Yami Pandora: Well Cloaked Fox. Here's my reply to your review.
1, the reason fan fiction is called fan fiction is because we can change what ever friggin details we want, obviously it is stupid if you change everything, but did I change everything? No, I didn't I changed a few details about the Millennium Items and the fact that Yugi can read English, if you have a problem with changing small things, tough.
2, I don't expect Yugi to come running to Hogwarts and drop everything. If you had bothered to wait for following chapters you would know this, but obviously you're too dense for that.
3, If I want my 'Mary Sue' in there, I friggin well will have her in there, again pointing to the FAN FICTION part of the website, people can add what ever new character they like.
4, Enma is not intended to help defeat Voldemort. She's there because I want her there and, again, if you have a problem with that, tough.
5, One stupid negative review isn't going to discourage me, even 100 negative reviews aren't going to. In fact, they will just encourage me to write just to piss people off. I'm doing this for the hell of it, not to please some idiot people who don't like changes. Besides, I don't care what people think of me.
6, I am perfectly aware that I am a bitch, I don't need single brain celled people to tell me, I worked it out myself, unlike some people, I have a little thing called intelligence.
Well, now I've got that out my system, I'll continue HOW I FRIGGIN WANT TO CONTINUE and if anyone has a problem with that, well… I don't really give a shit.
Chapter 2
(Last Time)
The others were going to have a shock, as they were only to bring one teenager back and instead they had found a second.
(This Time)
(Grimmauld Place)
"Harry, this maybe a bit of a shock to you, and we don't want you to get mad…" Mr Weasley said quickly, looking nervously at Harry. Harry rolled his eyes.
"What? I'm going to flip worse if you don't tell me" he said. Enma watched silently.
"Well, we have a few Slytherin students he…" Remus began.
"WHAT? WHY DO YOU HAVE THEM HERE?" Harry yelled. This drew the attention of everyone else in the house, and it disturbed a particular painting that was currently the bane of everyone's lives. "Really Harry, what is all the yelling for?" asked Mrs Weasley, with a frown on her face and her wand in hand.
"What are the Slytherins doing here?" Harry asked calmly this time, too calmly. Everyone knew he would explode once he found out exactly which Slytherins were there.
"They are here because they do not wish to become Deatheaters. They sought out Professor Dumbledore's help and he brought them here" Mrs Weasley explained patiently.
"Don't you think they could be spying?" Harry asked.
"What is it with boys? Both Ginny and I are fine with it and have given them another chance, but you, Ron and the twins have literally exploded" said a new voice. Harry looked over to see Hermione holding a new book. She had a frown on her face, but he noticed that she had physically matured since the last time he had seen her (no, he's not interested in her that way). Ron snorted.
"You really forgive people who tormented us for five years, called you Mudblood and insulted all your friends? Yes, I'd call that sane" he muttered sarcastically. Mr Weasley looked nervously at everyone.
"Well, let's go into the kitchen, eh? We'll explain everything in there" he said. They all, including Enma, made their way into the kitchen and sat down around the table. Mrs Weasley, noticing her for the first time said "who are you and what are you doing here?"
"My name is Enma Okami, and I have come to enhance my magical abilities" Enma said calmly, ignoring all the weird looks she was receiving because of her clothing.
"But… you could be related to You Know Who, he has red eyes too" Ron stuttered. Enma turned her intense gaze to him and replied
"No, I do not know who, and I couldn't be related to him or her if I did because all my relatives are dead" she said without emotion. "And I am assuming that this person is English?" she continued. At everyone's nod she spoke again "there is another reason I can not be related to him. I am pure Egyptian". The Weasleys looked at her.
"You're from Egypt? Cool. We went there three years ago on holiday" said Ginny. Harry was beginning to get impatient.
"Can we get back to the original conversation? How do you know that the Slytherins aren't spying on us?" he asked angrily.
"Because we offered to have the Veritaserum used on us" came a horribly familiar voice. Harry turned to see Draco Malfoy stood at the kitchen door. There was something different about him though. He didn't seem to have his usual cocky attitude.
"WHAT THE HELL IS HE DOING HERE?" Harry yelled.
"He's one of those who have converted to our side, Harry" Hermione said calmly. Harry stared at her as though she had lost her mind.
"Hermione… think of everything he's done. How can you trust him?" Harry said, completely bewildered.
"Oh, Harry grow up. Everyone deserves a second chance, remember Snape?" Hermione snapped. Harry decided to drop the subject there and pushed his way past Draco to take his things to his and Ron's room, Ron soon following. Loud footsteps were heard going upstairs, and then a loud SLAM of a door, disturbing Mrs Black's portrait again. "MUDBLOODS, BLOOD TRAITORS, FILTH…" was the yell heard from the painting.
"I really wish we could be rid of that picture" Hermione said shaking her head. "Mrs Weasley? You were telling us about some new transfer students?" Hermione inquired.
"Oh yes, I completely forgot. There are four of them, three coming in from Japan and one from Egypt. Professor Dumbledore is going to be meeting them in a few hours and bringing them over here once they agree to come. The headmaster said it would be a real challenge to get one of them to come, he did some background information o them" Mrs Weasley said.
"Wow, four of them, from Egypt and Japan? I wonder if they could tell us about life in their country" Hermione said excitedly.
"Maybe. It would be interesting… but I wonder why they're coming in the first place" Draco said.
"I dunno, maybe it has something to do with Voldemort" Hermione said, her excitement wearing off, and becoming concern for the danger the exchange students may be in.
