Okay everyone this has nothing to do with my story dirty little secret but its just that I'm starting a new fanfic and would like to know if any of the readers out there thinks I should write it so please read so far what I have and review...Oh and flames are accepted thanks Angel-del-los-meurtos

Secret within a Secret

Main Characters

Nigel Uno (numbuh1) is

Taylor Roland-age both 10 and 17

-height 6'1"

Origin: England

"Captain of the Britannic"

Hoagie P. Gilligan Jr. (numbuh2) is

Maverk Kaleab-age both10 and 17

-height 6'2"

Origin: New England

"1st mate of the Britannic"

Kuki Sanban (numbuh3) is

Muse-age 16

-height 5'7"

Origin: GeheimNaibun

"Princess of Amazons"

Wallebee"Wally" Beatles (numbuh4) is

Jacques Chandler-age both 10 and 17

-height 5'9"

Origin: Australia

"1st mate of the Romania"

Abigail "Abby" Lincoln (numbuh5) is

Carmen Leo-age both 10 and 17

-height 5'8"

Origin: France

"Captain of the Romania"

Ships

The Britannic-sailor ship

The Romania-pirate ship

Regular Characters

Captain Sticky beard-

Captain Sweets

Parents-

Any of the parents of the knd I want to place in my story

Cree Lincoln-

Darbie Leo

Villain

Korbak (The Beast)

Prologue

"Captain Sweets you asked to see me" asked a 17 year old dark skinned girl named Carmen Leo. "Ahh, yes Carmen may you please come here" questioned the chubby red beard Captain Sweets. Carmen walked over to his bed and sat right beside him. "My dear Carmen, I have asked you to come so we can discuss the Book of Secrets" started Captain Sweets. "We have been guarding it ever since the day you came to me ha-ha you were very distrusting for a 10 year old girl back then" "Yes Captain, I was but you know my reasons" replied Carmen. "Ah yes, I do anyways what I was trying to say is that it has been many years and you still haven't destroyed the book" asked the Captain "You know Carmen tried but it can't be destroyed, you of all people should know how badly Carmen wants to destroy that book why it wasn't for me you wouldn't even know about the damn book" snapped Carmen. "Look here Carmen if you don't find away to be rid of the Book of Secrets we will never find the Treasure of Monte Carlos, why with that book still in its place the world and its secrets are hidden from us, its blank pages taunt us every time we reveal it from hiding its as if the book doesn't hold any thing but paper!" yelled the captain to the now frightened girl. "Captain Sweets as Carmen said earlier she tried but it can't be done. I owe that book the death of my family because of my selfish wanting to have them tell me everything, no more lies or excuses of how your to young to understand, but in truth I was" replied Carmen softly staring straight at the ground for fear to stare the captain in the eye. Captain Sweets seeing the sadness in the girl's expression decided to change the topic. "Carmen, you see the reason I've been pressuring you to destroy the Book of Secrets is so that I can find the Treasure of Monte Carlos before I die" "What!" exclaimed Carmen " Yes Carmen it seems as my days have been numbered and once I die I want you Carmen to take my place as captain" explained Captain Sweets. "Please don't think like that it'll be a while before that time" replied Carmen wanting to end the topic of death.

"Oh but how wrong you are my lovely Carmen for soon you shall be captain and then I can take my revenge Muwhahahaha...cough cough " chuckled the mysterious voice peering through a small pound down at the two pirates conversing.

"You may be right Carmen, now be off with you I need my rest" commanded Captain Sweets. "Yes sir" replied Carmen leaving the captain to his rest. The next day Captain Sweets did not get up he had died last night from pneumonia. He was buried deep beneath the crashing waves of the sea. After his burial ceremony just as he had asked Carmen was appointed Captain to his beloved ship the Romania.

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