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m: (1) yeah, he's crazy. but then again, aren't we all? (2) there will be a bit more raymariah but i'm going to start focusing on kaimariah. I DO like that pairing, it's just that I am a die-hard Kai fan. (3) i know Mariah isnot like that. but... eh.She's confused. hormones I AM SO SORRY but this WILL end kaimariah (eventually). I totally agree. I ABSOLUTELY HATE RAY/KAI. I have read Galux Kitty's work and many other Ray/Mariah stories. For example: Feline Instincts by Aquarius Galuxy is a complete RayMariah. I am thinking of writing a RayMariah fic but you must understand that i am focused on this for the moment and it will end KaiMariah. Sorry to put you off it. But you can expect a RayMariah fic from me shortly after this is finished. (However, i am also planning to write an X men fic so there may be a delay). Sorry! (4) As i have said before: It shall end KaiMariah. Sorry. Good suggestion. (5) I wouldn't want you to change your opinion. That's why everyone has free will. Interesting? Hm, i guess so. Say, do you know any good RayMariah stories? I've read quite a lot but there's LOADS on LOADS! I'm just warning you, it won't end RayMariah. I hate to give the ending away but it SHALL end KaiMariah but there will be RayMariah friendship. i love both couples but i love kaimariah a teeny eeny bit more. I hope you continue to read! WOW! Look how long the response is!
Lyrikkal: Thanks for the info. In this story, let's just pretend that he kept Black Dranzer. You know, just for fun. -'
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Last time: Ray went through 'Stages of Realisation' over Mariah being kidnapped and Kai confessed about having weird dreams that came true but left out the part of him kissing Mariah. Kai phoned Tyson. Kai phoned Max.
Chapter six: A Lonely Prisoner
Someone walked in and Mariah struggled to look up. Food was put down but it smelt off and overcooked.
Her nose wrinkled in distaste.
"I can get you a platter of milk if you'd prefer, little kitty."
She recognised that voice. Mariah looked up and her eyes widened when she saw whom it was.
"Tala?" Mariah asked. What did Tala want with her?
He smirked. "Glad you remember me."
"What do you want? Why am I chained up? Where am I? How…"
"You talk too much."
"I have a right to know, you jerk!"
"Just be a good little kitty and shut up."
"I'm not going to shut up until you tell me what's going on!"
The red head ignored her and started to walk away. He paused just before he went to open the door. He then turned to her and leant against the door.
"Some kiss you had with Kai, eh? I wonder how your boyfriend would feel if he found out…" Tala said with a smirk.
Mariah's eyes and mouth widened then she frowned and looked away. "It's none of your business."
"Ray, wasn't it?"
"Shut up, Tala."
"Aw, have I hit a sore spot? I never thought I'd see the day when the great Kai would kiss a pink haired bimbo."
"I'm not a pink haired bimbo you pasty faced genetically altered freak!"
Tala's smirk changed into a frown.
"You should really be careful about what you say around here. Not all of the guys here are as lenient as I am."
"Oh thank you, merciful Tala." She said sarcastically.
"So how did you get him to kiss you? Steal his blade? Threaten to do a makeover on him? Threaten to die his hair pink?"
She scowled. "I did not do anything. Kai and I were having an argument… then he just kissed me."
"And then you kissed back."
Mariah hung her head in shame. "I didn't mean to do that to Ray. It was just a mistake. Just a spur of the moment…"
"Oh really?"
"Go away Tala!" she glared at him.
Tala shrugged his shoulders. He took out a key and starting unlocking her handcuffs.
"You're freeing me?"
"Tch, you wish. You expect me to feed you? I'll be back in twenty minutes. Don't bother trying to escape. Your feet are still chained up."
He walked away and locked the door behind him. Mariah checked her pockets and saw that her beyblade, ripcord and launcher had been removed.
This is just so surreal. I can't believe this is happening. I'm being held captive and I don't even know why. Damn! Tala didn't even answer my questions! I'll force him to when he comes back.
Stupid red head, pasty faced, guinea pig jerk.
Mariah poked at the food.
That's disgusting. It looks raw but smells burnt.
She looked around for her knife and fork.
Great. And nothing to eat it with.
She picked up a piece of the 'meat' (Mariah wasn't sure what it was), put it in her mouth and began to chew. She gagged then spat it out.
It tasted like sick! She wanted to go home and eat something that Ray made for her. She wanted to wake up and realise she was still on that bench. She wanted it to be like Kai had never kissed her and Mariah had never kissed back. Better yet, she wanted to wake up in a bed next to Ray…
Or even Kai…
She told the little voice to shut up. It was wrong. She loved Ray, not Kai.
Sure you do.
She did love Ray!
Soon you'll have to decide.
She had already decided. She had decided Kai was a mistake. Kai had to be a mistake, right? It had to be.
Think back, did it feel like a mistake?
It felt like a mistake, yep. It was wrong.
Liar. Just because it was wrong doesn't mean it was a mistake. Some things can be for the best. It's fate.
It wasn't fate. Her and Ray were destined for each other. She admitted though, the kiss with Kai was nice.
More like perfect.
It didn't matter now. She was here and she didn't have either of them with her to hold or anyone of them to comfort her.
She was all alone.
A lonely prisoner.
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Ok, ok, that was a bit shorter than my other chapters but my friend stayed round my house for the weekend and she's not really a Beyblade fan. She only likes X Men Evo, Teen Titans and Xiaolin Showdown. Eh, she doesn't know what she's missing.
BEYBLADE ROCKS!
Next chapter: Parcel for Kai
Quote from me: May your lives be like toilet paper. Long and useful.
