Anyways!
i will actually do some review responses!
darkshadow- i remember i asked you about what it meant, but anyways! thanks! your review means alot! but i think i told you that...lol!
Angel452- im not giving away anything! i hope this was soon enough...eh heh...
In True Meanings- you've come back! ive lost a bunch of people...either that or they're running behind...:sniffles: you're the only one thats come back...:hugs: thanks! it means im doing good! and as soon as i get the scanner working, ill send one copy to you! his tongue isnt sticking uot, as i said, but hes pouting!
jasmine3883- eh heh...believe me...im working on it! and im sorry that im killing you...but...its killing me too. i dont know how its gonna turn out...i have an idea, but we all know to never plan things...theyll never go your way...lol
skye- i appreciate both reviews! it makes me happy that someone new has come along! This chapter is gonna be funny! all about nagira and his...odd ways...lol!
AAOTD-I told In True Meanings that they were the only one to come back, but then i got your review, and i smiled! Then i got Ayjah's and that made me even happier! cuz you guys, for some reason, stick out most in my mind! lol!...and unfortunately, im still trying to find a spot to put my (also unfortunately) large scanner... i wanna show you! cuz im proud of it!...but unless i can get rid of this crap surrounding this desk...in other words...you may have to wait for just a moment longer before seeing...sorry! . :bows repetitively: forgive this one!
Ayjah- yay! you read it!...i know its late again, but im sorry!...and this time, i have no excuse...:cries: i hope youll forgive me too! just think of it this way...it wasnt NEARLY as long as the wait was last time! lol! and since i dont feel like explaining about the amon pic again, just check AAOTD's response...lol! (i think i elaborated too much, dont you?) anyway! i MEANT to leave you hangin like that! lol! its practically my job to upset people with hanging chapters! lol! pssh! geez...what else did you expect?lol! thanks! i actually got a review complaining about everything...and they only read the first chapter...oh well! i thought it was funny my self...cuz i have 95 other reviews that state other wise! lol oh well! i think this is long enough! and thank you for the congrats!
anonymous but very interested- thanks! you wont know what happens to Amon and Robin next, but you WILL see Nagira in action!
Meeko Melodie- thank you! ill try to keep it up!
Kagome M.K- im sure this wasnt as soon as you hoped, but atleast its something! ;
Hermoniezclone- what do you mean"come back"? it never left! lol! j/k...that was lame...lol! im glad i make you happy! that makes me happy! it means im doing something right!...i dont know if i should tease you or not on the kissing thing...lol! i should prbably leave a scene blank just to spite you! lol! i wouldnt do that! XP not my thing, ya know! lol i suppose i could humor you and say that they will kiss SOMETIME...i just dont know when...it might even be the next time i show them...O.o...you never know...
sennai- then here you go! no more waiting for chappie 8! now just to worry about 9...lol XD
melodie- awwe! i got kisses! i would never dream of leaving this undone...it just takes me a while to get things done the way i want them to! lol
Seashah- you needn't worry, my dear! cuz im here! lol...(wow...that sounded REALLY friggin dumb...) ill try re-working the last chapter, so dont worry! at some point, it should be better than before!
katspegussaus-then this chapter shall relieve you of any tension! so dont worry!
(chapter 8! ive hit eight! yay-yuh!)
He walked down the white halls, looking down at the white floors, then up at the white ceilings...
Then he saw a group nurses standing at a desk. All were hot babes. Long legs, not really skinny, but thin, bodies.
Some were tan, some were not.
All had different hair styles, ranging from long and braided to short and layered.
He continued walking towards them, then stopped once he was in the middle of the group. He was doing good...until he opened his mouth.
" Oh man...I see white everywhere, and I'm surrounded by beautiful women. I have surely died and gone to heaven. Where are your wings? And your halos? Or did you just lose them thinking of me?"
He looked around him, a large cat-like grin on face. All the beauties rolled their eyes, and walked in different directions to get away from him.
He watched what happened, and his grin faded.
" What? Was it something I said? Wait!"
All of them kept walking, clipboards in hand.
" Bleh! You were all to uptight for the Great Nagira anyway! Hmph..."
He continued walking down the white halls, until he came up to the room that Robin was staying in.
' I wonder what they're talking about...'
He leaned his ear against the door, planning to listen in, but a doctor came up to him.
" May I ask what you're doing out in this hall, sir?"
Nagira cringed. Caught.
" Umm...I was...just listening to them, sir. My brother is in there with his hopefully new girlfriend. Or atleast she'd better be before I get back in there."
The doctor looked at him, scrutinizing him. Nagira just looked the other way. He hated being watched so closely. Amon had better make this up to him. His services weren't for free, ya know? He had to work to get Robin to think of a gift for Amon (granted the girl took his message the completely wrong way!), and he was now working. Giving them space to work out their problems. And while they were mentally ravishing each other with love, he was being watched by a doctor who looked like he had just come from Mars.
He had big, bubbly eyes, with a fishy mouth, and monkey ears. Hardly no hair resided on his shiny head. His skin hung off him like drapes. Nagira was certain you could probably count the man's ribs. The nose on the man's face could pass for a beak! (A/N: think of Yubaba's nose from Spirited Away)
He looked at the doctor and just went, " Buhh!" (A/N: think of Hank Hill...lol)
" I beg your pardon?"
" I said, ' Buhh!'! Meaning, ' Egad! I MUST turn away!'...Buh!" Nagira stated as though it were the most obvious thing ever.
The doctor began to stutter with his wording, then after giving up, he gave a ' Hmph!' and turned away, walking briskly back to the office on the floor.
Nagira just watched in amusement. Shrugging his shoulders, he turned back to the door that was hiding his brother and friend. He leaned down, holding his ear against the door, trying to understand what they were talking about.
Damnit. Amon must know that he was there. He was making sure to speak in low tones. Low enough that he couldn't understand what they were saying.
Damn him...Amon took away his only form of entertainment in this White Hell Hole.
(chapter end)
i know...short...but i figured you guys would want a bit of comical relief from all the amon/robin drama... and Nagira seemed like the perfect comical outlet...dontcha think? lol!
I would put up some review responses, but my AOL is a piece of shit right now... --...so angry! i havent been able to read for...4 days...:growls: im probably at some other place, updating this, cuz AOL...is being a crack head...:O! anyways! I will say:
THANK YOU! XD! you make me happy! and to see that some of you have come back to me! that makes me happy! you all are so cool! so when i get my scanner hooked up, ill try to send you a pic of the amon i did! lol! (ive been saying that for about...half a year now...lol!)