(In Domino)
Yugi was walking down the street, heading for the clock tower to meet this Dumbledore guy. 'I wonder of all this is true, and if there are others I know who are going' he thought. Yami was in his spiritual form, floating next to him. He also wanted to see this 'wizard'. Yugi. I'm feeling that magic nearby, but it's stronger now he sent through the mental link. Yugi stopped and looked at Yami. What? So that letter was genuine Yugi sent back. He continued walking, curiosity about this new magic at its peak. He sat down on a bench while he waited for someone who looked wizard-like. He saw Ryou Bakura walking towards him, a strangely familiar letter in his hand. He stood up and walked over to Ryou. "So, you got a letter too?" he asked, bringing his own folded letter from his pocket. Ryou looked at his letter then at Yugi's.
"I guess so. Think it's genuine?"
"Well, Yami sensed magic coming from it, not Shadow magic, but still, it was magic" Yugi replied. Ryou nodded, than both of them sat quietly on the bench waiting for Dumbledore to arrive. A loud cracking noise was heard which made Yugi and Ryou jump. They turned and saw a strange old man stood right next to them. "Where did you come from?" Ryou asked nervously. The old man's blue eyes twinkled and he smiled at Ryou and Yugi. "I am Albus Dumbledore, headmaster of Hogwarts" he said. He looked around. He saw the two Yami's but made no indication that he had noticed them. "It appears that one of you is late" he continued. Ryou and Yugi were shocked.
"There is someone else in Domino who has magic? Who is it?" Yugi asked puzzlement evident on his face. He thought that those picked for Hogwarts were connected to the Millennium Items.
"Oh, no not you nerds" a cold voice answered Yugi's question. Seto Kaiba walked up to them. "If I knew you were going to be here, I would never have come".
"You're coming too, Kaiba?" Yugi asked in shock. Seto was not one to waste his time with 'such nonsense'.
"I only came to keep Mokuba happy, but this is going to be a waste of time, I can tell" Seto sneered. Yugi rolled his eyes. Typical Kaiba response. How can you like this guy Yami? He sent through the link. A cough prevented Yugi from listening to Yami's reply.
"Well, I'd better tell you why you're here. We have just discovered you to have magic, and very powerful magic at that. Because of the power you possess, you are also in danger. A dark wizard by the name of Voldemort is seeking you, something about seven golden items. Do you know anything about this?" Dumbledore said, looking at the puzzle around Yugi's neck. Ryou and Yugi shared a glance. Think we should trust him Yami? Yugi sent through the link. I don't see why not. I don't feel anything bad around him Yami sent back. Dumbledore noticed the blank look on Yugi's face and waited patiently for him to answer his question. When Yugi snapped out of his trance, he turned to Dumbledore and said "We do know about the seven items this Voldemort is after. They are called the Millennium Items, and they house powerful ancient Egyptian magic. Each item has its own ability, and if they are controlled by the wrong person, they can cause some of the greatest devastation known to man. I possess one of the items, the Millennium Puzzle. This item houses the spirit of an Ancient Egyptian Pharaoh, named Yami. You may not be able to see him, but he is stood right next to me now".
"Don't worry, I can see both spirits. How about you Ryou, what is your connection in this?" Dumbledore said.
"Well… I possess the Millennium Ring. I also have possession of the Millennium Eye. The ring also houses a spirit, an Ancient Egyptian tomb robber named Bakura" Ryou said nervously.
"And do you know who possesses the other five?" Dumbledore asked.
"Yes. Ishizu Ishtar has the Millennium Necklace, Marik Ishtar has the Millennium Rod and Shadi possesses the Millennium Key and the Millennium Scales" Yugi said.
"Ishizu and Marik I know about. Who is this Shadi?" Dumbledore asked.
Shadi is some idiot spirit that pops up at the most unexpected times with some cryptic message. He was a priest in Ancient Egypt" said Bakura, deciding to voice his opinion on the matter. Ryou sweat dropped.
"Please excuse Bakura. He doesn't have the best manners" he said.
"That's alright. I am the headmaster of a school, I am used to the way young people speak" said Dumbledore. He had clearly forgotten that they were spirits of Ancient Egypt, and both Bakura and Yami were outraged.
"Young people? Young people? We are 5000 years older than you" Yami said, a look of indignation his face.
"Can it Pharaoh, none of us care how old you are" Seto snapped. Yami didn't say anything, but he gave him his best death glare. Seto obviously ignored it though. Dumbledore watched them in amusement.
"Well, I've told you why you should come to Hogwarts, it is now up to you if you're going to come or not. I will return same time tomorrow for your answer. Do not tell any of your friends, family only" Dumbledore said, and with a loud crack, he disappeared. All three teenagers blinked. The only person they had seen that could disappear like that was dead! "I guess this whole thing isn't as much nonsense as I thought it would be" Seto said. Ryou and Yugi nodded.
"So, Kaiba, Ryou. Are you two going to go?" Yugi asked.
"I would like to, but what about school, and our friends? What would we tell them?" Ryou asked, a frown on his face.
"You could just tell them you're going to a boarding school in England" Seto said rolling his eyes.
"Are you coming Kaiba?" Yugi asked again.
"I have a company and a little brother to take care of. You really think I will be able to leave either one for ten months?" Seto asked.
"Point. But Mokuba's 12 now, and you have loads of people to take care of the company" Yugi shot back.
"Whatever" Seto said and walked towards Kaiba Corp.
"That guy has an attitude problem" Bakura said.
"And you don't?" Yami countered.
"Aww, little Pharaoh have a crush on the Priest?" Bakura teased. Yami blushed and retreated to his soul room, while Ryou and Yugi sweat dropped. Would those two ever stop fighting? Not likely.
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