Chapter 11, Raven's health and Speedy-gone-bad!
AlyRaven:
I could tell it was Speedy from the red hair.
Is Raven gonna be all right? I hope so.
UpDaTe SoOn!
Care: Wow, smart girl! (You) Raven is gonna be, trust me. Do you think I of all people would kill Rae? Of course not!
OddIsMyHomeboy:
AH I LOVE JESSEY MCARTNEY WHERE IS HE GO GET HIM! crazy mob of fan girls look for him oops my bad it was a song the girls attack me AH GET AWAY ow thats my hair! Ok well this so, so cool
Care: Uhh… Poor you… Thanks… Get out of the hospital soon!
FirefliesWish:
BB as a kitty...CUTE:3 hoorah! We gots us some Raven/Beast Boy bonding time! Well, Rae's in bad condition, but...you know what I mean! Say, I hate to break my smartness streak and not ask questions, but I gotta know: If Aqua Lad is the dad, who's the mom?
Care: I KNOW RIGHT? BONDING! Raven… Whaa… (Runs off crying) (Smirks) A lady named Katrina… Oh, and by the way, thanks for putting me in your "inspiring" list! I didn't know I inspired you! Here's a cookie and a hug! (Hugs)
OddIsMyHomeboy:
MEEP you need to finish! So you all now meep is my word and I give everyone out there copywrite.
Everyone: we don't want it!
Oh well i tried shrugs
Care: Oh well… nice try, and thanks!
Coolgirlc:
My sister and i like your story a lot. i hate the bbterra pairing. you are a great writer.
Care: Thanks! I loath it, too. Thanks, again…
Savi:
OH NO! Poor poor raven! I hope she gets better!
update soon!
Savi
Care: POOR RAE! Get well soon, Rae! Thanks. And while everyone's saying 'poor Rae'… What about Crow? She nearly committed suicide!
warprince2000:
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
Care: Thanks! I will update… wait I AM updating…
AnimationWickedRaven:
I can't wait to see what happens next! Is she alright or what!
Care: She's fine. Swear it; I would never hurt Rae-Rae!
Jedi Master:
Since you asked, Crow is my favorite.
Pleze make another chapter! Pleaze! This is the best story ever! Or atleast make a sequel
Care: Yay! (I put 2 of your reviews together) Thanks! Definite 'nother chap.
From: BlackGothFaerie
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Funny chapter again, especially you and your friends yelling at the end again, i love reading that part! This chapter was way too short though, i wanted it longer!
I am the wise one? Cool, people are bowing down to me, yay! Ok, no more bowing, and more typing! Haha, you told me how Aqualad died, that's not nice, mumbo is EVIL and i don't like him! (Not that i ever did in the first place).
Haha, Speedy is Terra's husband; never saw that one coming, cool!
Ok, please update soon!
Later, BlackGothFaerie
Care: You laugh a lot lol! Sorry, on my computer Microsoft word it's much longer. EVIL FANFICTION! My friends and I did actually type that. I'm very surprising! ( . ) Speaking of friends…
A/N: Yay! Whoa a lot of reviews!
Will: Hiya!
Me: Shut up!
Will: Whaa…
Me: Where are the others?
Will: Getting dressed.
Me: For what!
Will: You'll see!
Me: This is MY story! Tell meee!
Will: (hugs) No.
Me: Grr. (Kicks him were the sun don't shine) Umm… Sorry lil' bro!
Will: Evil… (Hurls in pain)
Me: Tell me what they're getting dressed for!
Will: After the chapter!
Me: (glares)
Will: No wonder Caroline doesn't own Teen Titans…
Me: WHAT WAS THAT!
Will: Oh, gotta go get dressed.
Me: FOR WHAT!
Beast Boy looked at the doctor impatiently. "Well?" he asked. The doctor smiled, "She's just a bit shocked. She got a bad hit. She's tough, she'll make it." Beast Boy smiled. 'Really?' he thought, 'YEEEEEEEES!' He smiled and looked at the poor Raven, but since she was going to be ok, he was going to leave her here and help out Robin, Star, Cyborg, and the mini-titans.
ILUVGARFEILDLOGANILUVGARFEILDLOGANILUVGARFEILDLOGANILUVGARFEILDLOGAN
Moonfire grabbed Robin's hand. He was scared, Robin could tell. 'Aww that's so cute,' Robin thought, because the mini-me version of him was scared. He remembered how he was scared; when his parents were nearly killed.
Just then a green bird flew in site. Bluebird and Crow clenched the wings, until they became hands. They wouldn't let go. 'Huh?' BB thought. "How… Where's mom?" Bluebird asked. "She's… with a doctor…" he replied. Crow looked at him, and their eyes met. "Dad… is she gonna be ok?" she asked. "Of course, she's your… never mind…" he replied. Of course, we all know he was about to say mom. But he didn't wanna be embarrassed.
