Ok so the first part was crap I understand so I have thrown out the idea of typing like dear sweet Blunk so I'm going on with the story I am changing the plot slightly hope you all like it.

The romance may be awhile but look for clues!

Part 2

Blunk pov.

Ok I have been on Earth for a few days. And I'm not missing my 'home' I have been living in a big pot of good food and things to trade. The smells are amazing things like love, friendship and joy are strong not like back there. (Shudder)

I decided to go find a portal to trade so I gather some of the things in the pot and search for a portal. It doesn't take to long to find one I jump though and arrive at a town that is shadowed by the castle of prince Phobos. I start to work the crowds with not much luck.

I had been in the town for like 2 hours when I see the guardians talking to a man they get clocks(sp) from the man. I decided to follow them they meet up with Caleb and go into the castle I hear them talking about the key I took a few days ago.

Caleb and the girls couldn't find it I told them I had it Caleb and Will got very angry at me so I gave them the key and ran but I didn't run far. I was still following them but all I could hear was the yells and bangs from the fight. I got scared and ran. I found a portal and went though it back to earth.

Normal pov.

A few hours later Hay Lin was taking out the trash and found Blunk. She yelled at him

"You reek Blunk get out of the dumpster before you stink the place out!"

Blunk ran round the corner and saw Caleb he creped in an hide behind a box. He heard Caleb muttering how he had to find a way to get to Meridian Blunk stuck his head out from behind the box and said

"Blunk can help Caleb."

"And how can you help you pest!"

"Blunk can smell things.."

"Just like a dog"

"Blunk can smell portals for Caleb"

That got Caleb's attention and that was the first step in the partnership of Caleb and Blunk.

And so Blunk would smell the portals out and then Caleb could sneak in to Meridian to help the rebels defeat Phobos.

Unfortunately Blunk's smell was still a problem so the girls would try to get Blunk to take a bath but that's for next time!

How was that any better? Read and review to it and tell me what I can do better!