Disclaimer: I don't know why we have to have disclaimers, we know if the story is on fan fiction, then it's a story not owned by you… Anyways, I don't own X-Men in anyway… I own a book about them, I know heaps of X-Men trivia now...
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Dawn looked up from her uncle's shoulder to see Shock in the doorway. He seemed to be glaring at her uncle. Shrugging it off, she smiled and pulled David over to him.
"Uncle David, this is my boyfriend, Shock. Shock, meet Uncle David." She announced with a large grin. Shock frowned and coldly shook David's hand.
"Hello, Shock, it's nice to meet you," David said, a warm smile on his face. Shock simply glared at him. Dawn blinked. Shock was acting odd.
"Nice to meet you. Dawn, could I please speak to you outside?" Shock asked. Dawn looked sadly back at David. She didn't want to leave him at the moment, incase he left her. David smiled warmly to her.
"Go on, I'll be right here." David said, patting her shoulder. Shock took Dawn's arm and led outside of the sitting room.
"Dawn, that's not who you think it is." he said, hurriedly. Dawn frowned. "What do you mean?" she asked, a little hurt at Shock's accusation.
"His eyes. They aren't his eyes." he said. Dawn looked at him as if he was crazy.
"You have to believe me," he pleaded. Dawn shook her head.
"You just don't want me to be with him because you don't believe he's really my uncle." Dawn looked into his eyes, "I have one chance of family, and you want to ruin it". Shock franticly shook his head and grabbed her hands.
"I want the best for you, Dawn. But, this isn't your uncle. Why won't you believe me?". Dawn took her hands back.
"You have a family, you know what it's liked to be loved," tears slid down Dawn's face, "I've never had the feeling of home. I don't care if he isn't really my uncle! I just want someone to be my family." she said, choking back a sob.
Shock couldn't believe she wasn't listening to him.
"You know I love you Dawn," he said. Shock's face got a cold edge to it, "I don't know why you're acting like this." Dawn bravely looked into the face of Shock.
"I want to be with my only family now, Shock," she said firmly. Shock glared at her.
"I'd better go then"
"I suppose you should"
"See ya"
"Goodbye". With that, Shock stalked away with his shoulders hunched over. Dawn walked back into the bright room into the arms of her Uncle.
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'Uncle David' listened to their argument through the door. He grinned evily. 'This was too easy.' he thought.
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I'm sorry I didn't write more sooner. I kinda got annoyed at a flamey/fact I got… I've never gotten a flame before, so, meh.
Anyways…to 'Lori', the person who sent me the flamy-thing… I'm not really focusing on the other X-Men because I don't really like them much. At the start of this story, I wasn't into X-Men much, but now that I've learnt about it, I absolutely adore it. But, I haven't chosen a favourite X-Men to focus on, and I like bringing new character into it. As to the Degrassi Junior High thing. I have learnt that teenage issues sell big time. Like in Australia's popular soap opera 'Neighbours'. It shows a large teenage type of content, and what they go through. Also, I like sticking in random people, I write randomly, so you'd kind of expect me to put some random people in there. They might not be part of the story, but I can re-introduce them.. or something. Yes, Dawn might be a Mary-Sue. But who cares? She's way soft than others I've read. Also, I'm aloud to have vengeance against people I don't like. I think the best way to annoy someone is write a bad part for them in a Fan Fiction. If you don't like my story, don't read it. Most of this story is kind of 'spur of the moment' and I was a really bad writer when I started. (I kinda suck now, too). I'm sorry if I'm sounding mean. You'll probably report me for abuse. I'm just not used to getting flamey/facts.
To my other readers. I've had heaps of work to do, its summer and I'm lazy. I'm trying to get inspiration, so hang in there for more chapters!
Special thanks to Smiley Face3, she helped with the chapter. Like all the others…
To MutantFreeK: I know valley girls don't talk like that. Nicole and her group are evil teeny-boppers. They kinda represent the popular people I find in Perth. Sorry if I offended you in any way.