"She's your mother, of course she'll be fine," Robin said. He was getting used to being a "father"… It was like he'd known these kids forever. Crow looked at Robin. "Mr. Grayson…" she said. She couldn't fight back the tears. She ran to hug Robin. Robin patted her, as she, Moonfire, and Robin hugged. Bluebird hugged her father. "Dad… You four stay here, we were sent to defeat Slade… er, Terra, Slade, and Speedy. Not you, mom already is hurt." Bluebird said.
Terra looked at them. She had caused this? She didn't want to… Or did she? She did want Robin and Beast Boy all to herself. Her children didn't treat her like that… "Feh! You're brats aren't any threat! Besides, you shouldn't have had them just to be killed by my children." Speedy-gone-bad said. (Ohhh, that would be a good screen name for somebody… lol) Terra looked at her hubby. Why had she gone bad again? Why had Speedy? Were her kids even bad?
The girl with long, red hair and the mask attacked Crow, Moon, and Robbie. Crow moved Moon and Robin just in time. "I got the girl!" Sonic shouted, as he flung a kick at her, hitting her in the nose. She started bleeding.
"I-I'm sorry…" she acted as if she just got out of a trance, "Did I hurt you?" she asked, grabbing Sonic's shoulders and turning him as if checking him. Crow levitated up to them. "Hello? You were just attacking us! What happened?" she asked. The girl looked at Crow, "Raven?" she looked back at Sonic, "Aqualad? No… You're their children!"
Terra shot a look at Speedy. "What's she doing?" "Ummm…. Maybe being in the past is affecting her… Or, uh…" Speedy said. "SPEEDY MITCHELL (made up a name… do Terra and Speedy have last names!) WHAT DID YOU DO WITH OUR DAUGHTER?" Terra shouted. "Well, you know when you heard that scream a few nights ago? Well, I told you she had a nightmare?" Speedy said. "Well… The scream was because of a murder. I killed her… she was crying, and that cannot be accepted! Plus, I had to make someone who looks sort of like her to pretend to be her by hypnotizing them… Sorry…" "YOU KILLED OUR DAUGHTER? (Breathes out) Our daughter is dead?" Terra slapped Speedy with all her might.
The boy with blonde hair looked at his "sister". "Terri?" the boy asked. "Who?" the girl asked. "No…" he said. He looked at Speedy. "You son of a…" he started. "CHILD!" Speedy shouted, "DON'T MAKE ME KILL Y-" Another slap. "Scar! Quickly, run! Run far away! Don't turn back!" Terri's voice came from… some where… "WTF!" Scar said. Terra jerked her head, "What?" "Terri…" "Terri" said. ".. Is trying to connect with you… (Whispers) run!" Scar jumped on a rock, and waved good-bye.
"So… When are we gonna fight?" Robin asked. "Stop," Crow whispered. "Azarath…" she started, "Metrion……… ZINTHOS!" she attacked Speedy. "Kill your own child? HOW DARE YOU!" Sonic shouted. He punched Speedy in the ribs. Speedy's eyes (not literally) popped out. He turned into ashes. "Well, one down," Cutefire looked. Terra smiled innocently. "Let her go," Raven said. "Thanks Rae," Terra said, "Sorry 'bout what Slade made me do…" (A/N: I only wrote that part because I figured out about an episode called 'The End parts 1, 2, and 3' and in one of those… Terra's stone shatters… You may like that news in the beginning, but when you really think about it… It's horrible… BB even goes down to his knees… I give her pity) "Eh… Truce?" Terra asked. "Sure," Crow said, shaking her hand, "Find Scar!" "I will!" Terra assured her.
"Mission complete!" Sunfire shouted. "Umm… We need to find Beast Girl…" Moonfire pointed out. "Which way did Slade go? Hmm. We need Beast Girl… Or…" Bluebird paused and smiled at BB, "Even better…"
A/N: What is BlueB up to? Hmm…
Will: Tada!
Me: (Sees Will dressed as Moonfire, Mckeithan dressed as BG, Sisi dressed as Bluebird, Matthew dressed as Sunfire, and Chris dressed as Sonic.) W... Wow! Ya'll did this 'cause of my fanfiction?
Chris: Yup! We did! From scratch! Thanks for covering us, Will.
Will: No problem.
Me: Heh, sorry about kicking you, bro…
Will: S'ok.
Sisi and Mckeithan: (Grab me and dress me as Crow)
Me: Umn… Thanks… But ya'll know the pairings… Don't you…?
Will: (Puts arm around Mckeithan.) Yup!
Mckeithan: (Blushes slightly)
Sisi: Ahh! Not Matthew! Caroline wanna trade?
Me: Umn… I don't want Matthew…
Matthew: Whaa!
Sisi: Oh… fine!
Matthew: Yay!
Chris: (Puts arm around me)
Me: (Hides face in shame and backs away like I don't know them.)
Will: See all of you next time!