DMWM: OK PEOPLE. I'M ONLY HUMAN. PLEASE DON'T YELL AT ME. I'LL DO IT RIGHT THIS TIME.! The remake of chapter five next week. Please stop with the angry review/ email, this is my first fan fic. Why you readers love my art work.

Runs toward the right dark corner crying her/his eyes out. Racking back and forth, Serena and the girls look at their friend and face toward the readers. Serena folded her arm and look at everyone.Ami, Lita, Mina and Rie have a sweat drop behind their heads.

Serena: Geezz, I never knew I have just great fans. Well anyway, Please give DMWM some credit for this creative story.

Rie: Yeah, listen to meatball head. DMWM is trying her/his hardest. Everyone make mistake so don't take it out on her/his.

Lita: Rie stop teasing her, you don't want her to cry now do you?

Rie: I'm just agreeing with her. Half the reader started to get impatience with her/him.

Ami: Well I could understand, since she/he not writing the story good enough and he/she is not checking for any error on his/her writing. But I could see that he/she is trying. If this keep up then he/she will lose reader fast.

Mina: Who cares if she/he have some grammar error, some of her reader love it so far but I have to say, I want this story to go little bit faster and more longer.

Serena: Well anyway, I wonder what happen to Luna?

DMWM: Serena, she will appear in Chapter six.

Serena: Ok and what about what happen in chapter four huh. In fact what the heck is going on with this secreat meeting going on behind my back.

All the girls: huh….can't tell you Serena.

Serena started to cry and ran around the girl and run toward DMWM

Serena: What will happen to me and why do I have to transform into a freak for.

DMWM: It is part of the story Serena. Im sorry already..god, very soon I will delete this ….everyone is making me angry.

Rie: Then stop f-ing it up already and correct it.

DMWM: Rie…Go (BLUP) yourself and stop messing with me. This is my first fan fic after all. I can not help it if..

Rie: Oh. Yes you can damnit. Stop acting like Serena on crack and do chapter five correct this time. I know and everyone else know that you can do a lot better with chapter five and near future chapter. So stop being a lazy ass and correct this chapter. If not this then the up coming chapters then.

Serena ran next to DMWM in the dark corner and started to cry.

Serena: Rie your mean

Rie: Oh shut up Meat ball head

Litawalk toward Serena and DMWM. Bending down, she wraps her arms around DMWM and start rocking DMWM back and forth. DMWM continue to cry on Lita green blazer shirt.

Lita: calm down DMWM, This is not the end of the world. But Rie do have a point. Just try your best next time you submit your new chapter.Have someone double check your grammar and spelling and rewrite it if you think that something is wrong with it the first, second, or nine times. Submit it when your ready. Do not let anybody tell you that your story is BS. If some of the readers have a problem with it then, that is there problem not your DMWM. Just look at it as an ,encouragement to continue and improve your writing.in every chapter. Don't let it get to you ok.

DMWM: Your right Lita, I should not cry cuz of what one person type to me. This is my story and I can do whatever I want with it. Yes there will be some grammar mistakes on it but so what, other reviers/ readers who liked it have not complain about it. Some even sent some review saying that they like it and want me to continue with the next chapter. But I wll delete chapter five and do it again. This time it will be perfect just like chapter one. If not perfect then great then. Thank you.