to be mentioned again, all you have to do is revew!!!
